Who Asked Her to Be an NPC?

No, I can't stand it anymore. I can't bear to add points for all constitutions. The protagonist seems to "know" that he will have the skills and career of a supermodel in the future. He is mind-controlled because of low inspiration. He relies on upgrading on the spot to win. Then he turns around and adds constitution again. It's numb. It's okay to set the protagonist's constitution to be afraid of death. Strength has no damage, low inspiration is controlled, and I wrote a bunch of reasons why I need to use constitution. The problem is that in other games, it is because of the basic game mechanism. It is no problem to add points like that, but your game is obviously not good. Forget about other things, think about it, when you usually play games, you only encounter a boss with high blood volume, low other attack power and low agility, and it is a legal system boss. I am afraid you will just laugh, okay. A good sandbag template I really don't understand why the author would add points for all constitutions. I think the books on your cat are quite normal. Even if you add points for full strength, full agility, and full inspiration, it is better than all constitutions. Han Da Mechanic relies on specialties and talents to replenish his constitution. If you are good, add all points to add constitution, and rely on supermodel skills to compensate for damage The protagonist obviously does not have the prophetic advantage, but he is still confident in himself. By adding some extra points against the sky, I am very confident that I will have supermodel skills behind me to make up for my shortcomings. From the author's point of view, it is okay, but from the reader's point of view, it is too outrageous Don't mention the later performance, I can't accept it from the beginning when the protagonist wants to be a turtle, oh no, not a turtle yet, md I can't even think of any creatures in nature that only have high blood volume and low others. Give up, give up

There are still some problems with this book. Regardless of the subject matter and world view, some problems are more obvious. 1. Personality. So far, the character creation is very stereotyped, and the player characterization is almost zero. Anya only gives people the impression of a little follower. Yulia and Old Nissen are okay, but the villain is a mess. 2. Rhythm issue. Although Zuyuanxing is a novice village, the author still spent a lot of pen and ink. However, compared with the previous book, there is less interstellar foreshadowing and foreshadowing, as well as the creation of characters and the reasonable development of the plot. There are obviously a lot of words, but it still feels like the plot is very urgent - the reason is that the steps are too big. As a data flow novel, this book's combat power performance and character improvement depend entirely on data performance. However, this book has a very serious problem, which is the data expansion in Novice Village, causing Bai Fu's level and combat power to expand. The author set up enemies one by one, all of which seemed very powerful and threatening to Bai Fu. However, after defeating Bai Fu, Bai Fu became the most powerful one. There were many plot points that could be buried and the plot could be developed, and the characters were forced to be abandoned as their strength rapidly increased. "Poverty", which is also a data stream, has done a good job. Although it starts high and ends low, the early development is indeed exquisite. The above two issues are the biggest problems in this book so far. I don't know how many chapters the author wants to write in Novice Village, but I feel that the plot is fast, and I feel that it will take a while to read the progress of the main mission, the ancestral star intelligence. The high probability will be over 20% and then the reward will be settled directly. Then several major forces signed an agreement or were directly led by the Silent Court to jointly fund the restart of the spacecraft to the stars. Although there is a little introduction to the interstellar forces at present, it is still not enough. There is a high probability that you will find a translation of the alien's notes to get a general overview, but this will still damage the previous perception.

#Written at the front: There are not many articles about reborn NPCs, and even less well-written ones. There is a risk in posting a book review at Qidian, and that is the risk of being deleted. But according to my experience, it is less likely to be deleted in the book review area for newcomers, so I am here. Talking about the current progress, I just read Chapter 5 of the paid chapters, so my evaluation is only for the first 100,000 words. # Speaking of the novels about the rebirth of the online game world, I remember the first online game I watched by Martian Mouse from Enemitai. At that time, this person and the other two who also wrote invincible novels were called the three phantom gods of invincible novels, because there were very few people who wrote invincible genres in the early days, and many of them liked to counterattack and work hard. Of course, now the invincible flow is all over the streets, and the online literature has finally evolved to the legendary stage of 999 for one sword. The current Qidian. Com articles are based on the Invincible articles. In order to write some new tricks, I like to add some exciting condiments to them. Dihua style is one of them. For example, a certain god wrote about the richest man who lost money. I personally thought that this novel was a very typical and well-paced model novel of the invincible Liu Dihua. The advantage is that through the perspective provided by a second person, it creates fun by explaining angles that the protagonist has not thought of, and then leads to the subsequent plot. The disadvantage is that almost all characters have become Dihua's pawns. The meaning of their existence is to Dihua, and then to implement the protagonist's Dihua will after Dihua. Even the protagonist will become Dihua's tool, because the characters are universally connected. The protagonist will eventually be kidnapped by Dihua and turned into a tool to make others Dihua. The consequence of this is that the characters in the three elements of the novel have no character arcs. Unless your plot is amazing, it will become more difficult to write in the later stages because the author himself has forgotten what the character originally looked like. Speaking of character arcs, in fact, most characters in online novels, including the protagonists, have no arcs. Their characters have been consistent from the beginning. No matter what they encounter, they cannot change their stone-like Taoist heart. The most common ones are petty bourgeois sentiment novels about cultivating immortals. Every character in them is an uncharged particle that will only deflect in an electric field and will not undergo chemical reactions. Even if there is a reaction, it must be won twice from others, otherwise it will be a loss. It's not that this is bad. It is not morally corrupt to make yourself more money without harming others and benefiting yourself. It's just that if this is always the case, it will appear that this person has no structure, is particularly stingy, and loves to take advantage. When I read novels, I especially admire characters who care about the world. He can start out as an ordinary little person, and there is nothing to blame for being alone because of his limited abilities. But when he grows up, I think he should have some kind of inner motivation to do something to change something. Otherwise, the world he faces, as the environmental element among the three elements, is just a bag of paper towels that can be wiped with when useful. It is indispensable but only taken out when needed.

The length of "Planet Novice Village" has reached hundreds of thousands of words, and there is a faint trend of 600,000 words. Enron's predecessors have learned a lesson from the past, so as not to repeat the same mistakes in the future: 1. Don't shape players with facial expressions, but set up models to shape their characters. In the later stage, don't just be the players of this group of players. The players who come and go are as unworthy of names as the wild monsters. 2. Don't fake your feelings. Don't let the protagonist fail to use any true feelings towards the player at the end, otherwise the story will not be thick enough and people will lose their favorable impression of him. 3. Moderately deflate and allow players to participate. For every 20 or 30 times of crushing, please add one more time to the player's home field. Don't forget it. Since this type of book talks about time-traveling NPCs, it needs to create a different feeling from the time-traveling players. This difference is reflected in the players. 4. Don't let the players be unable to defeat even one monster in the sea. Don't let the players have to let the protagonist come out every time. Give them something. 5. I personally recommend not to design reincarnation, mysterious power to control everything, or ending up as a god. This seems to be of high style, but in fact it is empty, as if all the hard work is destined to match the talent, and the protagonist's early struggles become a clown. Hardworking people and smart leaders are already perfectly formed, so why add an awesome background to dim these two haloes? The above is not an inference based on the plot logic of the work, but some actual suggestions from a reader to improve the perception of the work.

It looks good, it would be better if there were some lily.

Very good. Very good. Unfortunately, my ex-wife is also a Taurus. Um, so, sorry. Don't look. 😳Let the protagonist of the next book change his zodiac sign.

The more I read, the more I feel that the author's writing style is not suitable for writing this kind of interstellar book. The small camp stories in the article cannot support the grand narrative of Stars, but instead make the later full text have a petty atmosphere. In addition, the battle plot describes a catastrophic accident, which drove more than half of the readers away. The author's writing style feels more suitable for invincible-style otherworld adventures or lords. The text, rather than the slow-paced NPC upgrade text, is like the situation in the current book. The too-small narrative is directly strangled by the huge background. No matter how successful the protagonist is, all you can see is a frog in the well, doing a funny clown dance to try to please the audience who are already tired of it. The final ending will only be swept to the corner 😅

How did this get promoted? Or was it blocked on the home page🥵🥵

After all, this is the fourth natural disaster flow written. One of the cool things about this genre is the element of Dihua. Now there is one more person who knows Bai Fu thoroughly, making this Dihua a good clown. All Dihua members will be Dihua. If someone knows the truth, wouldn't it make the protagonist a pure clown? Because this person knows what the protagonist is and it's really hard to hold back. On the other hand, when writing about such a character, I don't feel that there is any meaning in existence at all. Relying on her mouth to convey the message of Dihua? Can't players like excavators do it? Or you can get an aboriginal NPC, but if you get someone to be close to you, this person has not yet transformed, then aren't you just a clown in front of this person? After writing so many chapters, I haven't seen any character design for the character Anya, and another bad point is that if you have white hair, you can just write it as white hair. The first person dyed her hair white, and dyeing her hair with Anya is really difficult. 😰

Fumen believers are welcome to visit🙏

There is a very tearful scene. The protagonist knows that players can be resurrected infinitely, and then casually kills the players. Later, he leaks a message saying that this place is dangerous and tells the players to leave quickly. Me:? ? ? Afraid of death, afraid of danger? You can kill players directly, saying that you know they can be resurrected infinitely, so why are you so dangerous here? ? ? Is it too fragmented? If you are not afraid of death, why should you be afraid of danger?

The numerical expansion is a bit too fast. Is it going to end? In your other book, Poverty Makes Me Possible, I was able to write 3.8 Million words. Isn't it impossible to write this one? No way, right? Miscellaneous Fish Coke

Awesome! Bianwen can actually be posted and tweeted!

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The plot is becoming more and more routine, and I can't remember any ups and downs. At the beginning, the plot was not bad. I pushed the book to my deskmate to read together. It was quite attractive for him who doesn't read much. He often came to me to talk about the plot. I didn't even read the content. I could directly discuss the direction of the plot with him just by looking at the title. It was really too routine, and I had already come up with several possible endings 😒

So far, this framework is completely a female version of a super-powerful machine... A super-powerful master? And it looks like he wants Lily?

In the boundless deep space of the universe, darkness is the eternal theme, and the light of the stars is inconspicuous against the dark background. The deep space of the universe is silent and lonely. An interstellar battleship the size of an asteroid advanced in silence. Without any lights on, it almost blended into the dark background. The battleship is protected by multiple layers of concealment devices. Unless it is extremely close, it cannot be discovered at all. It seems to be deliberately avoiding something. "Have you found any trace of her?" On the bridge, the man's tall figure disappeared at the dividing line between light and darkness. He stared at the uncertain screen in front of him and asked lightly. Sitting on the seat in front of the console, her blond hair was tied casually into a ponytail. The pretty girl was no longer as cheerful as usual, with a tight little face, staring at the screen seriously. Hearing the man's question, she hesitated and organized her words before answering: "The psychic fluctuations are too chaotic. Her breath seems to have been deliberately hidden and is becoming weaker and weaker. I can only vaguely lock the direction of her departure and want to directly It's impossible to locate her. But on the bright side, if we can't find her, no one can find her." The man was silent for a while and said quietly: "Did the prophet tell her?" "Of course, before she starts the psychic travel." The girl didn't know what she thought of, imitating the prophet's tone, her voice was hoarse, "When justice is broken, when crisis appears, the undead from the other side of the fog will follow the will of the Supreme Will and arrive at our hometown. After the boundary between life and death, rekindle the fire here. " "Get as close to her direction as possible. I have a hunch that we will see her again before long." After the man said that, his figure disappeared completely in the darkness and seemed to have gone away. The girl stared silently at the uncertain screen, murmuring softly: "Of course, she is Bai Fu..." ———————— As the screen turned, the dim battleship disappeared and was replaced by a ruins of the universe. The light of the star shines from a distance and has become very dim by the time it reaches the asteroid belt. Countless metal debris slowly floated along with the meteorites in the asteroid belt, and it was vaguely possible to see how huge cosmic weapons they were when they were intact. On the largest fragment of the wreckage, which seemed to be the outer armor of the interstellar fortress, a coat of arms still shining with psychic light was clearly visible. It was a simple eye pattern. Although the pattern was simple, after looking at it for a long time, it gave people the feeling of being stared at by some terrifying existence. The atmosphere of death and ruin spread quietly, and the endless wreckage of warships told those who came after the tragedy of the war that year. In the vacuum environment of the universe, these debris will not decay and the metal will not oxidize. In this dead galaxy, they will continue to float forever. The camera passed over the ruins of the universe, and the picture changed again, showing a blue planet, and the three characters "Ancestral Star" gradually appeared in the subtitles next to it. Here is the end of everything and a new beginning. The subtitles then appeared one after another. The master of psychic energy descends here, the gears of destiny begin to turn, and a new epic sets sail from here. Can she find her own strength? Let us participate in it and witness history. ———————— Digging Ji looked blankly at the latest promotional video released by Star Travel Club, and at the close-up of the Eye of Silence badge at the end of the promotional video. This is obviously a promotional video specially designed for White Fu and the Court of Silence. Needless to say, the community forum must have been blown up by now. Digging Ji was stunned for a moment before he realized what he was doing. He let out a strange cry and joined the carnival team in the forum.

What a great book. It feels quite realistic.

What a coincidence. I didn't expect that I read books by three different accounts at different times, and it wasn't until now that I discovered they were the same person.

I really couldn't stick to it. The protagonist's turtle style in the early stage was so speechless. However, the author still tried his best to brag about the protagonist's performance, and other players also tried their best to make up for it. It felt like these people were acting in an embarrassing drama. The subsequent development is basically the result of the author forcibly turning on the halo of the protagonist. Otherwise, I don't think the turtle stream has any development potential. It has the thickest blood and takes the hardest beating It seems that there will be some psychic summoning stream later. Well, it's really too similar to the Super God series, but it's too awkward.

I dreamed that the new book seemed to have elements of Western fantasy, steampunk, and infinite flow. The protagonist was named Anxiang (the article said it was based on a super-intelligent robot (?)), Loli. I remember a conversation in a place similar to a slum or a downtown area "I said, this is the time of the nobility. Dai" An Xiang ignored him. Of course she knew this was the era of demons. She only cared about how many quantum coins these could be exchanged for The conversation seemed to be like this. The specific plot was not clear. The protagonist felt a bit like Brother Jue from "Thriller Paradise" orz Above (?)

When will Coca-Cola release a new book? Www

Please, please, I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body when I read your new book without you😣😣

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There are only about 100 people fully booked.

Where is Coca-Cola now? It's not available on cats or here. Is it a new vest?

It's good to watch. I'll let you know when it's over. Please give me a hard kick when a new book comes out.

Love it, love it, give it a thumbs up for Yulia

This is a female protagonist game article. The protagonist, as an NPC with a player panel, madly attracts players to form the fourth natural disaster. The plot of "Still on the Planet" is the best, but the subsequent plots are too similar and a bit boring.

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