Douluo Dalu: Becoming the Fated Pope in Peerless World

After reading a few chapters, it seems a bit illogical. Soul beasts shouldn't be able to gather at a single call; if they had that kind of cohesion, they wouldn't have been wiped out in Douluo Continent III, with over twenty 100,000-year-old soul beasts suddenly appearing.

I was completely confused and didn't quite understand it.

The battle scenes were poorly written, mostly just glossed over.

I wonder if any long-time readers have noticed that the main characters, supporting characters, and background of this book are the same as a book I finished on Maomao. If any long-time readers recognize it, you can consider it a continuation or a different timeline.

The first few chapters were too chaotic. The author didn't add character introductions or early synopsis, making it feel like a primary school student's self-indulgent ramblings. It got better after the initial Shrek storyline, and you could see that the author had a clear plan. If the author has too many personal interpretations and the plot is too dense, it would be best to provide a basic background introduction or lengthen the storyline.

The author's idea is great. Keep writing according to your own ideas, and update more often! Keep it up!

The author writes well, but those who are fans of the original work should proceed with caution, as it contains some self-constructed elements.