Douluo Dalu: Becoming the Fated Pope in Peerless World

After reading a few chapters, it seems unreasonable. The soul beasts must assemble at the first shout. If there is such cohesion, Dou San will not be exterminated. More than 20 hundred thousand year old beasts appear at once.

I looked confused and didn't quite understand.

The battle process is poorly written, and I basically just go over it in a few strokes.

I don't know if any old readers have discovered that the protagonist and supporting characters of this book, including the background, are the same as the one I finished on Maomao. If any old readers recognize it, they can regard it as a continuation or a different world line.

The author's creativity is very good. Keep writing according to your own ideas. Please write more. Come on.

The first few chapters were too messy. The author did not add character introductions or early synopses. It was like a primary school student enjoying himself. After the previous Shrek plot, it got better. It can also be seen that the author has ideas. If the author has too many private plots and the plot is dense, it is best to write a basic introduction, or to lengthen the plot line.

The author's writing is pretty good. For those who are interested in the original work, be cautious as it is a bit self-contained.