Start with the Talent of Wheel King

The first picture has a language problem. He introduces the time traveler and the protagonist, body and life, and life. There are grammatical errors and confusion in between. When I first started watching the protagonist and the time travel, I couldn't physically tell the difference. Three major pieces of online writing. Smooth and smooth, and a pleasure to read. You are not fluent in Chapter 1, and it will be difficult later.

After reading five chapters, Shennong has been poisoned to death! The first volume changes Ju Dou's tragic fate! The first four chapters are actually okay, they are decisive enough and don't get entangled with the chicken. In the fifth chapter, Ju Dou is pregnant and returns directly after completing the mission! ? ? ! ! What kind of garbage is this? Isn't this more tragic? Although Ju Dou in the original drama was miserable, at least he had a man to help him in the later stages. Here, the protagonist just gave Ju Dou a pregnancy out of wedlock and ran away! Leaving a sum of money and a mule to a pregnant single woman, it's a miracle that Ju Dou survived to give birth!

The protagonist really likes to meddle in other people's business. He should also meddle in other people's dog betting matters. Respect other people's fate. How can he take care of other people's dog betting matters? He didn't do it right. He even pretended to be a con man to win money. It really dropped the price.

What is written in this? Ju Dou is pregnant. The protagonist completes the task and leaves immediately. You can at least give it an ending. And Red Sorghum, you said that the original was a fake gun, but now it has become a real gun, and you still want to send Jiu'er back to Shan's family. In case someone comes to have a happy birthday and directly sleeps with Jiu'er, you are just cuckolding yourself, it's just a stupid plot.

Chapter 5 is a big deal, and the author can only add one sentence to it. No one else can do it like this, and it will directly dissuade most readers. Does the author not read comments?

Is it the same style as Wheel King?

Which Wheel King? You have to turn the wheel, but you don't have to turn the wheel.

To be honest, the previous writing is good, but the time-traveling world suddenly changed from ancient movies and TV shows to science fiction and modern times, which felt too inconsistent. Even Jingjue Ancient City and Tomb Robbers' Notes don't have this feeling 😒 And the movie Wushuang is really not interesting. It is better to travel through time and go to ancient movies like Xing Ye's Ninth Grade Sesame Official. The protagonist can also make a joke about having never learned martial arts and is born with supernatural powers to show the advantages of the protagonist's physical fitness.

When I read Chapter 5, I changed my fate. The protagonist got Ju Dou pregnant and then returned with 47 yuan, leaving behind a pregnant woman and useless legal currency.

When I saw Chakravartin, the first thing that came to my mind was Lao Ai 😰

Can't it have a beginning and an end? Are you coming back just after the heroine got pregnant? So heartless? ? Is the heroine just a tool?

The author is really awesome. It was a surprise at the beginning. Some things he did were inexplicable and a bit awkward. I feel like the author is trying to seduce the readers. It doesn't look good. I would like to advise you to quit.

To be honest, I thought it was Lao Ai, the wheel-turning king. I was so happy for nothing.

It should be cut, because the last book was over a million words long. This 480,000-word book is about eunuchs, so the eunuchs can enter the palace early and eat royal food.

It was disgusting that the author reported it to him directly after seeing Chapter 5.

The plot follows the movie and the protagonist is replaced by himself? It's too perfunctory... Even if it is put on the shelves, it will be free of charge...

Don't read it, it's rubbish. Three or five chapters were written in one time. There are no details, no plot, no setting, no beginning and no end. I can't even understand the arrangement of a woman, and the author doesn't know what he thinks.

I have read 8 chapters. The first few chapters are based on the plot of the story, but the following chapters have no plot and there is no plot.

The heroine of Mr. And Mrs. Smith has slept with hundreds of people, and he wants to marry her? The cuckold plot is awesome

. . . . Be careful, it's disgusting

The title of the book is good. The last book was Eunuch, doesn't it start with Eunuch?

He will be raised and raised to become a eunuch.

He just traveled through time and acted like a rapist, making him invincible.

Ju Dou is a cuckold. Why not let the main character replace Liu Tianqing's identity from the beginning, and instead use his soul to transform into Liu Tianqing? All the extra points are added to Liu Tianqing's character 🙂🙂

Are three monthly passes enough to increase my concentration? ?

Is Chakravartin the one from Sword Rain?

Not enoughsee

I'm really speechless. This book has a title like this about stallions, but the actual content has nothing to do with stallions. Isn't this a trick to deceive readers who want to read stallion harem stories? You deserve to be thrown into the street

Wheel King? Is he the Wheel King who found Moko's body and wanted to cut off the chicken and be reborn?

It's been so long since there has been an update. It's almost Chinese New Year, so it won't really be cut off, right? ? ?