Flesh Cyber ​​Immortal, Flesh Ossuary Hall

Innovation: The flesh-and-blood cyberpunk theme of cultivating immortality combines three elements, which is quite interesting. The various names are also good. The author should have learned from Dead Cells and Cyberpunk 2077, and added his own understanding of cultivating immortality. It is quite innovative. Disadvantages: The protagonist speaks and behaves like a loser, has an abstract name, and other characters also have an inexplicable sense of humor. When introducing the world in the first chapter, an introductory clip is used directly. You might as well not introduce it, and directly introduce the protagonist from a third-person limited perspective. The description of the environment basically has no sense of picture, and the sense of substitution is missing. This cannot be made up for, but the character design can still be improved. The aura of the loser is too strong.

The system is pretty good, but the characters are a bit of a loser.

Even though I haven't seen it, I'm still cheering😋👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

The early stage is okay, but the author is obviously a novice, and there is still a lot of room for improvement in terms of story line, rhythm, etc. Of course, this flesh and blood + cyber idea is really good, come on 💪💪💪

With a little care, I give the author a lot of support. It comes from a 50,000-word eunuch who particularly likes cyber cultivating.

Abnormal society? It's nice to be an ordinary person, right? It looks disgusting

I feel like the plot of Dabang is okay. It was written by Goldfinger. It's a bit rough. It should be better if it's written more carefully. It's still readable. This novel is

Persevere, persistence may not necessarily lead to victory, but it will last.