Everyone Evolves: I Can Claim Extra Rewards in Advance

The author's book is both innovative and old-fashioned—a combination of innovation and rigidity. The innovative parts are very engaging, while the old-fashioned parts, if well-written, become classics, but if poorly written, become rigid. The author is certainly talented, and probably has a complex thought process. Perhaps my description isn't very good, but that's roughly the gist of it.

I don't understand why they included this teacher. She's married with children; they couldn't possibly push her away. The world has changed so much; there are countless pitiful people. She missed her chance to become an evolved being, so they just force her to take in others. If the protagonist truly wanted to help the weak, they should have built up their influence and made it possible for ordinary people to make a living. That's the right path.

This writing style, which appears to be a diary entry but is actually a fast-paced, enjoyable read, is very similar to the novel "Million Fantasy God" that I read before.

I'd like to ask, is the author's de-emphasis on the government and military in the book necessary for the plot? It feels illogical. At least in our country, grassroots management and control are very effective, and the willpower of the police, armed police, and military is much stronger than that of ordinary citizens. Even in other countries, there's not a single mention of them. Are you planning for them to suddenly appear later in the story?

How do you plan to deploy modern weapons?

Chapter 23, the last few sentences, something about a mature, well-built widow; if it goes on with this cliché, I'll drop the story.

Shouldn't we aim for 3/10 instead of 2/5? Author, did you laugh while writing this?

To be honest, the plot, writing, and characters are all good, but it's just too illogical. While reading, I always had to subconsciously convince myself otherwise. When that happens, the military will select the best of the best to form special teams, while the rest will take turns on duty or even be stationed directly in cities.

He was banned after saying just one sentence.

The world feels like it's only the size of a city; there's absolutely no information about what's happening outside.