Hogwarts' Herbalist Just Wants to Farm

There are many people writing about Hufflepuff, but apart from the students accepted by Hufflepuff who do not fit into the other three houses, a person who fits Hufflepuff should be someone like Newt or Cedric who is kind, honest, and hard-working, but to be honest, none of those authors can write like a qualified Hufflepuff.

As for Dragon Blood Grass, just do it openly and solve the problem. I don't understand why you have to hide your talent. There are all kinds of wonders in the magical world, so it can't be another show of pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger? That kind of plot is not popular anymore

From reading the article, it seems that the whole family is sincere to the protagonist and there is no one holding him back, so why does the protagonist hide it from his family? ? Even if you can't talk about the system, you can just say that you have cultivated Sunflower and then start the rest. Isn't it possible to better develop your own golden fingers with the help of family? ? Just talk about dragon dung. I have worked hard to save money, but if I confessed and my family directly supported me, wouldn't my schedule be full all of a sudden? ? ? The same goes for the dragon blood grass at the back. What's the point of doing it secretly? After confessing, parents don't have to experience great joy or sorrow, and can even draw inferences from one example to directly increase production capacity. And the protagonist can't keep it secret for a lifetime. He has to come out eventually, so what's the point of hiding it for these years? ? ?

In fact, it is not difficult to understand. The creativity of this book is really good. The interaction of plants and the unique growth path of the protagonist are also very exciting. There are two main problems. One is that it is too cumbersome and meaningless. It has no benefit in promoting the plot and shaping the characters. The readers have no sense of satisfaction, and there is no restraint before it is put on the shelves. This is very It's hard to get people to subscribe. The other thing is that I seem to feel that the character creation of the protagonist is a bit of a failure. There is no carefully crafted description of cultivating plants. The talking wand is really a complete failure. The protagonist and the wand are often inexplicably excited, and there is no chemical reaction between the two that can be expected. The wand is boring. . . It's obviously much more fun if you plant a tree. . .

Very good, interesting subject matter ➕Harry Potter, well worth watching, but I hope that the core is still the growth of the protagonist. As for the main plot of Harry Potter, don't be too rigid.

Although the author did not write about it, I would like to express some opinions about Snape. Regarding Snape, the beautification of Snape in China is a bit too much. First of all, it was Lily. Now many people were scolding Lily and calling her pretentious. Snape once called Lily a "mudblood" in a quarrel and ignored Snape's love for her (please note that Lily was always on Snape's side at this time). What does it mean? It's like your Japanese boyfriend calling you "branch, na, cousin, son" or "wei, an, wife" in anger. If you can still love him, then you are really awesome. Secondly, if the prophecy was not about Lily's family, Snape would not have defected at all. He even thought that James and Harry didn't matter as long as Lily didn't die. In other words, Snape wholeheartedly approved of the evil deeds of the Death Eaters, and the absurd Nazi theory of distinguishing high and low based on blood alone. He approved of the Death Eaters torturing and killing their own compatriots, even classmates with whom they had a relatively good relationship. Then, yes, Snape did pay a lot, but if he and Pettigrew didn't betray the family, Harry would be able to grow up happily under the care of his parents. Snape treated Harry as, strictly speaking, a murderer who killed his parents. Would you be grateful to a murderer who killed your family and then raised you? At most it's just atonement. In the end, Snape was unqualified even if he became a teacher. He treated Slytherin with unlimited favoritism, treated Hermione, and Harry deliberately made things difficult. If this can still be explained, then he was naked bullying and humiliation of Neville, humiliating a person whose parents sacrificed to protect the magical world. I really don't understand what kind of teacher ethics this kind of person has Off topic, about James and Snape. I found that somehow James turned into a school bully with no merit, while Snape became more powerful. Snape had joined a small group of Death Eaters in Slytherin, and had been in a state of "war" with James and other Gryffindors for a long time. It is difficult to define whether Snape and James were fighting each other or bullying, because just before that, Snape's small group used the Imperius Curse on Lily's female classmates and did "some bad things." To be honest, I don't want to think about what these bad things were. Except for Snape, almost everyone recognized James, including Lily, and he was changing, growing from an arrogant man to a wizard who was willing to protect ordinary people when Death Eaters were at their most rampant. Snape, on the other hand, was dark and extreme. From the bottom of his heart, he felt racial discrimination and there was nothing wrong with killing Muggles and mixed-blood wizards. Readers thought they were Snape being bullied by James. In fact, if they really traveled through the past, they were most likely ordinary Hufflepuffs and Muggles who were bullied, discriminated against, and even killed by Snape. However, James, the "campus bully" in their eyes, would stand up to protect them. Finally, if I were to make a summary of James and Snape, it would be that if a prostitute turns good in her later years, the fireworks will be fine for half her life; if a virgin loses her virginity, she will live a miserable life

I don't understand, and no matter what the situation is, I have to hide it from my family, especially since I grew up, not when I grew up, and the golden finger is also developmental.

... Why is there a eunuch again? Am I the novel Medusa? Read a copy of the eunuch 🥵

After reading the book review, I was super disgusted with the plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger for no reason, especially the story in the Western setting. In fact, it is the same in the East. They are all the protagonists of novels. There are many ordinary people who have no background and no foundation and then make a career. As a result, in a group of brainiacs, only people with backgrounds can show their full play, and then a group of even more brainless people have to hide even those with backgrounds in their writings. It is really boring.

Is this special meow an internal investment work? I'm really convinced.

The first point, many readers have mentioned, is that it is too watery. What is the specific water method? You can write three chapters even if you buy a magic wand, and put the words in unnecessary places, such as dialogue and psychological activities. On the contrary, there is not much description about the golden-fingered plant. The second point is a classic poisonous point. Goldfinger does not tell the family, or leaks a little bit of Goldfinger to the family. Since the family is written about, it means that the family is the backer of the protagonist in the book, but as the son, he does not say anything. It is even written in the book that the grandma has been telling others about her grandson for many days. He is a genius, but I don't see any genius qualities except for Goldfinger, so when writing novels, I either don't write about my family, or when I write about my family, I treat them purely as tools and don't describe them too much. But like the author, who is almost all about shaping his family, but writes as if he doesn't regard his family as his own at all. This classic poisonous point usually appears in apocalyptic novels, but this is the first time it appears in Harry Potter.

I don't know if you read the author or not, so I'll just say it briefly. The subject matter of this book is quite good. It's been a long time since I've seen a HP fanfiction that made my eyes light up like this. But if you look at chapters 50-60, the entire ten chapters, I feel that 3,000 words in concise language is enough to summarize it. It's not that you can't read it. If you write 20,000 words a day, it will become watery. There is always a plot to promote it. If you have 1-2 chapters a day, it will be like this. It makes no difference whether you have read it or not. Just like your 60 chapter, after reading it, you will just say, "The protagonist saw the castle on a boat." It's gone. What do you want me to do?

Why did you take such a long break at such a young age? ! Hurry up and update 10 photos! 😡

That Luna's father is really a terrible person. If he knows what he writes is false, then he is a shameful, despicable liar. If he didn't know better, he was a delusional lunatic. And it feels really bad to include Tombstone Moss in the Quibbler. The plants cultivated by the protagonist will always show up later, right? What to say then? Was the tombstone moss cultivated by the protagonist or was it discovered by Luna and her father first? How to prove that it was cultivated by the protagonist? This would cause a lot of trouble in the real world.

There is a chapter about getting off the bus, a chapter about saying hello, a chapter about getting on the boat, a chapter about getting off the boat, a chapter about being sorted into a hospital, a chapter about getting into the common room, and a chapter about entering. It is so confusing that he even deleted some plots from the original work, which is quite explosive among the many novels I have read.

It took me 150,000 words to write a HP fanfic that reaches the branch. This is your first one. Hurry up and write the plot. Don't stop talking.

The most intolerable thing about this book is the concealment, the incomprehensible concealment.

Let me tell you my opinion. The book is a good book and the writing is really good, but I feel there is a problem with the rhythm! How to say it? It just feels like you are running but the more you try to exert force, the less energy you have to exert. I think it is a problem with the rhythm. Slowness does not mean that the writing is slow, but it feels like the plot is dragging when it is not related to the original plot line of Harry Potter. People who read Harry Potter fandoms usually run towards Harry Potter. This book is about to be written like this. It is easy to drag away many interested readers. I suggest that you either write a lot that has nothing to do with the original plot and speed up the rhythm of the parts that are divorced from the plot, or you add more ups and downs in the original parts that are divorced from the plot line to make the rhythm compact. This is my opinion and suggestion. I hope you can write better as you write more.

It's not on the shelves yet, so water is acceptable. If it's on the shelf, it's still watery and it'll be difficult to stretch.

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