I Work as a Magic Cultivator in Cyberpunk

This is the first time I have seen a cyberpunk genre about cultivating immortals. I wonder if I will write a fanfic. It would be better for the author to think more about the integration of cultivating immortals and technology. Although there seems to be no problem in reading the first two chapters, after reading it, I feel so disconnected. I can't explain it, but it feels awkward. Please give me more encouragement, author.

It's a bit awkward to read, it's like I'm playing a game, one mission after another, the sense of fragmentation is too strong 😥

Is the combat power of the cultivator a little low? I think others can fly by building foundations, and is it too easy for people in this world to break through?

If you don't improve your cultivation if you have resources, you will have to waste them everywhere!