Swallowed Star: Starting with Revitalizing the Clan

Even if the protagonist is disabled, he's still a warrior-level character! He got married to an ordinary woman after just one day of blind dating, and he was completely manipulated. If you were a native or had no hope, that would be one thing, but the problem is that you're a transmigrator who gets a family-based cheat code after marriage, yet you're playing the sentimental card and getting…

The protagonist is already a war god, yet he can't reveal his true strength? He also doesn't dare marry multiple wives and have many children. What a coward! If he doesn't know how to use a cheat code, he can just donate it. 😁

I'd like to ask if this book is just the protagonist constantly fawning over Luo Feng from beginning to end? Which chapter doesn't mention Luo Feng? Can't you write your own plot? Seriously, this is ridiculous! Why do you have to drag Luo Feng into developing your family? Do you expect the protagonist to have a romantic relationship with Luo Feng?

The protagonist is suppressed too much, and the suppression gets worse as the story progresses. It's okay in the early stages, but even with the system, the protagonist is always just a hair's breadth ahead of Luo Feng.

They got married through a blind date, with no emotional foundation whatsoever. A warrior-level character getting manipulated by an ordinary woman? And he's playing the innocent, devoted lover? I'm not saying the protagonist should have multiple partners, but since you're using a family-based system, wouldn't it be better to just have three or five quick-level characters? Even if people notice his rapid power increase, he won't have to worry as long as his strength keeps rising.

How boring! The protagonist doesn't seem like a martial artist, but his wife does! The roles are reversed!

Let me give you some advice: you're writing fanfiction, and you keep putting it off! Take the time to read it from the beginning. It's not much now, you can finish reading it in no time. Do you enjoy reading what you've written? You're practically a planetary-level character, yet you write like a nobody! Who on Earth can threaten you anymore?

Author of the Earth arc, how long are you planning to keep writing? Since it's a family system, stop being hypocritical, okay? Stop portraying yourself as deeply in love while simultaneously drooling over others. You're already so powerful, yet your heart is like that of a sleazy man. Can't you just face your own conscience?

You already have a ton of Beast God Blood, so why go all the way to Blood Luo Continent? Do you think you can't write without following the plot? Even if you're going to follow the plot, can't you at least add a little of your own original content? I've read so many Devouring fanfics about Blood Luo Continent.

Concealing your abilities requires a specific environment. Now that you're at the planetary level, aside from a few extremely powerful individuals on Earth, no one can kill you. There's absolutely no need to hide. The resources needed for planetary-level advancement can no longer be bought with Earth's currency; money is practically useless now. You're already a big shot on Earth at the planetary level; you should be more assertive.