From Tianshui to Bianjing

The first post 😁 I hope you can find a feeling of wealth in this book

People who saw the first few pictures had a headache. Now they have to eat rice, now they have to grind tofu, and now they have to snatch the little girl. What kind of clan is it? There is no contradiction Now that we know it is just after the military disaster, how much rice can the little girl move and how much money does the protagonist have? Why do we have to bring it out? Forced conflict It seems too brainless

The author's style is really low

The author has read the previous ones, and I feel the most about Xiuxiu; among many time travel novels; the most unforgettable little character with warmth; collect this book first,

To be honest, the author is not suitable for this kind of job. He always talks long and hard to brainwash readers to follow the main theme.

If the author doesn't want to continue writing, please click through and finish the book, and don't let my investment fail.

The sense of déjà vu from a fifty-cent film and television short script.

Personally, I couldn't write it if I was asked. I just hope I can write it better I suggest that the author could add a story before the time travel to give readers a more sense of involvement. Now I am a little unclear about the protagonist's mentality and way of doing things. It is said that he has been working before, but after the chapter of lamp oil, he talks and acts like a three-year-old baby. The way he speaks also seems a bit strange. How can the protagonist of a historical novel speak like a light novel? He always brings one with him. To quote the original text of Chapter 6, "Zhao Bochen said: "A bucket like this costs a lot of money. But it's enough money, it's not about saving money. " The description of inner emotions is also on the surface. Her mother is grinding tofu hard beside her, but Xiuxiu is watching the protagonist boil the lamp oil. When the lamp oil is boiled out, she suddenly has a story about how hard it is for her mother. There are too few emotional descriptions with her mother, and there is no sense of substitution. Because there is too little background written before the time travel, I am completely confused about the debt caused by the dispute in Midian. You can add a protagonist who is He was a stupid young man, so he was assigned to a grain station (this puts restrictions on the protagonist, and it will be difficult to write in the future) The feeling of these first few chapters is that a time traveler arrived in the Southern Song Dynasty, his father died, and he had a mother and a maid he picked up. They went to buy rice, but no one else would sell it, only to powerful people. They got into a dispute, which caused the family to go into debt, and suddenly boiled kerosene and bought a shop. The details are inappropriate.

I hope to reproduce the writing power of the wealthy family in those days By the way, apply for a supporting role Li Yuanqin, character Shao Rong Age: 21 years old Description: A majestic figure, unparalleled bravery, capable of running bulls, good at using horses. He was originally the son of a wealthy family in Qinzhou, and had always had the ambition to regain China. When he met the protagonist, he met a like-minded person and followed him! There are thousands of troops and horses, but one general is there. How difficult is it to kill the general and defeat the enemy? ! Positioning: Marshal I am your Guan Yu and Zhang Fei! Drive out the Tartars and regain China!

The protagonist is not a time traveler at all, he is a native! The author has written so many books! The main character in this book is portrayed as an innocent person who goes around causing trouble!