From Tianshui to Bianjing

The first post 😁 hopes this book will give you the feeling of a lifetime of wealth and prosperity.

The first few pictures were a headache to look at; one minute she insisted on eating rice, the next she wanted to grind tofu, and then someone tried to snatch the little girl away... What kind of royal family is it? There's no contradiction. Since they know it's after a war, how much rice could that little girl carry? And how much money did the protagonist have? Why bring her along at all? Forced conflict looks so brainless.

The author has a really low level of vision.

I've read all of the author's previous works. I feel most connected to Xiuxiu; It is among the many time-travel novels; The most unforgettable small character with warmth; I'll keep this one for later.

Honestly, this author isn't suited for this job; they constantly write long, rambling pieces to brainwash readers and force them to follow the mainstream ideology.

If the author doesn't want to continue writing, please mark it as finished so I don't lose my investment.

It feels like a cheap, low-budget film script.

In my personal opinion, I couldn't write it myself; I just hope I can write it better. I suggest the author add another chapter about the story before the time travel to make readers feel more involved. I'm a little unclear about the protagonist's mindset and way of doing things. He said he had been working before, but in the chapter where he stayed up all night, he acted like a three-year-old.

Hoping to recreate the literary prowess of his past life. I'd also like to apply for a minor role. Li Yuanqin, courtesy name Shaorong Age: 21 Description: A man of imposing stature and unparalleled bravery, capable of wrestling a charging bull and skilled in wielding a horse spear, he was originally the son of a wealthy family in Qinzhou.

The protagonist isn't a time traveler at all; he's a native! The author has written so many books! This one portrays the protagonist as an innocent, naive troublemaker!