Family Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Digging up the Ancestral Legacy

The plot is a bit scattered, and I want to write about everything, but the plot cannot be restrained. When writing a book, you have to organically combine reality, simplicity and tradition, otherwise you will be confused.

It's well written and pretty to watch, but it's a little bland and a little less exciting.

It smells like the Xuanjian Immortal Clan, but why are there so few collections?

His father only cares about the Ye family and doesn't care about Changle himself. . . .

First It shouldn't be. Is the competition in Qidian so fierce now? This collection is too low.

The writing is very good, and the author hopes that Xuanjian can follow the path. But I really appreciate the author's literary skills! Come on💪I'll give you two monthly tickets

Emmmm read a few more chapters. The writing is indeed much better than before, but the plot needs to be strengthened. When Xue Xuanjian writes family portraits, each character branch will eventually converge to the main line of "profit and development of the family". Maybe you want to establish the character through a few dialogues, but you feel it is better to establish the character through a conflict of events, which should be more tense. Keep up the good work, I'll take care of it for a few months and then take a look. At present, the food and grass are just about as good as you can see.

Come on, write better than Xuanjian Xianzu

The writing style is very smooth and the depiction of cultural relics is also very detailed.