
Three Kingdoms: in the Beginning, the Troops Remonstrated with Ma Su and Defeated Zhang He.
三国:开局兵谏马谡,大破张郃
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- 208k Words
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Qin-Han & Three Kingdoms
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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Can you think more about the character dialogue? Many places are too dramatic. Moreover, the author's classical writing style lacks modern vocabulary in the protagonist's mouth.
You better stop talking nonsense when you say you want to kill me.
I admit that some places are not well thought out, and I also admit that some places are poorly written, but because the poisonous point said that they would kill me, did you become obsessed with "Decisive Killing"? Shandong Province, Jinan City, Licheng District, when you get there, leave a comment and I will catch you with my squid. You have a habit of being a bear, and you still want to kill me while reading a novel?
The contract is settled
It was delayed for a few days due to the problem of real-name mobile phone numbers, but now that the signing is completed, you can rest assured to follow up. In addition, some friends who have read the previous cut-off book said that the author would not break his promise, but it was too difficult to generate electricity for love, so he thought about writing another beginning and submitted it, but the cut was straight, and the inspiration suddenly appeared and he wrote it casually and passed it... I am still a reader. When I was young, I disliked the author of The Eunuch very much. Now that I am an author, I definitely don't know how to be an eunuch. I just don't have the energy to write two books at the moment. I still have the outline of the previous book. I will submit it again after this one is completed, and I will try my best to finish the story.
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You can watch it without thinking, the arrow hits the mouth, bite the arrow with your teeth, hahaha. . . .
The truth of history is that 50,000 cavalrymen with open jaws are unstoppable. Camping on the road is a dead end. The cavalry can directly crush them. Ma Di's strategy of going up the mountain is a correct delaying tactic, but he did not consider it enough. As long as he brings enough food and water, he can definitely delay it longer.
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I have shortcomings in my identity, so it's okay to write about my regrets. For the rest, there are only two words: "difficult to write about"!
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Difficult to stretch
I said it can be read without thinking, but I almost didn't understand Chapter 1 of Five Things Temple. Speaking of biting the flying arrows with your mouth "The Romance of the Three Kingdoms" Cao Cao, who was shot in the front teeth but survived: Huh? "Chronicles of the Kingdoms of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty" Yang Youji, who holds the last arrow of Douyuejiao: Huh? Luo Guanzhong: A junior student said that what we wrote should not be read with the brain in mind. Feng Menglong: Happy.
I'm coming!
The writing is so good, it's on par with other great books from the past, and it's not as good as the last one.
Don't write too cumbersomely. There are too many ancient Chinese materials mixed with half-text and half-white, which makes readers unable to understand. Most people are not here to read these complicated and long-winded words. Can you please be brief and straightforward? There are too few refreshing ones. They are all troublesome inner thoughts and a lot of self-talk.