Extradimensional Lords: Start with the Archaeologist Sequence

Can you tell me why I am still wandering around because I don't have enough extraordinary inner breath power? Just use a scroll to kill a mob, what do you think? It was said to be of great use in the early stage, but it will be used in the next chapter? I don't understand. I just escaped and my breath is not full. Why go out for a swim at night? In order to arrange the plot, even if you die, you have to waste time. How many days can't be delayed? The black market will be open in a few days, okay?

The writing is too long-winded. Some things can be explained clearly in one sentence. However, all the actions, objects, psychology, dialogues, etc. Are described in a long paragraph with a lot of modifications and details. It is boring and a waste of time. There are also paragraphs. There are too many long paragraphs, like a composition, and it's too tiring to read.

Another waste who dies without a system

The setting feels interesting, but the writing is not attractive. I feel like it is just straw.

Nice setup, then. There will be no more

No, what's the matter? Nowadays, novels that don't contain mystery or evil gods are not allowed to be published, right? I read a hundred books, and 99 of them contain mystery and evil gods. The online platform has been invaded by evil gods, right? In fact, these online platforms are now controlled by evil gods, right?

Establish a post as evidence. There is a kind of introduction, which enumerates all kinds of specific awesome things about the protagonist. It has a lot of words, more than 20 lines. None of the novels of this profile have monthly sales exceeding 250.

The writing is too messy, the geographical location is messy, and the writing of a secret place is too messy and complicated. The relationships between the characters are also confusing.

Even though there is a negative immune status, it is still necessary to write that it is affected and then eliminated. It is really unbelievable.

The world design is grand, the characters are vivid, and the writing is very good! I hope there won't be any eunuchs.

I can't stand the recent chapters. The writing is so confusing. It's not like when I first came out and prepared to enter the secret realm. At least there is a structure. Author, how long do you want to stay in the water? If you continue to do this, you can only give up.

One chapter of content, six chapters to write, you are good at it 🙂. After watching it for a long time, there is still no plot.