Night-Roving Immortal

Everything else is fine, but the key protagonist has such a big golden finger that it has yet to be discovered. Why should we take risks in a poetry conference? There is something wrong with a fairy holding a poetry conference. The protagonist obviously does not lack skills, but only lacks time to develop, so why take such a useless risk?

1. The protagonist's father is a failed scholar. Although he is poor, he is at least a scholar. If he disappears, he will attract attention. The rich man and the evil Taoist priest should not ask the scholar for blood sacrifice if they want to perform blood sacrifices. They can find some homeless beggars or buy a servant; 2. There is also the poetry club, I wrote 3 poems that can be passed down through the ages, but only got second place. This immortal is really a bit shameless; 3. As soon as the poetry meeting ended, I was attacked by a drunkard on the road, and there seemed to be other people approaching. Is this a test or a "hero saving beauty" who wants to show kindness to the protagonist?

For such a big deal, the author insists on writing that the protagonist starts out as a waiter in a restaurant, earns 3,800 yuan without paying social security wages, and pretends to be awesome all the way to the top of his life.

By the time 33 of them were poisoned, Wen Chao Gong was inexplicable even though he was in the limelight. He also forced a woman to come in. You can't survive without a girl, right? Then as a slave, you go shopping by yourself, and you don't even know what's in the house? Then the protagonist forced a line. This is just nerve-wracking. Totally poisoned

The beginning was very bad. Cut it off.

What was written about Hammer, I only practiced for one night, and kept doing all kinds of things

Thank you engineers for clearing mines, and thank you Shennong for tasting poison. If the golden finger is so wide open, it should be Shuangwen all the way to the end

The writing of White Lotus Sect is boring. There are no interesting points or foreshadowings. Either don't write it or change it.

The pace is too fast, just through a day, I encounter so many things. Be more steady, your xinxing has been adjusted since you came here? It's hard to get into the role

He was framed and almost killed, and it just passed away peacefully? You'd better study literature instead! Han Xin could endure it, but in the end, he was not killed! It's a waste and can't be changed!