Night-Roving Immortal
夜游仙
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 770k Words
- Genre
- Xianxia
- Subgenre
- Classical Xianxia
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
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Everything else is fine, but the key issue is that the protagonist has such a powerful cheat ability, and it hasn't been discovered yet. Why would he risk standing up at a poetry gathering? What's the point of an immortal holding a poetry competition? It seems questionable. The protagonist clearly doesn't lack cultivation techniques, only time to develop, so why take such a pointless risk?
The conflict seemed a bit contrived.
1. The protagonist's father is a failed scholar. Although he is poor and destitute, he is still a scholar. If he goes missing, it will attract attention. The wealthy family and the evil Taoist priest should not have chosen a scholar for a blood sacrifice. They could have chosen some vagrants or beggars or bought a servant.
With such a huge cheat code, like having billions in assets, why does the author insist on writing a story where the protagonist starts as a restaurant waiter, earning a meager salary of 3,800 yuan without social security contributions, and then swaggeres off to the top of life by showing off and slapping faces along the way?
By the time the 33rd character was poisoned to death, the plagiarist's attempt to show off was already ridiculous. And then he insisted on including a woman. Couldn't he live without a woman? And then, as a slave, he went to buy things himself, didn't he even know what his own home was like? And then the protagonist was forced into a storyline. This is utterly insane. Completely poisoned.
It started badly; let's cut it.
What kind of nonsense is this? He only practiced for one night and kept causing trouble.
Thank you all the engineers who cleared the mines, and thank you all the Shennongs who tasted the poison. With such a powerful cheat ability, this should be a satisfying, uninterrupted story.
The White Lotus Sect story is uninteresting; it lacks exciting moments and foreshadowing. Either don't write it, or revise it again.
The pace is too fast; so many things have happened in just one day. Let's calm down. Have we already adjusted our mindset after just arriving? It's hard to get back into character then.
You were framed and almost killed, and you just let it go? You should study literature! Han Xin was good at enduring, but in the end, he still got killed! You're a coward, you can't change!