Bard of Hogwarts

If you have subscribed, I will jump into the trap later Generally speaking, there are a lot of self-feeling articles in the literary youth books with HP cover. The author is very happy with the writing, but the readers are not happy with it. The best example is that Hermione was written to death and resurrected in this book. I am sure that a lot of people gave up on it at that time, including me. In the follow-up, I inferred that it was definitely a bad ending or a eunuch, and sure enough At that time, I remember that the author also said that the follow-up plot had been thought out. As a result, I looked at the title, and it seemed that the writing was alive again This author's book feels disorganized. He has not thought about how to write the follow-up content, how readers will react, and it feels good even if it is badly written I have reviewed this book out of 10, which is probably 1 point I suggest this author wait for the book to be finished, or not to subscribe. Even if it is finished, if you want to subscribe, read the discussion first, so as not to be disgusted after subscribing

1. The writing is delicate, the style is unique, and it is good to have your own ideas for character creation. Malfoy is no longer simply arrogant, and Harry is no longer stubborn. In the author's writing, the characters in the original story are no longer symbols that can be simply summarized, but individuals who can think independently and weigh the pros and cons. 2. Personally, I think the most successful part of this work is the setting that "the protagonist can enter other story worlds and have a certain impact." It breaks out of the original HP framework and brings works with a magical or epic feel, such as The Lord of the Rings, The Hobbit, and Grimm's Fairy Tales, into the text. This is why I read this work with great interest. But now I still choose to retreat and wait and see. The reason is what the title says: as soon as the author reaches the climax of the story world, he will start to omit it or skip it directly! It's so uncomfortable! Skip the final battle of the White Witch! The Lord of the Rings' Helm's Deep strategy writing! The soldier's battle in the battle of Minasti in the White City is skipped (the protagonist kills the Nazgul King in aerial combat, and then it's gone??)! The battle with Smaug in The Hobbit story is skipped! The protagonist of the Battle of the Five Armies did not participate! What a waste! A handful of the most exciting storylines in several books have been squandered. This resulted in the current plot being too bland. The protagonist always gave me the feeling of a passer-by. There was no story highlight that could be "pinched up" like a fist. I kept seeing the end of the Lord of the Rings storyline, drowning in disappointment again and again. Finally, here is a suggestion: Don't write about big scenes of war. The impression is that the writing is overwhelming. The author's writing style is far from elements such as blood and sacrifice. The delicate elegance is more appropriate. I still remember that the plot design of the Little Red Riding Hood chapter gave me a very good impression and a deep impression.

I have seen 87 pictures so far. The previous stories are very well written. First of all, I particularly like the poems the author added at the end of some chapters. They are very interesting and make people think deeply. Secondly, The Hobbit went by a bit too fast, as if nothing happened, and it just passed by. I also saw the author saying that some people might not like it, so that's understandable. I feel that this movie is very good, and if it matches the protagonist, it would have a different flavor if it were written a few more times. Let me talk about some shortcomings that I may not like very much. The author is a bit malicious towards Ron 🤭. I actually like this young man, of course, only in the movie. After all, he was really handsome when he was a child. I will talk about it when he grows up. I think it is quite right for the author to express his own thoughts in so many chapters. What we see through other people's descriptions is not necessarily everything. The author shows us that other characters have distinct personalities and are worth reading. I hope that I can do some plots in movies like Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them in the future. After all, I also like Grindelwald very much. I originally wanted to post it in a book review, but because I didn't have enough points, I thought about it and decided on it. I think your writing is very good. I believe you can give me a new experience

The writing is very good, but I only have one wish, not that the heroine is Hermione. I really saw enough. Hermione's character is not good enough as a friend, but as a girlfriend, only Ron can stand her. The protagonist obviously has his own secrets and style, and I don't recommend giving him a female lead.

This plot is too difficult to stretch. I ignored some small bumps in the front and suddenly pulled a knot. The emotional scene was originally stiff. It would be okay if Hermione usually interacted with HP. You have to strengthen it. If the strength is low, it will be worse. Why, do you have to bring your wife to fight with you? Wouldn't it be nice to have a fantasy world adventure for couples, add a heroine role, and write about the sweet daily life of love? Okay, the emotional scenes are not well written, so the scenes are forced, right? π_π

The heroine Hermione is boring at first glance. I haven't seen the movie and I don't understand what's so good about her.

When I look back at this book now, it seems that it was caused by the heroine issue. I feel like the author was mentally disturbed at the time, and all the posts raising this issue were deleted (including me). The heroine shares the golden finger of the protagonist. In order to strengthen the heroine by writing her to death during the decisive battle, these two points are fundamentally in conflict, let alone whether they are poisonous or not. If the female protagonist can share the golden finger of the male protagonist, it means that the author or the readers like this character very much, and then in order to strengthen the female protagonist and take her offline, this writing method is usually used for female protagonists who are not very popular... In short, I hope the author can learn a lesson and write a better book.

This month, I was really disgusted. I ordered more than 350 chapters of this book, and I got a huge one. There is another book, "The Warm Dragon", which has been updated to 700 chapters, and it also gave me a lot of trouble. I'm convinced. I really fucking regret subscribing to your books. When I see your books in the future, I won't read them in the introduction. Block directly.

The heroine was forced to be established, and she had to write it to death. The comments even asked me how to take her to the hiding place without dying. This is the most disgusting novel I have read in recent years.

Are you saying that the protagonist has the same strength as the world's final boss? Surrounded by three of the world's top magical creatures who can teleport Both himself and his girlfriend can use the Iron Armor Curse to avoid damage Let the world's final boss, a subordinate who has only taught a few times and hasn't learned magic for a few years, kill his woman? Classic, so classic The protagonist was able to react to Voldemort's Death Curse. He didn't have time to finish the little guy before he raised his hand. He didn't have time to put an armor spell on his woman. He didn't have time to let the phoenix teleport to the rescue. And teleport Hermione away to save her life The world's top combat power cannot protect her own woman when she is less than 2 meters away. If she hadn't tried her best to become a ghost, she would have lost my love forever This plot is so reasonable. Our author is the best at arranging plots. There is no more reasonable plot in the world than this.

The more I read, the more I feel that the heroine is awkward, sharing the protagonist's cheats, no, why, she really doesn't deserve it as far as this book is concerned

After reading Chapter 120, I feel that the protagonist does not need a heroine, and the development of the story will be more reasonable!

If you are not the bard that your title suggests, this book is destined to be a hit.

In the early stages of this book, I always felt that it was a dumpling made for Hermione's vinegar. It felt that the author did not like magic or anything like that, and he liked this book only for Hermione. . .

Either don't write the heroine, or don't write the heroine to death. If you are a literary youth, you will have to suffer the consequences. You should be able to tell it yourself in the background. Many readers must have left. Just take care of yourself. I will be wary of your books in the future, so that's all. Goodbye!

It's so boring. Old Deng may not be able to beat the protagonist now. But the protagonist has been playing house. He neither studies magic nor different worlds. He still has a movie mirror. He really treats the twenty-eight purebloods as fools. It's not so much that purebloods are investing in movie mirrors as they are investing in the protagonist

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The book is good and well written But the main character, I can only say that it is awkward, inexplicable and self-righteous. It's reasonable but makes the story look bad, that's all I can say.

Why bother letting Hermione go on the adventure together? Returning the vase, will Ino think Hermione is a vase? Is it possible that you dislike your family because they can't help you? Are you writing a fairy tale? Kill Hermione to death just to stay together and fly to another world? What about Hermione's parents? It doesn't matter if the protagonist can travel through time at will. You have to bring someone with you, and you have to be in the form of this female ghost. You will be resurrected later. Are you Tang San too? Don't you see how this is still popular now? And the death is also careless. Hermione is faster than the phoenix that can apparate? You're still blocking a gun, but you're comparing your reflexes with the Phoenix, the apex of magical creatures? What kind of ancient Korean drama are you writing here? I couldn't stand it any longer.

To be honest, the author said this novel was very good until Hermione died and was resurrected. The combination of fairy tale style and Harry Potter has a fresh and beautiful feeling. I personally feel that the popular fan books are not as good as this one. As a result, I had to write about a female protagonist, so that's fine. The character was not well established, which made me feel like I was forcing myself to make it right. This chapter says that so many people complained, but the author didn't even listen, and even increased his efforts because he thought he could do it. You can use this energy to expand the world view, try new writing methods, and develop new copies. The author does not add a heroine, or writes less as an embellishment. I feel that collecting and reading can be taken to a higher level 😳

The free bard is trapped by the chains called love😭😭😭

By Chapter 270 I couldn't hold on any longer. I agree with what someone said in the last chapter review. It's just a complete fool. The dungeon chapter is a bit sluggish, but you can still read it. Pansy pursues the Muggle theory because of the protagonist, and if you change his goal, you change it like a fool. By this chapter, I saw much more literary and youth-style environmental descriptions and psychological descriptions than the description of Pansy's changing target in the previous chapter. Then I suddenly realized that this author is good at literary youth and not good at anything else, whether it is plot or politics.

To be honest, I love this book very much, but I don't have the courage to read it a second time Let's talk about the advantages first 1. The combination of infinite flow and Hogwarts is my favorite theme The combination of different types of magic in different worlds will bring changes to Hogwarts. It is worth looking forward to 2. The author's writing style is warm And romance is simply addictive 3. Natural disaster-level fighting power, fairy tale ending 4. It is rare to write about the inner emotions of a "time travel + orphan" male protagonist Many male protagonists have similar characters, but few can really write about the loneliness, the kind of alienation from the whole world. This book is very good Maybe there are many more, I can't think of them at the moment, so let's praise these first The shortcomings are actually very obvious, the emotional line I am a Hermione fan, and there is no doubt that this is a major selling point of this book for me But, but, but I still feel that Xiaodi did not give an outline for the emotional line. How should I put it, in the first few semesters where there is almost no crisis, what kind of "protagonist group" will be born, and what kind of Hermione will be born, Xiao Di gave a very realistic answer Ino and Hermione also came together because of the loneliness, which is reasonable and has a little warmth But not enough Where is it not enough? Ino's contribution is not enough Relationships are a matter of two people, as is care and dedication The part where Hermione and Ino formally establish their relationship is very good, but the in-depth plot is extremely abrupt What he highlights is that Ino (or Xiaodi) is one-sided and does not pay enough attention to Hermione To put it bluntly, Xiaodi is at a loss. There is no better way to deepen the relationship between the two, and even give I don't have a common copy to participate Well, the above are all complaints, and I am full of regrets and dissatisfaction But this does not prevent me from still loving this work So, in general This is a good book that gave me a lot of feelings I personally recommend it Thank you, Mr. Xiaodi, for the story Hope we can meet in the next book

I fully booked it but then I saw that there was still a female lead, disgusting 🤢

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Will the author publish a new book? It makes me come here every once in a while to see if it is open 😭😭

Did the author forget something?

I'd say the first few chapters are pretty good, but I don't like the last few dozen chapters.

It's very well written. It's a pity that the author seems to have stopped writing.

Is the author not writing a book?