I'm in Tokyo and Have a Double System Loaded.

Dual systems, why are you still being a licker? The skill card is also marked as arbitrary, so it can't be a little bit new. I really don't like the plot.

Every time I find this kind of novel, there is a nasty young lady, who threatens and shouts to kill her every time, which is very dissuasive. It's not like I can't write without such a character. Isn't it disgusting to have a character like Price?

It feels like something is unfolding inexplicably

I admire you for being able to smile even under duress. I can't stand to watch it anyway.

The beginning of the story is unbearable. The eldest lady of Linghe Ji Dao arranged for someone to break the legs of the eldest son of the medical consortium. This is a parallel world Lostbelt.

The young master of a pharmaceutical group was bullied by a young lady of the Yakuza and had his legs broken. He couldn't stop laughing. What kind of Yakuza can touch a top chaebol like the Porcelain Pharmaceutical Group? If the Yakuza is really so awesome, why should they be a Yakuza? Why not just wash their hands of it? This plot is as outrageous as a street kid beating up the young master of a landlord's family, and the landlord's family doesn't even dare to let out a single fart.

The classic is about being a dog for a woman. I wanted to recreate the nine-legged dog, but it was a pity that I couldn't draw it like a tiger.

Looking at Chapter 6, the protagonist lacks courage. Personally, I don't think there's any need to read it later.

It's quite beautiful, but Riqing is really difficult to mix. I hope the author can persevere.

There is no need to watch it. The dual system is still acting like this. I was threatened by others at the beginning and acted like a dog to others.

The protagonist is too weak and has no momentum.

Explain some of the issues in the text. 1. There is no plot of pretending to be a boyfriend or girlfriend. I don't want to write such a model drama, and I don't know how to write it. 2. The character background of Hojo Kiriko is based on Shinomiya Kaguya, mixed with some elements of beauty, strength and misery that are poorly written outside, but I haven't had time to write it yet. If you say that my character is copied from Ku Kong Shake Ai, I won't refute it. 3. The male protagonist is a very ordinary hard-working classic Asasi young male protagonist, with a lot of people outside and nothing to talk about. 4. Shirakawa Hoshino's social fear attribute is taken from Xiao Lonely, the pink-haired anime emoticon character who was very popular the year before last. The miko element is my own xp. 6. The beginning of the plot development is abrupt because the first five chapters that were originally planned to be uploaded were deleted. Originally, the villain system wanted to write a more villainous story. The first date with the heroine was scheduled to be a walk in the park on a rope (the hero leads the heroine). The result was not given to me, so I had no choice but to temporarily change the character and outline of the heroine, and took a more conservative route. Finally. I'm sorry for bringing you an unpleasant reading experience.

Does the author still update?

Why does this male protagonist look like a turtle man?

Come on, author, I believe you, your writing is very good.

Can the author update? , Even if you update it once a day,

It feels a bit strange. My girlfriend is a bad young lady. Although it unfolds in a similar way, at least she has logic. Qing Ye is studying the male protagonist. As they get along with each other, he discovers the secret of the male protagonist, becomes more interested, and finally gets together. Mei Ji was attracted by the male protagonist's magical pills and finally fell into ruin. You are so baffled, just because of your appearance? There is no attraction at all. As a young lady, haven't you seen a few handsome men? Suddenly the male protagonist was asked to play the boyfriend, and it unfolded inexplicably. It looked weird.

You have to be a little bit defensive when reading this novel. It is obvious that the author cannot grasp the development of the plot. The characters are charming in the early stage, but later they become completely tools to advance the plot. The author's plot collapses inexplicably. I guess the author has an outline, but this is the same as not having one at all. The outline should be that the male and female protagonists get to know each other, go to the female protagonist's house as a guest, the female protagonist is attracted by the male protagonist's cheating, the male protagonist likes the second or second female protagonist, and then the plot advances. But the problem with the author is that no matter why the plot develops like this, there is no logic at all, and it is pushed forward forcefully, making the characters look like this and then like that. If your writing is particularly good, like the Lord of Mysteries, it is okay for each character to have his own ideas, but the author's writing can only be said to be excellent, not to the point where he is familiar with it and can handle it with ease, which makes this novel very strange. But again, it's not that you can't read the novel, or that it's full of poisonous points. Some parts are still very interesting, but you have to ignore a lot of weird things.

Shen Nong has been ranked, there are no minefields, and it is unexpectedly very good-looking. I hope the author will continue to work hard and avoid any minefields.