Cultivating Immortality in a Shared Universe, Answering to No One

Well, what attracts me most about zombie movies is the ritualistic Taoist practices, the sense of security brought by setting up various methods in ghostly places, and the various telekinetic battles and the self-consistent logic of mystical knowledge. What you've written feels like cultivation of immortality. There are no rituals, just pure magical power.

The author chooses five outstanding figures from Maoshan, but the protagonist and the others are all from the outer Maoshan sect who returned to their ancestral home. The inner Maoshan sect, so powerful, can't even produce a single outstanding figure? Tell me, is that possible? The author's reasoning is that the inner Maoshan sect is small and insignificant, lacking talent.

Does your book have a prequel? I'm completely confused.

Before his master arrived, he had to figure things out on his own. Once he reached Maoshan, he acquired resources and worked in seclusion, yet he didn't even read a single page of the Daoist Canon, despite Maoshan opening its library. And now he's supposed to be able to create his own cultivation techniques?

I regret subscribing again, I'm devastated! The author is not only a brother-supporting demon, but also has an incredibly strong nanny-like personality; wherever she goes, she's a nanny for someone else. I'm dropping this, dropping it.

This is a case of "selling dog meat under the guise of mutton," and it has absolutely nothing to do with lawlessness; it's full of positive energy.

The protagonist's advancement is rapid and quite enjoyable to read, but it lacks some climaxes and dramatic twists. The story of Zhang Zhenren described in the book should be incorporated into the protagonist's life, keeping him constantly busy navigating various perilous situations and dealing with the schemes of various old monsters.

No cheat codes. And his aptitude wasn't that great either. Yet, during the competition, he only cultivated for a few years before matching Shi Jian's level. At least Shi Jian had a spiritual body. It's like in cultivation novels where a top-grade spiritual root's cultivation speed is the same as yours with a mid-grade spiritual root. A few clever ideas, and his cultivation speed skyrockets. It's just that the transmigrator is incredibly lucky. It's illogical.

It's absurd. According to the book, how could the Ming Dynasty be replaced by the Qing Dynasty? There were so many Yang Shen True Lords, and their combat power was becoming increasingly outrageous, even attracting meteorites! Why didn't the protagonist just go to Japan and bring one down? If he succeeded, it would be a great achievement; if he lost, it would at least weaken Japan's power.

It only gets somewhat interesting on the mountain, but after descending, it just follows the plot. Characters are introduced intermittently, but the plot development is neither fast-paced nor particularly dramatic. It's as bland and uninteresting as chicken bones—tasteless and easily discarded.