Secret: I Can Swallow Extraordinary Characteristics

It feels a bit like when I first started watching Mystery. Open the map and world view bit by bit from the perspective of the fan protagonist.

Chapter 20: It was okay before, but then you pretended to be a slap in the face and ran a brothel. Do you have any serious illness?

Writing a fan novel is even more tedious than the original work. It's more than twenty chapters in, and I'm still fumbling for the golden finger stupidly. I don't take any action, I can only think, daydream?

Because I like it, I wanted to write a mystery fanfic for a long time, but as soon as I started writing, I found that I only vaguely remembered various settings, and I could only read the mystery three or four times and take notes. But the performance of this book is really poor. It currently has 100,000 words, and there have been zero additions to the collection in a few days. The collection ratio is too bad, and it cannot be promoted in the test market. It's really unbearable. I am also reflecting on whether I have written something wrong somewhere. Looking back, I found that the pace was indeed slow after chapter 20, and I was also changing the outline. As for the rest, I can only say that it is serious. The limited level is a problem that cannot be solved in the short term. For those of you who have read this book, please read it. If you have any comments, please post them here.

The main character is written just like FW. I came to read the novel, not to be pissed off.

6. After reading more than 20 chapters, the protagonist still doesn't know what kind of potion he took. Is his extraordinary ability just a decoration? I have been whining for a long time, not knowing what to do.

The first eighteen chapters seemed okay, and then I moved on to urban entertainment. The protagonist's IQ fell directly into the abyss.

Doesn't look good. Where does number 23 come from among the 22 paths leading to the sefirah? Unless the protagonist goes through it together, this path is still given to him by his mother. Isn't this superfluous?

I read a little bit, it's a little green at the beginning but the writing is okay, I just don't understand why it starts in a brothel.

More than ten chapters have passed. What does the author want to express?

A group travel is uncomfortable to watch, and it is even more uncomfortable if it is just a setting of whether there is a time traveler interspersed in this way. What's more, it's even more poisonous to start writing the original recovery in Sequence 7 when the protagonist is not even a demigod. The original will will even try to clean up the pillars of the past! When you start playing this Sequence 7, your Will Revival is quite awesome. . . . .

It's a bit poisonous~~The plot is very slow! After Chapter 26, it will be a running account!

There is a book the same as yours, with three chapters of Demigod and thirty chapters of Half Old Days. It has been cut.

There are too few tags and I can't find them even if I search for secrets ()

I read the first ten chapters, and the writing is good and the plot is compact. Why no one reads it, maybe 1. There are too few tags, and many people who search for mysterious fandoms can't find it 2. The first chapter seems to be a bit informative, and there are too many names of new characters (foreigners' names are difficult to remember) 3. Many readers of the fanfic come for the original characters, and the original plot is a little difficult to write 4. Fans pursue cool writing, and now novels are pursuing short and fast, especially fanfics , you should shake off the baggage at the beginning, such as the protagonist's golden finger, special features, etc., And then push the plot 5. The opening does not meet the public taste. The assassin's potion that Cowherd and the protagonist thought greatly affected the readers' first impression of the novel. Many people who read the novel are straight men and cannot see the protagonist being bullied/transgender. In this regard, it is necessary to make it clear whether the protagonist will be transgender (Witch Division has its own audience), and you can make a short statement related to the work. 6. Recommendation problem. Many fans did not give recommendations in the early stage, and the number of words was too few. If the number of words increases and there is still no recommendation later, it may be a recommendation problem from Qidian. I have cut books in the past, and those with poor grades seem to affect the recommendation. In short, this is my humble opinion after reading the first ten chapters. I hope the author will not be discouraged and can be helpful to you.

I've only read a few chapters, can the names be unified? Now it's Wang Tao, and now Robin's, it's too fragmented.

Group wear, are you sure you can write it well?

It's just two knives at the beginning, cutting all the way to the old days. To put it bluntly, traveling through the mysteries means doing three things: taking medicine, taking medicine, and taking medicine.

Very impressive🙂😁

If a new author is not famous, few people will read him. As long as he writes well, more people will read him.