
Super Seminary: Sword of the Benevolent
超神学院:仁者之剑
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 189k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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14Fans
46Chapters
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Personal opinion
To tell the truth, this book feels good among the Super God series I have read. The scientific and technological strength and spiritual and cultural thoughts are all there. How can I say it is very reasonable. It does not praise the earth too much, nor exalts the stars too much, nor does it give people an awkward feeling. Some settings have been added to make the book reasonable. I can see that it is setting the stage for a big one later. But it feels like the forward swing is too long. Looking at it this way, I think this book will be a bit long. There is a segment in the original book of Super Seminary where Kesha talks about God's judgment. It is difficult to understand this segment in the original book of Super Seminary. But this book explains it. It still clearly depicts the gap between the perspective of gods in interstellar civilization and that of ordinary people. As an ordinary person, it is easy to assume the role of the protagonist. But this book has a really long lead time, and it hasn't been fun in the early stages. And I think the author's foreshadowing in the early stage is too detailed, and this style must be continued later, otherwise it will really feel very different and the gap is huge. The justice of angels in this book is really not something we "ordinary people" can understand. It is an order that requires serious thinking before we can understand it. The writing is relatively detailed, to be honest. Personal evaluation is definitely Xiancaowen. However, this person found it difficult to write. Because I have seen a lot. It's because the front part is relatively ordinary and there is less participation. The protagonist in the fanfic is relatively less involved, so few people insist on reading it. Maybe I know this book might be interesting, but I don't have time and it's not fun. Will abandon the book early. I hope the author keeps writing. This book really feels like a three-body novel that suddenly appeared in the original science fiction novel. Also, you suddenly appeared in the Super Seminary fandom. Of course, this is not comparing you to the Three-Body Problem, because this kind of thing is not good. I just think you wrote a different feeling from the super seminary fan fiction. Just like the alternative style when the Three-Body Problem appeared in science fiction novels. If it can be put on the shelves, I will contribute a share of the first order.
It's okay. It's very similar to the original work, but it's not very different. The meaning of the protagonist's existence is that it has no meaning 😒
The protagonist of Flowing Water, the iron-clad Qilin
This is something relatively new among Super Gods.
Looking at so many super god fans, this one is quite unique in its genre. The protagonist neither kneels down when he sees a woman nor licks her in various ways. The most novel thing is that the protagonist is not a time traveler, and there are no plug-ins. I am curious about what the author will write in the future.
I hope there won't be many female leads, but there will be Hexi
It's a good start. How long has it been since the war in Juxia City?
I'm more curious about what the author thinks about the heroine
The beginning is a blind date with Qilin, but it only advances the plot without making any substantial progress. Most super god fans basically kneel down and lick each other when they see an angel. The protagonist in the author's story has no reaction when he sees an angel. He just needs to work. I am very curious whether the author wants to have no heroine, a harem, or a single heroine.
Let's talk about the plot first. The meaning of the protagonist's existence is basically zero at present. Going to chapter 30? The background introduction said that the protagonist is awesome and smart, and Qilin is inexplicably so-called rustic, but when it comes to Lianfeng and Yan, he is glib. When summoning the Xiong Soldier Company, you spent one and a half to two chapters explaining that you didn't want Liu Chuang and Ge Xiaolun, but you still accepted them. Even when you accepted Ge Xiaolun, did you really want Qiangwei to seduce them? Let's not mention that you are friends. Even if you are not friends, you are still comrades-in-arms. Just do it like this. As for the character, Liu Chuang is still a gangster. Later, in order to explain why he accepted him, he even made a special plot that he was not a football rapist. You didn't write that Liu Chuang and Ge Xiaolun met because Liu Chuang led someone to kidnap a girl in an alley. Don't say that they just went to get to know each other. Are you saying that he has basic values? Outrageous. Ge Xiaolun's classic diaosi man and love brain. As I said before, if a reader hadn't cursed me in this chapter and said that the author really wanted to create a seductive plot, I could only say that it would be outrageous to do this in 2024. Rui (changed to Rui in this book) Mengmeng became the granddaughter of a teacher or the person in charge of the Super Theological Seminary, so why did she work everywhere in the past? Social practice for young ladies? Finally, there is the protagonist. The old man plays the Riddler every night, and it takes 42 (likely) for Goldfinger to arrive, making it so mysterious that he doesn't say anything about it. When it comes to treating female characters, he behaves like a young boy from the countryside to Qilin. He turns to Lianfeng and the others and knows how to speak nice words, and handles them with ease. Oh, so you are the King of the Sea. In terms of talent, the previous high evaluations turned into civilian positions, and they were still on the management side. I can't comment on the management side of an IP like Super God with force and technology. Conclusion, except for the relatively niche topic, I don't recommend following it. It's the kind of book that you can just take a look at once you think of it.
Good books are not popular series, silent support
It's very special, keep going, don't stop
Sorry, I read your book, and I don't know what your theme is throughout the book. Improve technology, and you will live with scientists who are not. In the super seminary, it is completely a world of blood. If you don't have super genes, you will always be an ordinary person. This is simply more fixed than those worlds of cultivating immortals. You, the protagonist, will not just be like this, let it always be like this.
Qilin
Original author: Linglan
Who is the heroine🙂
Hey hey hey, it's rare to find such a great book. Please read more. It would be great to add He Xi as the heroine 😏
Wife😌
The writing is quite good, but the flavor of romance novels (movies and TV series) is too strong.
What is the author's main purpose? After reading more than 20 chapters, I still don't understand the meaning of the protagonist's current existence. Removing the protagonist will not affect the integrity of the plot at all!
Regardless of whether the book is dead or not, this is it. Nothing can be changed in the end. The original work can survive so many people because the screenwriter left it alone. The demon gluttony kills all over the place. Even the third generation has to kneel down. Not to mention that Deno is a poor man's civilization. Don't pull this sword because there is no successor. Otherwise, what? It's awesome. To put it bluntly, it means poverty. It's so poor that two main gods can only support one Galaxy Force. Look at Godkiller Liu Chuang's awesome genes and use them to kill monsters in the later stage. If you tilt resources, Galaxy Force can't keep up, so you can only find ways to attract sponsorship. The narrow term justice restricts the entire development. . .
Well written, thoughts are the soul
What is the role of the protagonist in the early stage? He is worthy of the attention of people from the super seminary. He has neither super genes nor scientific research wizards.
A lot of groundwork was laid, and then a heart of benevolence and righteousness was developed. It can be understood that in the later period, he gave chicken soup to a lot of people and wrote about benevolence and righteousness. However, Jilan knows that the laws of all things in the universe are irregular, so the so-called heart of benevolence and righteousness is just the justice of the definer. People say that Jilan thinks he is a P, and the author uses him to redefine him. Imagine that in the future there will be a dog-headed military advisor plus chicken soup for the soul.