Xianyang

I have read about 30,000 to 400,000 words, and I feel that the overall quality is okay. It is a genius, and there are actually very few protagonists with brains and perseverance. The relationships and personalities of some characters are also very interesting, such as the Eight Immortals, Ling Lingxiu and so on. But the problem is that the plot is a bit weak and there are not many highlights. The author keeps transitioning from one plot to the next without any connection. Especially after coming to the East China Sea, for example, he helped the Dai family defend against enemies, went to collect evil spirits, and found the Taoist book of human immortality. Immediately afterwards, he went to the auction, met Fu Xixuan and others, and was then taken to Jiuyou to refine evil spirits. This is more like a running account. The individual plots themselves are not rich, and the space used is relatively small. The conflicts between these plots are not obvious, and the memory points are not very deep. This does not count as foreshadowing. Foreshadowing requires sufficient memory points. In comparison, Ling Lingxiu did this very well. Because she is one of the more important NPCs in the plot of Taiguang Mountain, and the plot of Taiguang Mountain is not short, and her portrayal is relatively profound, and her character is also relatively prominent. However, Dai Shi, Fu Xixuan and others occupy very little space and cannot form enough memory points. Moreover, similar to the problem with the plot, the author allows readers to see too many NPCs at once. These NPCs will rob important NPCs of the plot, especially some NPCs are simply insignificant, such as the protagonist's classmates, this one is under the sect of that uncle, and that one is under the sect of this uncle. I hope the author can write a large plot in detail, with relatively more connections between the plots, and focus on the main NPCs of the plot, so the effect should be better.

I feel like this book is written by a mature author. There are definitely flaws, but there are many advantages to supplement it. The plot has ups and downs. The author has his own ideas and can implement them well. I didn't think it was slow. The plot was fast and decisive, not sloppy, and very comfortable. Especially the opening chapter was really refreshing and had a comfortable rhythm. Some plots may be a little less pleasant, but there are different surprises later on. Mature, decisive, straightforward, unwavering, has his own ideas, and has certain compromises with the market. It feels like it was written by someone who has some experience and accumulation, is in middle age, and is on an upward trajectory in work and life.

In the past, when I sat in a well and looked at the sky, I saw the "Fairy Sun" like a frog at the bottom of a well seeing the moon. It was only after I wrote my book that I discovered that I saw the "Fairy Sun"... Just like a mayfly seeing the blue sky! God has finally returned to his throne!

I write too little every day, and I just lost some of the fun.

It's a pity that I can't break through the limitations of the immortal world. When I was 5,000 years old, my old injury recurred. It was also the time of my birthday. Countless monks in the Chaotic Star Sea gathered on Deyu Island after learning that I was not even strong enough. So what? I still fought off countless opponents, but someone I trusted still seriously injured me to death. Alas, now I, Xu Heng, have been reborn in an unknown place. I must return to the peak of my previous life

Come back, Daojun Dadan~ My most proud belief~ The green mark is still vivid in my mind~ Tears are flowing inexplicably~ Always remember to please you~ There are still eight thousand chasing you at the peak~ Purchase all the rebels~ It's not tiring to code all night long~

The author should change the name to testicle removal surgery

Just as I expected, the eunuch is here again. He even banned me before. It's disgusting🤢

I had a golden egg removal surgery and wrote two books to remove it twice. Now I am completely a eunuch, right?

It can only be said that it is a matter of character. It was the same last time. I didn't lack money but I still came to hang out and got scolded. If you are sick, seek treatment.

There are many reasons why eunuch authors have written books. Do you know how many eunuch books you have written? The most important thing in life is integrity

If I were the protagonist and you killed me, it would be fine. Since I am not dead, I will have to do it to you again if I have the chance. What is an unreasonable disaster?

I have posted before that this book must be broken and someone must cut it. Sure enough.

The writing is very good, but I am afraid of eunuchs, but judging from the author's name, there is a possibility of eunuchs. Does the golden elixir removal surgery involve removing the two lower eggs? Isn't that a eunuch?

Please tell me what books you guys are reading. Xianxia is all about the system. It makes me vomit after reading it.

Man what can i say? You are back!

One Immortal Industry and one Immortal Yang. Can these two be completed by the eunuch?

The eunuch is fine, the key is not to write anymore, at least post a single chapter to explain it, and just disappear. With such a character, if I read your book in the future, I will be kicked in the head by a donkey.

The former imitates the wrong path, and the latter effect is rotten. It's just a mediocre work that follows the traces.

I really want to say, give the pig's feet the whole Taoist monk 😥😥😥 It's like a eunuch. It was my lifelong hatred to reject the foot sword master.

I'm not in the mood to update after seeing such results, but you deserve it. If you don't work hard, your new book results are not bad. You have talent in writing novels, but you can't make a living. With your attitude, who do you think you are?

It is recommended to use the excuse of "severe heat stroke but the readers don't understand and still complain", so as to blame the readers like the previous book🤣

The writing is very good, but combined with the situation of the previous book and the update of this book, it should be a eunuch soon.

Eunuchs have 10,000 reasons, but persistence requires no reason

I've also looked for similar novels, but I've only read two of them and they're still slow to update!

I think it's a bit too much to criticize eunuchs all over the comments section. After all, this book is really well written. If the author diligently updates it, he might not be able to reverse the criticism. Come on.

The first round of recommendations will be tomorrow. Continuing reading is more important for new books. Please follow up 😭. Enter the main line immediately.

"Xianyang" Sanqingshan theme activity. Subdued the dragon and tiger, adjusted Kanli, and cultivated the aura to shine through the room. Entering the trance and participating in the mysteries, cultivating the celestial yang and unraveling the underworld. After a hundred years of practice, all Taoist skills will be completed, and only after a thousand kalpas will they grow and bear fruit. From then on, it soared to the distant Qingming, and ascended to the nine heavens to rank among the immortals. —— In ancient times, 'heng' came from 'moon', and the moon was between heaven and earth, so it had the meaning of long-lasting and eternity. Since he is reincarnated as a human being, Xu Heng must write his own story to live up to his name. Tells the story of a man who has lived in two lifetimes and sought immortality. To thank all book friends for their company during this time. Here is a draw for book friends who have fully subscribed (the fan value reaches Apprentice) who leave a message on this post. Sanqingshan Ticket + Ropeway Ticket (the expiration date is August 31, 2024, electronic ticket) Sanqinghong tea gift box, 2 pieces Sanqinghong special tea souvenir, 3 pieces (random) Each fully subscribed book lover will receive a number, and the winning book friend will be selected using random numbers. Thank you for your support of Xianyang! I wish all book friends good health! May all go well with you! (The final right of interpretation belongs to Xianyang operation team)

This is the best book written in the past 20 years. Any platinum author should be worshiped at your feet.

In recent years, the last book is one of the rare good fairy tales, and it is hearty and hearty. Although it is a bit unfinished, the length of the full text is more than 1 million words. Compared with some 3 million words, which is not enough, for 10 million words of novels, the small unfinished words can be ignored. However, not long after the beginning of this book, I felt uncomfortable reading it. The story was too forced. Maybe the author of the last book has already written all the heroes and heroines in his heart, but there is nothing to write about in this book.