Rebirth Starts with Rich Sister Chasing After Her

See for yourself whether what you write looks like a pig coin

The first chapter was a bit confusing, and I couldn't understand it, which conflicted with my values ​​😄

Very strange. It was not a smooth read and I felt there was something wrong with the writing. Because I read other rebirth articles very smoothly. This is what makes me feel weird and a bit strenuous.

The beginning of junior high school really discourages people from quitting. I saw the latest chapter and am still in junior high school. Not many readers want to see junior high school students fall in love and have careers. It is recommended to enter the senior year of high school or even enter college as early as possible.

Why do you write rebirth stories now that you have a daughter-in-law? If you don't object to the harem, it's just a bit awkward.

Why give a second marriage to a wife from a previous life?

If it had a single heroine, I could barely watch it. Now, forget it.

The parents part was very uncomfortable to watch. I didn't know what the author wanted to express. I came here to read a refreshing article, not to be educated. The author seemed to want to write something about family relationships, but what I saw was a stubborn parent hindering the development of the protagonist, and I didn't see what kind of harbor this family had for the protagonist. I didn't feel as warm as in the Lin family. If this harbor means that every time the protagonist makes a decision, they will come out to question and object, and the protagonist has to spend extra energy to persuade them, I think there is really no need to exist. In reality, my approach is to become financially independent as soon as possible to avoid them. In novels, I suggest that the author should write less of this part, because as a reader, I find it difficult to read.

Why don't you cut it as soon as possible? I don't think anyone will see it.

The writing is still good, I'll give you the recommendation vote first, and I'll keep following it once it's on the shelves and the quality remains the same!

The first poisonous point is the reason why the female protagonist jumped into the river The second poisonous point is that the female protagonist appears anxious and the male protagonist gets anxious immediately The third poisonous point is that the male protagonist has a brain attack

The author is probably a wise man, what did he write?

I'm still in the third grade of junior high school after such a long time. Now I don't have any close contact. It's like reading eunuchs.

Junior high school starts, what can I say.