Three Kingdoms: Beginning with Saving Guan Yu

The first fifty chapters are quite interesting, but the fifteen chapters from fifty to sixty-five are, to put it mildly, like a rotten job. I don't know what the author's purpose is for being so stupid. . Because I can't catch up on reading, I have to postpone the climax until it's released? I think you just don't understand why you keep reading. At the beginning, you said you couldn't just take advantage of Mi Fang's complete trust in the protagonist. You said that the position was not good + he couldn't deal with Mi Zhu. That was okay and you could convince the readers. But later on, you were so happy that the scene was full of yin and yang. What did you mean? Your protagonist knew the danger and made a lot of arrangements, and ended up writing fifteen chapters and eighty-nine pages of stuff. How about you superficially cater to two chapters and then go back and slowly figure it out? Then write ten or so secret chapters to prepare for intrigues and profit, and take advantage of Soochow to come to Mi Fang to rebel, and then take advantage of Mi Fang to treat the protagonist as her most trusted confidant. It then enters the climactic city defense battle; otherwise it is compressed into three chapters and about 20 pages of a fast-paced and high-intensity night chase battle. The protagonist constantly reveals all kinds of trump cards to severely frustrate the opponent's psychology, giving the reader a sense of satisfaction. In the end, although the losses were heavy, the core strategic power of the senior generals was preserved, and the plot continued after the 65th chapter. What have you written now? The protagonist first expresses his sincerity to strengthen Mi Fang's trust. In addition, Mi Fang relies heavily on the protagonist's military strength at the critical moment. In a great situation, the protagonist directly pulls the big dick just to satisfy his lips. Then the only visible benefit of the protagonist's doing this is—— All the generals who came out with him died in order to cut off the enemy, most of the soldiers he brought out died, and he himself was seriously injured, and then the protagonist, the "initiator", is still there. The soldiers and generals are all close, and the man has character. You may be trying to win the favor of idealistic Shu fans, but real Shu fans will only find it embarrassing. What did the protagonist get in the end, the tokens that several generals "carried around", and the final forcibly applied patch - the loyalty of the Nancheng soldiers disappeared with Mi Fang's act of killing the general for no reason. Mi Fang killed the general for no reason because the protagonist's betrayal made him suspicious, making him act as if what the protagonist did was necessary. If you want to say that Xu Xutu will be blamed by Mi Fang when you go back, you Mi Fang can ignore so many spies coming in and out of Soochow and tell lies + seal the mouths of so many generals present + directly ignore the proven results of the king's personal guards around the protagonist. Now you can also blame the protagonist, saying that he rebelled and sealed off the North City, held a banquet, killed all the generals, and took all their tokens. To be honest, if you don't need to rely on this book to make a living, then reset the following chapters. If necessary, open a new book early. It is basically foreseeable that you will die suddenly when you subscribe to the shelf. . As a side note, as a person who has written a million-word novel and the last one was about Changjin Lake, you still don't understand that low-level red and forced sensationalism are the most poisonous points in novels?

You prepared fifty chapters in the early stage, but it takes another ten chapters to run back to the military camp? Will it take dozens more chapters to defend Gangneung? Wouldn't it take two hundred chapters to save Guan Yu? It's too watery to write like this.

If we really need to speed up the progress, it is too slow, otherwise it will be difficult for readers to follow it.

I really can't stand it anymore. What the hell is this style of writing these days? It feels like someone else is reading a book to me. Each chapter can have more than half of the narration. What about the characters? How about character descriptions in novels? The protagonist will say a sentence or two, what kind of novel or history book is this? Pull it down, it's a dead thing

The pace is really too slow. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters, but after I got to Jiangling, I became more and more bored. The story of Mi Fang took so long to write, and my passion was exhausted. The key is to follow your pace, let alone save Guan Yu, defend Jiangling and repel Wu. I don't know how long it will take to write. You keep putting off the plot that everyone wants to see. No wonder you can't follow it 😅

What does it mean to be as unsupervised as possible? How do you ask people to follow your words? As a newcomer, you don't have the fans you've accumulated before. This is always the case. How many words are there now? How can a newcomer's history article be read to 500,000 words? Is it okay?

Historically, it is unlikely that Mi decided to surrender beforehand. He surrendered after he felt there was no hope after the siege.

It's not that the author is not good at writing, but after reading it, the plot accounted for 1/3, and the remaining 2/3 is used to explain the plot, explain the actions of the protagonist, and explain the protagonist's thoughts. In other words, 60 chapters of the 100-chapter novel are explanations: why he did this, why he thought this, why such a thing happened, and what is the historical truth. Seriously affects the quality of the entire novel

65 Chapters, 130,000 words, and no battle has been fought. It is difficult to retain readers. And it's still in the water

Either concentrate it a little, and if it's water, use a large amount to fill it up. You can't use both.