I, Broly, Am the Chat Group Owner

Send a planet-destroying bomb to each group member so that the strong ones can be screened out

Personally, I don't think you should follow the path of Super Saiyan Transformation. After all, the essence of life has not changed and you are still a mortal. It is best to truly become a god and become a real Saiyan God (not the kind that is man-made by external forces) and then gradually become stronger.

The 12,000 King Vegeta. It's true that the dragon ball's energy is Tiger Balm, which can convert any attribute. People can explode planets at 12,000. I really don't think there is any need for other functions. Unless you are a person on the scientific research side like Dr. Chen, you can just make a wave to study the energy slash, or improve the quality to become a god of destruction or an angel.

I'm very curious about how you will continue writing this book? I was personally attracted to Dragon Ball. When I saw it was Broly from Dragon Ball, I clicked on it. I don't care about chat groups or anything like that. Most of the characters in the group are people from a low-level world of martial arts. How will you write about it later? When you write about high combat power like Dragon Ball, American comics, etc., These characters in the world of low martial arts are destined to be reduced to small transparent background versions. Except for a few exceptions of course. And now most of the chat groups are domestic figures. If American comics or two-dimensional comics appear in the future, it will be too inconsistent. How long can a group of low martial arts writers write about the world? And most of them are just a routine, which is really boring to watch. The protagonist's presence is so low. I was attracted to Dragon Ball. What I wanted to see was real men fighting with fists and fists. Or a duel between high-end combat forces, you are trying to sell someone else's meat.

The state of free and extreme mental power is really handsome.

After reading Chapter 20, the poisonous points are as follows 1. The protagonist sends the information of each group member to the group file. Not to mention the mental shock and impact the group members received because they knew that he was a character in the novel and comic. His whole life was seen by others and said something unpleasant, normal people may turn against each other 2. The author writes group portrait articles, but most of the reading The points are all for the title of your book. This kind of writing discourages some people, and the group writing should also be focused. The protagonist's role is really too light. It doesn't matter whether it gives me a feeling or not. It should be the most important role, but in the end it feels dispensable. It was fine in the first dozen chapters, but after reading Chapter 20, I already feel like I am about to collapse.

I feel that Super 4, Super 1 to Super 3, and Super Sai Shen to Ziyijiyi respectively focus on Jing (body), Qi (energy), Shen (spirit) Super 1 to Super 3 are all bursts of Qi, and the strongest output is the Qigong wave. Jing (body) is just the carrier, and Shen (spirit) only stimulates. If the Shen (spirit) is not enough, it can only explode in a short period of time. The Spiritual Time House has trained the Shen to be able to control and maintain it for a long time (Super One full power). After the Qi burst reaches super three, the body and spirit cannot keep up, and the battery life is extremely short, but a turtle style Qigong can still annihilate Buu. Super Four stimulates blood vessels, causing a huge explosion of physical strength and strength, while Qi is only driven to increase. Gorilla Rampage is the minimum requirement for spirit, and Super Race is the minimum requirement for Qi. Therefore, when Super 4 came out, it was not as explosive as when it first became a Super Sailor. It was completely controllable, it focused on melee combat, and its battery life was not short. In the end, my own energy output was not enough to defeat the evil dragon, so I had to rely on energy bombs. Super Blue is a great improvement in the spiritual realm. It has minute control over strength and energy, and one force can produce 100% of the original effect. At the beginning, God was not enough. After Wukong felt that state with the help of external forces, his spiritual state increased rapidly. Once he reached the standard, he could change by himself. Later, he would reach a higher spiritual state. To sum up, if the three flowers of essence, energy and spirit gather at the top and grow in an all-round way, you should be able to go straight to the super four boundary breakthrough of Dragon Ball Space-time Chapter and the white super four form that merges with the ultimate freedom

It is normal for Dragon Ball's combat power to collapse, because using data instead of combat power is a bit nonsense. It is probably because the level does not increase and the quantity of qi drives the quality. After reaching a certain level, the quantity of qi no longer means much, because everyone has the same quality. At most, you have more and I have less. As long as it is not a protracted war of several years, it is difficult to tell the difference. After all, the level of life has not changed much. Whether it is from some Sunshine in the parallel world Goku was killed by a heart attack, or Sun Wukong from the Dragon Ball Super world was shot through the heart with a laser gun by Frieza's men and almost died... And in the movie version of Time and Space Brawl, Goku from the parallel world of Dragon Ball Z transformed before Based on the basic combat power of Qi, the transformed Super Saiyan Four and Dragon Ball Super's Super Blue Goku have a 50-50 fight. It can be seen that the amount of Qi in the later stage is difficult to distinguish the combat power. They all make the quality of Qi change. The God of Destruction is stronger than the God of Destruction.

It's still the same as other chat groups, but the identity of the time travel is different. Compared with other books that also play the role of everyone being equal, this book is different. The protagonist in the group is the group leader + the first in force + the only information position. Others basically assume that the protagonist is the leader of the group, and they are also called the protagonist "Master Group Leader" The previous problem is that the protagonist is a bit invisible except for providing a system, and Zhang Jiao and Ip Man speed through the world too fast. Although Ip Man's battle through Japan is indeed a bit enjoyable, it feels like it comes and goes quickly. And then the protagonist has almost nothing to do except eat and show off his muscles, which is too bland.

I have read a lot of this type of novels, and I sincerely offer my opinions. I am not trying to be arrogant. Readers and authors make two-way choices. As long as they are not deliberately disgusting, everyone can get together and relax. I will go back to the topic This type of novels, from being pretentious in the past to being a poison, shows that there is still development The most important thing is to determine a style, so I chose There must be certain trade-offs in the characters and plots chosen The most important thing when writing novels like this, the most essential point is that you have to grasp the character and charm of the original characters Don't make some brainless names that are just a trick, just a bad job From the current point of view, the author has no general problems except for serious flooding. The main problem lies in the lack of ability to grasp the rhythm and the plot. Insufficient development ability Choose this type, either focusing on the original plot of each world, or focusing on the character and growth description of each group member You can pick Aizen, pick Uchiha Madara It is not possible to pick aliens, let alone things like intelligence, aliens only have primitive hunting instincts You cannot personify him You can only know the subtleties of the work, but in fact the author The biggest problem for the author now is that he doesn't know what to portray. There are many characters that he has not understood before. The problem is that he haslessly brought his own subjective consciousness into it Putting his own personality into it The most important thing for this kind of novel is to objectively depict the personality of the original character and not to inject the author's own personality lightly If you want to create a character, doesn't there have to be a protagonist? All in all, I hope the author will make progress.