American Comics: From Dimensional Demon to Mastermind

I just hope that no one will die every time I cause trouble.

You still have to rely on villains to cause trouble. Bring in those villains who are top-notch in causing trouble. There is no need to arrange the plot. Just fine-tune the original plot and strengthen it. It will be a big wave, and then let the superheroes save the world. After that, let everyone rest for a few months. After everyone has had enough rest, we will arrange a new wave of plots to continue.

Emmmmm, mixed worlds are not easy to write in the first place. How many books just added a mutant system and it exploded. The author also introduced so many people from different works at once. I don't think the author can grasp it.

Since you have already devoured the world, why do evil always prevail over good? You are a demon. Dimensional demons specialize in eating the world. What can be done by oneself in the hyperspace dimension, there is still a system in place. Be more relaxed. If the earth is bad, let's play with the universe. If you get bad at it, swallow the world and get a copy. All the characters are crammed into one universe. Are you planning to only play in this universe? If so, I would be half as interested.

It looks okay, but I feel that they are suppressed by the old American officials when they enter the Marvel world. I feel very aggrieved. After reading more than 50 chapters, Tony has too many scenes. I feel like he is the protagonist. I feel like I am the protagonist and traveled through another novel and still licked the protagonist of this novel.

I read the first three chapters repeatedly To be honest, there is a system that really loses the ability to be the Lord of Dimensions You have also written how to advance in the dimension, so it is better to remove the system, create your own, and imagine some characters arranged to unfold the plot in the Marvel Universe. However, in the early stage, your dimension is small and lacks energy or other aspects. You may arrange The characters are not that strong. By constantly collecting emotional values, the characters created are getting stronger and stronger, with more details. If you go up step by step, you will have to write 🤫🤫🤫 A dimensional master relies on the system and lottery, and everything is arranged by another high-level person🤫

Some popular characters can die, such as Enichi Tsukuni, Gwen, and Peter Parker. Don't make it a story where everyone upgrades and not even a single superhero dies.

It's a bit too boring. The villains are always suppressed and the good guys always fight with more and less. I'm tired of watching it for so long. It's boring. It's too boring.

Let me give you a suggestion. Although the protagonist of your book is the mastermind behind the scenes, the reader has a God's perspective, so you still need to spend some time introducing the protagonist's current situation and goals for the next stage to the reader. It's enough to give the protagonist half a chapter every dozens of chapters you write.

The writing style is not very good, and the protagonist has no sense of existence. This means that this book has no protagonist. It is not recommended to read. It will be a eunuch.