American Comics: From Dimensional Demon to Mastermind

I just hope that no one dies every time something goes wrong.

If you want to cause trouble, you still need the villains. Bring over those villains who are top-notch at causing trouble, and you don't even need to plan the plot. Just slightly adjust the original plot, strengthen it a bit, and you'll have a big wave of action. Then let the superheroes save the world. After that, we'll let everyone rest for a few months. Once everyone's rested enough, we'll arrange a new storyline to continue.

Hmmmm, hybrid universes are inherently difficult to write; many books have already exploded after adding a mutant system, and this author is suddenly bringing in characters from so many different works. I don't think the author can handle it.

Since you've already devoured worlds, why do you always have to let good triumph over evil? You're a demon god, aren't you? Dimensional demon gods are specifically designed to eat worlds. You could do things in a transdimensional dimension on your own, yet you still create a system. Be more open-minded. If you ruin Earth, then go play with the universe.

It's alright, but it feels like they're still being suppressed by the American authorities even in the Marvel universe, which is really frustrating. I've read over 50 chapters, isn't Tony's screen time a bit excessive? He feels like the main character now. It's like I'm the protagonist who's transmigrated into another novel and is now fawning over the protagonist of this one.

I read the first three chapters repeatedly. To be honest, having a system really lowers the prestige of a dimensional lord. You yourself wrote about how to advance in dimensionality, so why not remove the system and create your own? Imagine some characters and arrange them in the Marvel Universe to develop the story.

It's okay to let some popular characters die, like Yoriichi Tsugikuni, Gwen Stacy, and Peter Parker. Don't make it a story where everyone levels up and no superhero dies.

It's getting a bit too boring. The villains are always suppressed, and the heroes always outnumber the enemy. I'm getting tired of it after watching it for so long. So boring! It's incredibly boring.

Here's a suggestion: although your protagonist is the mastermind behind everything, the reader has an omniscient perspective. Therefore, you should dedicate some space to introducing the protagonist's current situation and future goals. Giving the protagonist half a chapter every few dozen chapters should be sufficient.

The writing is poor, and the protagonist lacks presence, making the book essentially nonexistent. I don't recommend reading it; it's bound to be abandoned.