Yitian: Zhang Sanfeng and I Walked Side by Side

The protagonist has incorrect views, has a cold temperament, is irresponsible, and is not a good person.

Learn a little military style boxing, but don't have any internal skills, dare to go to Xiangyang to help Guo Jing, how many lives do you have, and are looked down upon by Xiao Wu, but you still want to join in, and give up to repay Zhang Sanfeng's thigh, you are really speechless, are you cheap?

There were ninety-two uprisings in the Yuan Dynasty, large and small, and Guo Polu, Guo Xiang, and Yang Guo were all gone. You are making up some rough and tumble characters based on the heroes of the Ming Dynasty. In the early stage, you gathered in the mountains and forests to deal with the Yuan Dynasty... It is better than what you are doing now. You can make it up as you like. If you listen to storytelling too much, you will be able to make it up yourself.

You also walked side by side with Zhang Sanfeng. Zhang Sanfeng left the Wudang Clan and left you lonely.

If I want to write, you can describe the heroes and martyrs of the Ming Dynasty in the late Yuan Dynasty. Just follow the characters. Don't limit it to The Legend of Heaven and Sword of the Dragon. Trust me. Arranging the appearances of the characters must be interconnected and coherent. If you copy the storytelling, someone will read it Writing a novel alone can trap oneself to death...

If they all write time travel novels, then overthrow Song Meng!

At this time, Guo Xiang was only about 20 years old. According to the original work of Shendiao, the Five Ultimate Arts should not be dead yet. A few years after Meng Ge died, Bu Bilie was still fighting for power. There were still 10 years until Xiangyang City was broken. Mongolia had not yet launched a major attack, so Shaolin had just come out to show off its power at this time? The beggar gang hasn't collapsed yet, right? Why does it feel like it's already in the Yitian period, when Mongolia was unified.

Isn't this the era of the Three Sages of Kunlun and Guo Xiang🙂

There's something wrong with the logic. I don't understand where the protagonist got the courage to stay. They say there's a big crisis between life and death. He's almost dead at the beginning, but if he's lucky enough to survive, he doesn't cherish life later. Not logical.

You and Zhang Sanfeng are sworn brothers, can't you just go to Wudang Mountain to start a sect?

After watching some parts, the protagonist looks like an old woman, too ink-stained. She can't travel in the world like this. If it weren't for the protagonist, she would have to die eight hundred times!

The plot is so outrageous that I wanted to complain about it, but after thinking about it I gave up because I quite enjoyed watching it. Although it is outrageous, it is not boring. Many martial arts fans are just like anecdotes, written in boring and boring ways, but this one is okay.

No brains, feels like traveling

It is a very traditional martial arts novel, with plots such as being misunderstood by Xiao Wu, the village being attacked by bandits, and the protagonist deliberately lowering his martial arts skills.

Shennong is dead. I sincerely advise the author: Don't take things for granted when writing a book. At least it should be in line with the background of the times and don't write too brainlessly.

A very good Jin Yong fan fiction, the author must insist on finishing it

Maybe it's because I haven't read enough novels. I feel like there are a lot of Jin Yong's routines in them, but they lack a bit of charm. Looking at the results, I feel like this kind of writing doesn't have a large audience at the starting point.

No, this protagonist is really a modern college student? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Come on, author, I've been reading Jin Yong's novels since junior high school. The first one was The Legend of the Condor Heroes, and I rented it volume by volume. After 20 years, I would like to thank the author for making up for the regrets of the Golden Book. Come on, author✊

No more writing? Very pretty

This book contains a set of modern martial arts boxing, which can be used to defeat invincible opponents in the world. It's awesome.

The Cathayans invited Kislev, the dwarves, and the Imperials to visit the Great Wall and drink and talk together. Chendan boasted: "With this Great Wall, we can defend Chaos from outside the country." Then he asked the other three people, do you have anything similar over there? Mrs. Kislev laughed when she heard this and said: "Resisting Chaos only requires courage, flesh and blood, and the motherland." The dwarf also laughed: "Resisting Chaos requires spirits, ores and a battle ax in your hand." The Imperial man did not speak. So the Cathayans asked curiously: "So what do you use to resist Chaos?" The Imperial people scratched their heads and stammered: "Steel, gunpowder and faith..." Mrs. Kisri laughed loudly and said: "Your steel is not as good as the dwarves, your gunpowder is not as good as Cathay, and the only thing left in the empire is faith. But the main god Sigmar you believe in is a Eurician!" Everyone laughed. Then Archaon, the angry disciple of Sigmar, overturned the table.

I also want to see Lu Fang fuck Xu and Li to death

I went to write it and it was so bad. I didn't expect it.

The writing is mediocre. The protagonist Bai traveled through time and failed to accomplish anything.