Full-Time Master: Reborn Sun Xiang, Girlfriend Su Mucheng

This is such an outrageous CP that I have ever seen

1. The title persuades people to quit. Considering that there are only a small number of full-time fans, this title will persuade at least 80% of them to quit. 2. The competition is formulaic. Basically, there are more than one dozen protagonists later, and then the team competition will be passed in one go. 3. The perspective is single. You can use the perspective of a passerby to describe the protagonist group. But the flaws are not hidden. The relationship with Su Mucheng is very well written. I guess everyone skipped the competition to read this. When will I write a Tokyo××😁

Chapter 20 will be on the shelves, are you kidding me?

I'm a football fan, and I feel that Glory's economic system is very weird.

Now when I look at the full-time masters, I want an account like Xuxu Baobao to play, and it crashes in seconds, what operations do I need 😏

The design is quite reasonable. Just don't make the villain and heroine too stupid. There is an old saying in the Internet literary circle that the villain's IQ is the author's IQ.

I have similar views to the reader below, and I also feel that Liu Hao should not be too targeted. Not just him, but the same goes for other characters. After all, as you said before, they are all ordinary people. They want money and glory. These are normal. As "On the Side" said, sometimes I feel that you will unconsciously bring Ye Xiu's perspective. One more thing, Excellent Era is a team that wants to make a profit after all. I think there is a slight flaw in the part where you wrote the protagonist's welcome to Wei Chen. While it's true that Excellent Era needs a protagonist, it feels a little too arrogant for him to do that. I tried to put it into reality, but I have never seen any professional player do this. Take LOL's Faker for example. He is already a legendary figure, and it is impossible for him to make his own decisions in front of the T1 boss. Personally, I feel that it would be better to let Tao Xuan be tricked, or make a wrong step again, and be forced to sell Excellent Era in the end, and then return Excellent Era to the protagonist or to someone the author thinks is trustworthy. This setting may be more reasonable. Of course, this is just my personal idea, and I hope you can come up with a better way to deal with it later! Overall, the writing is really good so far. It would be even better if you could update 10 chapters a day!

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The author only knows that Haolong Pojun? Every time he shows off his skills, it is Haolong Pojun? Moreover, Haolong Pojun is a level 65 ultimate move, not a level 70 ultimate move. The three ultimate moves of Raging Dragon Pierce, Haolong Breaking Army, and Tianxiang Dragon Flash are all in the shape of dragons. Raging Dragon Pierces Heart is a level 60 ultimate move, Haolong Breaks Army is level 65, and Tianxiang Dragon Flash is a level 70 ultimate move. And what about the battle mage's soul skill, which is a level 50 ultimate move, Fighter's Will? After reading so many chapters, Yiye Zhiqiu's character only has two skills, one is the Dragon Breaking Army and the other is Dragon Fang. What? He relies on two skills to conquer the world, right? There are many skills that I have a rough understanding of, such as Sky Strike, Dragon Pressure, Falling Flower Palm, Round Dance Stick, Continuous Stab, and the level 75 ultimate move that will be released in the 11th season. There are a lot of skills. Please learn more about them. You can also play DNF or search for them.

In fact, there is no need to target Liu Hao so much People like Liu Hao only need to be praised, just like what the protagonist is doing now Ye Xiu is right, but he is too egotistical The record is like that. Since he is a teammate, so what if he pushes Liu Hao? Don't give him a chance to fail, how not to make people resentful Liu Hao didn't feel sorry for the protagonist, right? Author, please don't take Ye Xiu's perspective, but look at Liu Hao from the protagonist's perspective What you want to write is the protagonist's story, not Ye Xiu's story Just like a perfect world, if you travel through perfection and become a person in a foreign land Can you choose to help Kyushu because you like Huang? Don't underestimate Liu Hao's ability. He was kicked by Ye Xiu early because he was not capable enough He is just worse than Ye Xiu and cannot support the entire team I hope the author can think about it This book treats Liu Hao coldly from the beginning. I think the author's writing style is very good. I hope he can write a story that belongs to the protagonist instead of Ye Xiu's substitute perspective.

Come on, update gkd

Come on, author💪I've given you the monthly ticket, don't get together as a couple, Tang Rou and Chen Guo, just let them be single.

Chapter 166, there are only about 30 posts, let me take a look

Don't hide it, author. I know you have saved the manuscript, and I've seen you play reincarnation. I won't tell you the specific plot to avoid spoilers. Anyway, it's about equipment. 😍😍Send it out quickly

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It seems that the author is also quite fashionable.

What the author wrote in the early stage was okay, but after meeting Ye Xiu, he began to deliberately suppress his combat power. Later, he directly gave Ye Xiu 1000+ hand speed to break through. Can you imagine that there was no plot where the protagonist waited for a long time to surpass Ye Xiu. He was beaten violently by Ye Xiu and finally won the championship by chance because Ye Xiu had a hand cramp. The setting was too It's disappointing that the final championship you wrote has no value at all. The ending is that the protagonist in peak condition can't match an old man's hand speed and is beaten by others. In the end, he won the championship inexplicably because the opponent's hand cramped. There is no passion, no emotion, just inexplicable. The previous efforts are meaningless. I really don't understand that the author writes fan fiction but doesn't dare to write that the protagonist surpasses Ye Xiu. He insists on finding a bunch of reasons to beat Ye Xiu and the final championship looks like it was given by someone else.

After 40 chapters, it's gone all of a sudden. It's so good.

Can the author add more updates? There are too few.

Monthly tickets have been given, more updates will be added! ! !

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