Delta: If I Ask You to Escort Me, Will You Become a Protector?

For me, a mouse, it's so beautiful that it completely makes up for my imagination of Onslaught. I can only watch the value of the warehouse increase without experiencing the joy of Onslaught 😭

More than 20 chapters can't wait to be released! The food looks ugly!

One game contains nine chapters. . . .

It seems that the writing is average, and the money is collected very harshly. He dared to charge for more than 20 chapters. Even the masters dare not do this. No wonder it is so lazy. The author can't wait to start charging for the first chapter.

After reading dozens of chapters, I felt that it was too overwhelming. It was no different from the game articles of more than ten years ago, and even the writing style was inferior. The descriptions were like a running account. I might as well write with Ai, at least the writing style of Ai would be better. Let me talk about a few points: 1. The numerical settings are unreasonable, and each value has a perfect score of 1 00, the protagonist starts with a marksmanship of 100, and the rest of the values can be improved through very simple tasks, and this level can already be regarded as the top level among players, so what is the point of increasing the values later? If all the values are full in a short time, how will it proceed. 2. The plot is very dry. There is no conflict at all so far. It is foreseeable that the plot will unfold through extremely childish encounters and conflicts. Currently, it mainly describes aspects in the game. In reality, there is not much plot and nothing interesting, and the description in the game is also very mediocre. Delta TTK is not long in the first place, and the focus of description should focus more on the psychological and prop aspects, and each game They are all different. The current ones are all clear pictures, and even the top anchors and hooks have been kicked out. It is difficult to imagine how the plot will unfold in the future; 3. The characters are too flat. Currently, none of the characters give people a three-dimensional feeling. The anchor comes out and leaves after a while, and the sudden appearance of a female character who looks perfect is also disgusting. This is a routine from more than ten years ago. The insertion of the female protagonist is too stiff. 4. The form of expression is single. There are still many ways to play in Delta, but the protagonist currently shows an aggressive attitude, and the play style is also single. The overall look is very boring, and it cannot create a sense of confrontation between different characters. The numerical system was set up but it was written as an invincible flow. The significance of the numerical improvement was not seen. All the anchors basically appeared in the first few dozen chapters. Even several top anchors were packed away by the protagonist. How can we write original characters in the follow-up? Just fight with the hook. Anyway, that's all

There are no professions in this game. Aren't they all just junglers? Aren't you, the nursing profession, also a passerby?

540,000 Words, only 16 comments, haha

Q reading books can be read by free whoring members when the time comes

I can't stand this and League of Legends at all. If you have this skill, you can use it.

Tomato came here, I think I saw it over there

The beginning of the plot is too common. Conflict for the sake of conflict. I have seen too many similar beginnings.

I think it's okay (~_~;), there's nothing outstanding about it, but there are no shortcomings either←_←, to be precise, there are no big shortcomings. Let me show you the lyrics of a song: When longing flies into the night sky and wraps around your fingertips, it is as beautiful as a dream. When your back is turned, it is swallowed up in the sea of people. The loneliness that cannot be wiped away, NevertryNeverseeneverneverknow, NeverfIndneverseekneverletyougo, OH, so hurt, so resentful, so painful, so loving, so hateful, so strong, OH, whose love is too crazy and willful, squandering, after every dispute and reconciliation, we embrace and kiss passionately, fall in love, whose love is not crazy, not worthy of talking about love, not asking for tomorrow and eternity, eyes burning, just having me at this moment is enough, too persistent, fake and free, this kind of love is too heavy, guess what the name of this song is?

At least it looks cool. In addition to games, reality can also be brought in. After all, reality is sometimes more absurd than games Come on

Jet connects to the brain, and tiger squatting replaces thinking

Doesn't the Veyron Jet have to be cut in the air to hit the ground instantly, otherwise it will be stiff?

I haven't watched the live broadcast for a long time. The last time I heard about pdd, Douyu had an accident and ran away to Japan. Are you back to China now?

Brothers, please keep writing and encourage each other Borrow the building and promote the new book "Fight All Things Return to Ruins" is currently under investment in new books. I hope you can give me more opinions. Thank you.

I'm charging for a game article with just over 20 chapters. Is it necessary to be in such a hurry?

Really outrageous

Sister Sang's writing is really messed up. Without this and grandma's forced sensationalism, everything else is okay. I can only say that it's just okay. As for renting a house, there hasn't been any movement since I got the money. It's just the old routine of rich women for many years, and they still write it at intervals. That value can easily be increased to 100. How do you write it later?