Full-Time Master: One Sword, Wind and Thunder Transformation

1: There is no problem with the indigenous status, but the system has too many problems. The golden finger is too wide, but it is not fun enough. It is not fishy or nondescript. 2: The biggest problem with this book is that adding a little private design is called novelty, but if you add too much, it is not a fan. It is a self-pleasure article disguised as a fan. 3: Although there were various bugs when Butterfly Lan wrote the book, he wrote some things such as event arrangement and historical lines very straightforwardly. There is basically no such concept in this book, and the competition format even includes a situation where Blue Rain plays Excellent Era away from home for the second consecutive time. 4: Because the author's ability to sort out the timeline is extremely poor, some characters appeared who had no contact with the protagonist at all in the early stage, and did things that were not in line with the current settings of the characters. Such as the All-Star Game in Season 8. . . . I think we can do something about the Hall of Fame, but when did this Hall of Fame exist? Who decided to hold it? The person who decided to hold this event has nothing to do with the protagonist (it can even be said that he does not exist), but he just did something inexplicable. I think you can definitely postpone this matter to the ninth season, and you can describe the intersection between the protagonist and which league high-level executive to come up with the idea and implement it, instead of just writing it down as soon as you slap your head on it. 5: The author says and thanks readers for their tips and personal sharing. . . I don't understand why it was added to the text of the subscription chapter? Judging from the word count of over 3 million, it turns out that the minimum guarantee of over 2 million is plus private settings, and the lower one million is these meaningless nonsense. 6: The emotional line is abstract and gets one. Nowadays, many Internet readers are clamoring for no cp, no emotional drama, etc. This is because there are too many situations like this book. If I can't write the emotional drama, I just write it. The greasy text is paired with the facial makeup of the character. I know with my toes the direction of the next emotional drama. The few chapters where the protagonist confesses to Tang Rou were so awkward that I felt uncomfortable. 7: The places that should be changed remain unchanged, and the places that should not be changed are changed randomly. In the original work, Tang Rou's life experience is very mysterious. It was not revealed until the episode where she was invited to a party by Loulan Zhan in City B. Before that, Tang Rou's life experience was hidden in the original work and she dated Chen Guo. One reason is that she is afraid that the difference in status will create a sense of distance, and the other reason is that she has never relied on her family during her days in Xingxin, so she basically did not realize the status of this character's wealthy daughter in the early stage. But this book ignores this point and turns it into a story where Chen Guo knew about Tang Rou's family background from the beginning and made it up randomly. And because the protagonist participated and disrupted the original timeline, the butterfly effect caused by the protagonist was basically not realized. It is still the eighth All-Star Weekend, and the protagonist is exposed to the public eye, but the protagonist still does what he should do. After tying with Han Wenqing in the spotlight and revealing that he had just started playing boxing, do you think the clubs would not try to recruit him? Where did this plot go? Except for an invitation from Han Wenqing, it was gone. Later, the "recruiting Lord Grim incident" was copied from the original work, but why was the protagonist not mentioned?

First. It has nothing to do with the comics (Under One Person). The second character's name in the game is "One Sword" and has nothing to do with the swordsman. Third, the wind and thunder transformation is a weapon. Specifically, double fist gloves transform into double revolvers and dual-form weapons. The fourth protagonist is an indigenous person, not a time traveler. The fourth one has a system for mission types.

The author's writing is really good. Although there are a few that are not so good, your writing is definitely the best among the full-time master fanfics I have read, but it is a bit lacking. Please update it quickly.

You really have so much water PS

Chunhu has taken care of it, and each person has a set of gifts: a festive tune, a happy argument, a face of joy to guarantee votes, a financial key, a cloud of auspiciousness, and a round of great blessings. Wishing you all a year of laughter.

Is this a fan? I'm a full-time fan. I think the author wrote a follow-up. The protagonist joins the Happy team with Yinwu, helps Tang Mu win 3 consecutive championships, surpasses the great god, and wins the heart. This is a bit interesting. Now that he is on the same team with the great god, it feels weird. I can't explain it.

When I first started reading it, I was quite dissuaded by the fact that the protagonist was an "indigenous" person. However, I saw in the commentary that the author said that it was good after the first few chapters, so I continued reading. But later on, I felt that the system was quite useless, and the protagonist was also quite useless: 1. Does the author know that there is a word called "Butterfly Effect"? Especially when I saw the description of the eighth season finals, it is undeniable that Zhou Zekai is very strong, the first person in Glory after Ye Xiu, but weakening his opponents is a disguised way to strengthen himself. The skill points are not sold to reincarnation, but to Tyranny. Lao Han also learned two combo skills. After two increases and one decrease, I think it is not too much to give the eighth season champion to Tyranny, right? The main character and system have been changed, so what if some of the plot has changed? 2. Then there is the Challenger League against Excellent Era. Xingxin won without "Duan Yu" in the original work. In addition to Ye Xiu, who has almost all-star members, is it so difficult to win? ? 3. The magical weapon is revealed. How many (fake) magical weapons are there in so many teams? How many hands does Xingxin have? Xingxin's silver weapons are also mentioned as level 80. How much better are they compared to the original? Regular season plot? ? 4. There's nothing good to say about choosing Tang Rou as the heroine, but her boyfriend is both a professional novice, starting from the same starting point, and has made so much better progress than her. Isn't this more stressful and exciting than the only one Ye Xiu in the original novel brings? With Tang Rou's character, wouldn't training be harder and improve to a higher level? To sum up the above, I only saw the protagonist become stronger, the plot did not change much, and the role of butterfly wings was not used. It was really useless.

Your competition system settings were not changed well. It was originally one point for singles, three points for three games, two points for the arena, and five points for the team. Originally, you had to win three singles games and then two points for the arena to equalize the consequences of the losing team. If you change the score to be based on heads, you will change the meaning left by the original author: "Glory is never a one-person game." If you change like this, your personal strength will be greater than your team's strength. You will win three points in the duel and three points in the arena. Unless the opposing team loses 0 and the battle group is destroyed, we can only draw a tie. Even if the opponent changes to six, we will lose. In this case, its meaning changes, and personal strength can affect the situation of the battle. Moreover, the team could originally put out bait or something to lure them in, but now putting out the bait means giving them points. Changed the sentence that originally ran through the whole situation: "Glory is never a one-person game."

Cheers to see many original features! The first feature. The Glory Hall of Fame is the first feature. Like the LPL Hall of Fame, it gives status certification to some retired professional players who have made outstanding contributions to Glory. It can be regarded as keeping up with the times. Then Su Muqiu was inducted into the Hall of Fame, which was great. Su Muqiu not only had to stay in Ye Xiu's memory, but also wanted everyone to know about such a genius. Finally, the latest chapter covers the dungeons and new maps from Glory level 50 to level 70. This can be regarded as filling a gap in the original work of Master. Zhongzhi went to the Realm of Gods because Ye Xiu was at level 50. The dungeons after level 50 were all in the Realm of Gods, and the tenth area was completely gone. Anyway, come on, I will keep following this book. With so many full-time fans, the author is the most attentive and has his own thoughts in it. Unlike some authors who only copy the original work, fill it with water and stuff all kinds of messy jokes. As long as the author persists, writes well, and doesn't drift off, there will be more and more readers and the results will get better and better.

I can't understand what the great author wrote, but I still find the writing to be poisonous. This book is perfectly stuck between a great author and an ordinary author, and it quite meets my standards. This one is more to my liking among the fanfics of Master Avatar. Unlike other fanfics where the protagonist just crushes the protagonist of the original work, it really makes me uncomfortable... There must be some poison points, for example, the hand speed is 500 when you come up. My little suggestion is to start with a hand speed of 300, then get a talent of 500, and get to 500 by being trained by Ye Xiu or training by yourself. Then, awareness of 500 is also quite poisonous. My suggestion is that the system reward is to raise the upper limit to 500, and then train to reach awareness of 500. After all, gaming skills also require talent. There is a process of struggle, so that the author can write a few chapters. There is also the protagonist's life experience. Would it be better to dig a hole in the first chapter? For example, if the protagonist doesn't care about money, this will not make the protagonist's life experience too abrupt. The first post I wrote was just updated to the version update. My suggestion is don't overwhelm the combat power, don't make the protagonist invincible, otherwise it will become more and more broken later on. Don't overwhelm the game by turning the game into a reality like spiritual energy recovery. Many novels are like this, it makes me sick...

Wu Chen's plot is not good. If his opponents start to stir up public opinion in the future, won't the alliance pick a fight with him? ? To take a step back, if domestic people don't do this, there will be world invitational tournaments in the future, and foreigners will do this, and attract a lot of media. This will not directly become international public opinion~~ You can imagine whether the grumpy old guys at home and abroad will directly run Xingxin Live PK offline.

Dual professions are pure and unparalleled. Ye Xiu didn't change classes directly, so he could use all his skills, which had nothing to do with the Myriad Manifestations Umbrella. If you don't have the Thousand Chance Umbrella, you can still play Sanren if you can change weapons quickly in your backpack. Did you change your career or not? How can I learn skills from other professions after changing jobs? How can you learn advanced skills without changing jobs?

If the protagonist wasn't handsome, I wouldn't have a sense of immersion My picture

The protagonist is an adult now, can you please be more stable? He is just like a child who helps people without any knowledge and indiscriminately. E-sports is the original sin. If you can beat it, you can beat it. If you can't beat it, you can't beat it. It's really unplayable for you to go to the brainless to help find a place when you clearly can't beat it.

I think a lot of the plot is exactly the same as the TV series version of Full Time, such as the qualifying match, the bet match between Excellent Era and Happy, the process of Mo Fan joining the team, etc. I don't know whether it was based on the TV series that you filmed, or if you wrote based on the TV series.

Seeing 414, I was a little speechless. Excellent Era's He Ming just took away the protagonist without any injuries in the arena match? Even if you have professional restraint, you can simply win directly? Is this He Ming really that strong? I kind of forgot, but that doesn't mean it's quite easy for He Ming to win against Desert Guyan in the arena 🤔

It feels like the author just randomly added some junk settings 😆😆😆

I was speechless when I saw dual careers. The settings are broken. Ye Xiu uses small skills common to all professions without changing professions. In addition, the Thousand Chance Umbrella can be used to convert weapons into professional skills. You are a weapon professional. If you don't change jobs, you can only use 2 professional skills. This weapon is meaningless if you change jobs. Because some skills require weapons to use. The settings just crashed.

The idea of ​​turning a glove into a gun is imaginative, but it goes beyond the setting of the original work! Although the setting of Sanren can use all professional skills, the skills of the profession can be used according to the weapon in hand, because Sanren cannot change professions. You, as a boxer, have decided to change your profession, so you won't be able to equip gun weapons at all, right? The original work also said that a character who has changed professions can wear any other professional weapons, but all skills will be unusable, which means they are just decorations.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         going on to talk about the skills will be continued in the original work is that it is a big profession and includes several subdivided professions to learn from dnf. The setting of the skill book is that if you are a subdivision of a certain big profession, then you can add the skills of all the subdivisions of your big profession to your weapons. (Sanren are exploiting loopholes in the game because they do not belong to any profession.) When you have changed your profession to a boxer, you cannot use the skills of other major professions, whether you transform or change weapons. Although this thing is cheating by the protagonist, it has obviously affected the core mechanism of the game Honor. Even according to the original settings, this thing should have been noticed by the game company and confiscated directly as soon as it came out. Because with your settings, game clubs don't even need your gloves to change into guns. You only need to switch weapons to become another profession. Swordsmen change swords to become crazy fighters, and ammunition to cannons to become guns. Even if you only switch weapons in a big profession, these skills will exhaust you to death. Write it as fantasy! The atmosphere and rhythm of the original work are completely different. If I had to describe it, it would be more like a futuristic online game with a helmet-mounted game cabin. It is impossible for a character who has changed professions to use any skills of other major professions, otherwise the game will be messed up, not to mention that it is an e-sports themed article. Even Butterfly wants to cheat Ye Xiu at most by using the skill setting, and it can be used by everyone.

It's so beautiful, the pinnacle of full-time fandom

Updates are slow and very slow. One thing can be divided into three chapters.

The first 210 or so chapters of this book gave me the feeling of various inconsistencies. The development of the story was fine, and the behavior of the characters was fine, but something just wasn't right. I thought about it carefully and felt that it might be caused by the consciousness 500. The hand speed of 500, silver weapon blueprints, copy orange weapons, etc. Have little to do with the protagonist's self. Ignoring the system, they are regarded as talents. The 4 orange weapons at the beginning are actually quite enjoyable, just like Ye Xiu's second, especially the various counter-kill plots are really interesting. But the problem that arises is these counter-kills, these battle consciousness, and these decisions made by the protagonist. Because of the existence of 500 consciousness, I subconsciously think that it is made by the system, and this problem reaches its peak in the case of combo skills and hidden copies. It is impossible that no one has discovered this move for 10 years, but it can be explained by the fact that the professional players who can find it are all using old tricks, and others cannot detect the one second of stiffness. But the biggest failure of the hidden dungeon is that it rubs everyone's IQ underground. The former one can be said that ordinary people are not aware of it, but it is really difficult to understand that this dungeon cannot be found for 10 years (how many people around the world are playing this game). From choosing Xingxin at the beginning, Ye Qiu was immediately surprised by his hand speed, to helping Tang Rou as soon as he gained consciousness, to beating the dungeon immediately after finding the Wind and Thunder Transformation, to defeating the former boxing champion immediately when he found the moves, and now to the hidden dungeon now. In addition to the encirclement and suppression, counter-encirclement and suppression, boss grabbing, dungeon fighting, and PK, it doesn't matter if the system is playing. Anyway, the operation is given by the system, the equipment is given by the system, and the behavior is also given by the system. Even the reality takes effect instantly. This is different from other system articles. Other systems only issue tasks and give abilities or communicable takeovers. The protagonist himself is still there. In this book, the protagonist has hand speed and awareness and can react instantly. There is no need to adapt at all. The actions he makes are completely instinctive reactions, and the strategic ability is also very different. Anyway, I personally think that the system has been changed to "fight for me", which is why I feel it is completely inconsistent. Of course, you can also say that this is my own sentimentality and that this is just a joke. This is indeed okay. After all, this is just my personal feeling and it doesn't mean anything.

One sword

There really aren't many good-looking full-time fanfics, but this one is really good. I quite like it.

The author's writing is indeed good. I will give you the first monthly ticket I got from Qidian👍

Oh oh oh

Update soon! ! !

Laoye

I prefer the content of online games. If there are all competitions at the end, I still can't stand it.

Who is the Moon Emperor Ye Nuo? Is it from the original novel?