Elden's Circle, but with Wind Spirit Moon Shadow

Elden's Ring is a humanistic novel. The overall atmosphere of the book is very similar to the original work. The original work is easy to die suddenly, and you must repeatedly consider every operation to win, just like the atmosphere of this book's writing. This book is very careful in describing these. The horror + epic sense + sense of crisis in the game are very well created. It can be seen that the manufacturer has put a lot of thought into each character of the original work, and this book has written down in detail those details that are easy to skip just through the screen. On the one hand, you will find that there are still such details, and on the other hand, you will also lament that Elden is truly a masterpiece of the year.

Save all you can and bring peace to all sentient beings. Sun King, we love you so much! The same type as MC Middle-earth, using invincible power to prevent more tragedies from happening. The protagonist's posture can be called the king of kings! Not sacrificing and not letting down is the reason why Fengling Yueying exists! Very easy to understand. I was particularly touched by the small details of keeping promises and fulfilling people's needs. What a kind, powerful and lovely person.

It is one of the few masterpieces in the Ring of Magic fandom. I have been following it for a long time. Although the shaping at the beginning is a bit awkward, the writing gets better as it goes on. It is obvious that the author has made progress. The writing is very soul-like, which makes up for the original regrets of the Ring of Magic. At present, the protagonist has fully grown up and is considered to be a borderline Gwen. I would like to recommend this book to the fans of the Ring of Magic! !

The entire dlc plot, except for the Egon branch, is just a bunch of bullshit answers. So why does the Spiked Mountain branch look okay? Of course it's because it has nothing to do with the main dlc story😅. Family ethics + lgbt have caused the situation to fall again and again, and environmental scientists who forcefully explain are like clowns

Is there any Shen Nong? I read the comments below and they said that the emotional line is rather awkward to create.

One of the outlines is definitely gone. The outline for normal fan thinking is to tell Valkyrie Mikaela where the Blood King is. Then let the Valkyrie fight the Blood King directly. Kill the bank leader and recruit an ally. As a result, when this DLC came out, good guys, Valkyrie was a pure dog-licking clown, and Elden Lee was looking for fun. Fortunately, I wrote it late. If I were to write about the Holy Tree now, it would be a pure backstab. I thought of a joke, traveling through Uchiha Obito, ending with Uchiha Obito fighting the mysterious masked man 😏😏😏😏😏 Looking at it now, the Holy Tree force is the real biggest mastermind behind the scenes, and the two Monger brothers are real men. Latarn is really the strongest

It has been a year since the Dharma Ring came out, and various interpretations have become clearer. The conclusion is that there is nothing wrong with the Supreme Will. The Supreme Will has been intervening in the world at the beginning of life. He threw down the golden tree and the beast. The earliest furnace of life was also the initial form of the golden tree. There are many Two Fingers and they have lost their signal. At least Two Fingers wants you to save the world. In addition, compared with the Golden Law, the rest are just bullshit and snake gods.

Lani

Thank you, harem, the wood and the stars are my wings, it's not impossible for the Valkyrie to transform into a villain.

When the dlc came out, Monger changed from Nantong to Mikaela, a solo player in the back row of the Sacred Tree after disintegrating the coalition. Then he was charmed, and locked Mikaela in a cocoon while his sanity was still there. Then he wandered around the dynasty in a daze until he was killed by the player. After his death, the legendary modder Mikaela changed his body to look like Latarn (whether Latarn was conscious or not) to control the killing of players. The conclusion is that Mengert is great needless to say.

In the book, Fengling Yueying has a limit (number of times and effects). Otherwise, in the opening chapter, the invincible stealth flying instant kill will kill all the bosses. There is no need to write a novel, it is also mentioned in the introduction ('▿')

I just read a few chapters and felt a little bit unreadable. Maybe it's because I've been reading for a long time and my taste is a little bit different. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit rough, and there are some problems with the character dialogue. The words spoken are like messages sent on WeChat rather than face-to-face conversations between normal people. There is also a big problem with the protagonist's self-psychological description, and there is a serious sense of fragmentation. Finally, the description of the battle is a bit thin, and there are no exciting points. I see many people saying that the author writes well, so I hope the author can hone his writing skills and look forward to the next book.

The supreme Sun King, repair, make up for, and complete! Spread the brilliance of the sun to the junction, a high-quality article, a top-notch work among the Ring of Law fandom, definitely worth a read.

Lani

Let me finish this book. I have been chasing it all the way from 1 million to 10,000 words. Although the author is a novice, I feel that it is very comfortable to read all the way. It is no worse than some veteran handwriting. The golden finger is just right, not too strong or too weak, and it can keep the rhythm of the story. It's just right, and the emotional story of Melina and Lani is also great. It really feels just right. It's not a flower vase, and it's not like a light novel that is written with a lot of ink and ignores the main line. It can be said that the description of their feelings is just right to hit the hearts of the players of the Ring of Law. The rhythm of the whole book is just right. I personally think it is better to get the power of the Sun King too early, too early to be invincible. As a result, those who are following up like me feel that the later chapters may seem a bit watery. Kaizai book lovers don't have to worry, it's quite coherent after reading it in one sitting. Overall, I think it's really well written.

Se Lian

It was okay before, but it was just fine after becoming the Storm King. The biggest taboo for fans to write about this kind of game is to give people the feeling of playing the game again.

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The plot is okay, but the author's detailed descriptions of various little chefs are really unsettling and hilarious.

If you have any good-looking pictures or soul series hanging pictures, emoticons, difficult moments, etc., You are welcome to post them. The more the better∠( ᐛ ∠)_

Melina

As a novel, this book can only be said to be ordinary, but, but! As a Dharma Ring fanfic, it can be called a fairy. To exaggerate, this feeling may not be possible in the future. It can be said that the status is comparable to or even higher than the first Dragon Clan fanfic that makes up for all the regrets (although I don't know if there is one). If you have never played Ring of Dharma, I really don't recommend reading it. If you don't get enough of it, you may get addicted at the beginning, but you can definitely read it even if you have just passed it. Your understanding and affection for Ring of Dharma can increase your reading experience in the same proportion.

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I really don't know why so many authors wash Patch. There are no sharks in the game. It's purely for gameplay 😅

The main plot is to redeem regrets, a real-life version of the large-scale Elden Ring, but I think it will get worse and worse if it is written like this 1. Whether the protagonist is going to be a lone wolf, a mass route, or a walking and watching, it needs to be determined as soon as possible. This determines what the fun is, whether it is to work together to open up the imagination, or to explore the power system and become a king, or to pursue history and browse the scenery. The male protagonist is now involved in every aspect, but it is too shallow and the feeling is low 2. The supporting characters should be discarded appropriately and do not talk about every supporting character. Now the male protagonist has opinions and comments on each supporting character. Some of the opinions are inconsistent, which makes me feel that the male protagonist is stupid. Some are not familiar with this supporting role, and the author has briefly mentioned it, which makes me feel very boring. The supporting characters are chatting all day long, which makes people jump to read), it is also the same as 1, everyone talks, no one is good at it, so it looks like a running list 3. The cheating seems to be a lot of fun, but the author chose a steady and steady male protagonist, which sometimes caused my imagination to deviate from the protagonist's behavior, which made me a little confused.

Is this this kind of sun?

Rating 1-10: 8 (based on the legal circle, add two extra points for emotional points Recommended 1-10:7 (one of the few environmental novels that can be read Emotional line 1-10: 4 Plot 1-10: 8 The writing style is quite satisfactory but the style lacks a sense of the environment. The characters in it, including the title of the book, have all been renamed without affecting the reading. The overall look and feel is more towards the traditional Western fantasy farming Text. The author's control over the progress is good. According to the gameplay, there is no collapse of combat power. However, the existence of map levels makes the magic circle overall lack of rationality. It is difficult to explain it by simply using weapons and equipment to strengthen it. I don't know how the author will control this. The emotional line and Melina's emotional line are a bit nonsensical but harmless. The Lani line is because of the ground. Ignore the fact that the plot is not progressing. Irena Roderica in the early stage is considered as a branch line and will not be discussed. Overall, it is okay, but there is a big flaw: Melina is currently invisible. She only appears once or twice in a few chapters and is basically mentioned in one go. Moreover, there is no substantial progress in the love line and no real heroine appears. Please consider the above love lines at your own discretion This work is in the soul category. With a small number of novels and low popularity, it can be said that this is one of the few works in the serialization that has not bad results. If you want to write a long novel, you must be tight in terms of combat power, and you must control the cheats that are too buggy. It is best to abandon the map level in the game, otherwise it will easily become the dilemma of changing the map and starting from scratch in Xianxia novels The above is just a personal opinion

I remembered again why I didn't read this book, the name of the protagonist. Can the current author of tmd give the protagonist a more normal name.

Baishi