Why Are You Always Thinking About Pursuing Me?

Generally speaking, this kind of light novel has a lower limit for female protagonists and an upper limit for male protagonists. In the parts I have seen so far (the first 40 chapters), the male protagonists have nothing outstanding, and they are even being led by the female protagonists all the time. It feels a bit like a small fw. Well, actually this is not a big deal. After all, there are a lot of fw male protagonists in Nissei, but the audience for such male protagonists in China may be relatively small. Let's talk about a little problem about the system. It is very common for the system to be a plot promoter. However, the author's description of the male protagonist's attitude towards the system is a bit problematic. The protagonist's attitude towards the system in the first chapter is "Does accepting it so easily negate my previous efforts in life?" This attitude is biased toward contempt, but later the system gave a function of "the heroine's favorability reaches 50 and you can copy entries", so the hero went to lick other heroines. This is really not a good impression on the male protagonist. I think you can either despise it from beginning to end and create an image of an extremely confident and narcissistic male protagonist, or you can accept the system calmly. This kind of upright and upright image of the male protagonist is really difficult to bring into the world. Let's talk about the heroine. The heroine should be the two characters who appear in the character list. In the first forty chapters, I didn't feel the charm of the heroine at all. From my perspective as a reader, these two heroines are just "beautiful women with bad personalities". In fact, this is okay. The plot needs to develop and the relationship can heat up. It's just that the male protagonist seems to be controlled by a woman, like a dog on a leash, with weak subjective initiative. This feeling is really uncomfortable

After reading it for a while, I wanted to ask why the male protagonist still decided to get entangled with the two female protagonists, but he just felt that he couldn't get rid of them?

You actually use such a useful system to fall in love. How can a mere system be so useless? Screen talents through entries, establish organizations to attract funds, and understand the experiences and personalities of senior officials in other countries through entries. And then take control of the country step by step, organize hands and feet all over the world, climb the tower of science and technology, and look up at the stars. The sea of ​​stars is the best future for the protagonist! Don't be held back by love, your goal is the stars and the sea!

The entanglement with the two heroines is a bit far-fetched. It is not clear why I have to draw entries from these two seemingly troublesome people. It feels a bit forced 🙂

The author gave the male protagonist too much control and couldn't control it, and then made the male protagonist's control disappear? Where is your copy?

It's so awkward, being both upright and upright at the same time, why don't you be more real as a person? If you can pretend to be in the real world, you can pretend to be the same when writing a novel.

When will the third female protagonist come? These two female protagonists are not very likable. The male protagonist is kicked around like a toy.

Brother, isn't this system a bit scary? I wrote at the beginning not to let the protagonist think about abusing the system (is this considered a psychological suggestion?), And then showed the system's capabilities. It can be seen from the fact that the male protagonist obtains new entries. The entries take effect immediately, and some skills can be turned into entries if they are perfected. There is one thing in it that I find very scary. There is a blue guitar entry that describes skills that have been honed for many years, and even some entries about personality. It would be a bit too scary to replace these with the entry for the protagonist. (Imagine you meet the protagonist, and then you find that your character is completely different from yourself, and you suddenly can't play the guitar after practicing for many years) The superpowers of the heroine Mizuno Saku also affect people's minds. Is there an evil god in the background of this world? The abilities of the male and female protagonists are not like those in the sun.

Let's take a trumpet. I only read one chapter. How smooth is it?

After reading Chapter 140, Shinomong was jealous all the time and then the male protagonist tried to figure out how to solve it.

FW male protagonist + the mentally retarded plot in the first chapter directly persuaded me to quit

The time and space rewind around Chapter 70 is a bit toxic and I can't stand it.

No, it's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?

The pace is too slow, and the male protagonist has some issues with his writing.

It looks more and more like a love game. The plot is a bit innovative, but the template can still be seen The writing can be rated 4 points, and the creativity and fun can only be rated 3 points.

How should I put it, people who like this style will like it, and those who don't like it may think that the protagonist is too clever and licking the dog.

Isn't Jinguji the same surname? Why is it still being dismantled and turned into a shrine?

So, is this book a harem or a stock market?

Even if you change the place to write the book, you still can't forget the rock of loneliness 😉

Why do I feel sicker the more I watch it now?

Suddenly a question came to mind, did a certain senior student write it down and then disappear? 😥

I voted for a monthly ticket and hope it gets better and better. I feel like there's nothing wrong with it.

Is this kind of novel so bland at the beginning? It's the same as Liu Shui Wen Yi Wen

Didn't you say you wanted to write a Harry Potter fanfic? Where's the book?

Good book, good book. At first glance, you can tell that the author is wearing a vest, please send out your big number quickly.

It's well written, but I'm worried that the author has too few readers.