After I Became the Underworld, Global Terror Descended

The routine of novels from ten years ago is a bit trivial. There are at least two pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots in one chapter. No matter how the person offends the protagonist, he will be forgiven as long as he admits his mistake and apologizes. Even the person who killed the protagonist's friend will be forgiven. Suitable for people who have just started reading novels

When you finish reading the free chapters, you feel "Hey, this book is kind of interesting" When you spend money to buy the chapters, "Turns out this is what shit smells like" The plot of Goodfellas's free chapters is quite reasonable. After spending money, the writing becomes more and more confusing. Forget it if there are typos. Is the plot so confusing? Either you don't ask for money, and if you ask for money, write it carefully for me. I really think that everyone's money is blown by the wind, are you spending money to buy shit?

There are only a few Yin Divisions in the underworld that can suppress the fighting power. There are nearly 50 people with this level in the human world in 100 chapters. They are still Zhong Kui's apprentices. Don't be too abstract. The protagonist is like a brainless person who is always led by the nose. People in novels are always mentally retarded. The world feels like S and B. Summary and defense.

The writing is really messy. One moment, the Ghost Control Society is a high-ranking and prestigious institution managed by the state. Then, the banquet can't even be served. The highest level of the Yunchuan Ghost Society is the fourth level, right? The eldest lady of the Xian family has only been upgraded to the fourth level. He can be the head of the house. And the king soldier is also level 4. A group of level 3 and level 4 ghost guards are not allowed to come to the table to eat. After that, two level 4 young masters and eldest ladies can come to the table. The writing really feels like a split personality. The money system has also collapsed. Is it because I have a bad memory or something? The personality of each character is not distinct. I feel that every female character appears with a beautiful appearance, wearing a white robe, or just a good-looking woman. The male character is written directly by age, and each person is directly distinguished by name. It is completely different from the feeling of a character popping up in your mind after reading through many articles. Write a free article first and settle it down before charging. No one will be willing to pay to read it like this.

A bunch of rubbish plots

The first few chapters are okay to read as a fun read, but the later chapters are completely complete and a complete mess. This work is probably just to attract attention. The first few chapters are to whet the appetite first, then ignore the rest, and just cut it off and make it worse.

A little white text that lowers your wits~ The characters repeat themselves over and over again, just a few sentences. This is unscientific. Ah, I am really speechless. Are there all elementary school students in the world? They talk babblingly.

To put it bluntly, the first few chapters of this book were written by humans, but the later chapters are especially written by AI. The plot is a complete mess. There is not a single "two" in the whole text, it is all "two", such as two people and two things. Just read the 50 chapters that are free at the beginning. Don't spend money to buy it! ! !

There are a lot of logic errors, the plot narration is unclear, there are a lot of typos, the characters are very different, and the author's education level is junior high?

I came from Douyin. The subject matter is indeed novel, but I didn't grasp it well. There may be intentional foreshadowing, but the hole cannot be filled. The protagonist's character is more like a fool. The strength of the entire book is unclear. Everyone close to the protagonist is portrayed exactly the same (the supporting character fawns over the protagonist, the villain is extremely afraid of the protagonist). The whole process was so bland that I didn't know what to say, and there was a lot of nonsense throughout.

Author, please hurry up and update. It's so slow.

The first thing I wrote was okay, but when I went to Beihai later, it was all messed up, my combat power was completely broken, and there were many typos. It was such a waste of money. I bought all the later chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 132. And it gets weirder and weirder later on, with all the sister-sister relationships involved, which makes me a little speechless.

Somewhat speechless. . . The writing style of the horror theme is suitable for newcomers The fighting is fierce and the plot is tense This and that It is still set above 15, which is a bit too watery After that, it feels like watching Douyin, Kuaishou and those short dramas that affect IQ The writing style is not old town at all, it is not a brainless cool article It is a bit like a brainless hydrology. . . . . . Creating the characters is too impatient I'm really sorry for this chapter, fifteen chapters in a row I can already tell the subsequent plot with my eyes closed. . . . . Suitable for novices. It seems that the characters are not created. The whole process is brainless. You can pretend to be cool and slap in the face. Change the map. The plot is too old-fashioned. There are also relatively few other plot factors in the book. It can be said that there are none. For example, the factor of being able to write funny and humorous and brainless articles has not been grasped. In the end, there is only the word "brainless". . . . . . . Details, there are no details at all, the details are not rich at all, it is all a slap in the face. . . . There is no scary factor, and there is no funny factor. Maybe the author writes less about this kind of subject matter, and is not good at writing about horror. The word "brainless" runs through the whole text. Just like Douyin, those in the comment section of Kuaishou have watched those dramas that affect IQ. They just grind and pretend to be slapped in the face, repeatedly.

The ingredients are complex, various power systems, various stronger enemies, and various tricks. If there is nothing to write down, just write new powers and new enemies. If people around you try to add more tricks, the hole will not be filled.

The subject matter is very novel and gives people the feeling of a refreshing article, but in reality there is a lot of nonsense, and the strength is still comparable to that of the enemy. It is very procrastinating, and many words are used inappropriately.

I am really convinced by the author. Did you change the author? The first part was okay, but the second part immediately thought of what to write. I went to learn Taoism. I looked for ghosts in the early stage and was locked up in a nightmare. I don't even know about the relationship with his sister. Sometimes there is a blood relationship, sometimes not. I am really convinced. The whole writing in the back is just a running account. From chapter 100 onwards, I elbowed my left brain and hit my right brain, which directly subdued me. The protagonist is at least Zhong Kui's direct disciple, the King of Hell himself. The Side Seal Yin Division also has divine fire and a treasure ruler given by the King of Hell. In the end, no one can beat it, and they have to rely on three nightmare ghosts. The ghosts collected by the protagonist in the past are of no use in the later stage. They can only be used as tools for making ghost coins for the protagonist. I really don't understand the author. Your brain circuit is so good. I feel that it can be called a masterpiece, but it fell apart later. I couldn't stand it after reading more than 140 chapters. I didn't even want to include comments as punctuation marks.

I'm a little speechless. At the beginning, I only had ghosts to collect, but then suddenly the Yin God, the Red Dust Immortal, and the Immortal Technique appeared. The first 100 were all about ghosts, and nothing else. Then suddenly they appeared in the back.

The subject matter is very good, but the update is very slow. When can I feel like crying with more updates? ! !

Didn't Merlin have a gold coin? Why not? What kind of water god is he?

Can you update it quickly 😡

Did someone change the writing later? The first few dozen chapters are okay, but the rest becomes a mess. Many descriptions are like running accounts, and the transition is a mess. You can't spend money to buy an AI.

Let me tell you, I came here from Douyin. Like many people, after listening to the first part, I felt that it was very interesting and the subject matter was attractive enough. After reading a large part of the previous part, it was very good. I also spent money to read it. If it can attract others to spend money, it means that the writing is very good. But when I read more than a hundred chapters, I really couldn't stand it. Let me summarize it for you. 1: The content does not match the title. I came to read it for the Yinsi and the ghost master in the front. When I saw the back (more than a hundred chapters I have read so far), there was no shadow at all. They were all Erlang Shen's spells. What kind of divine body came in the back, saying that this was how to defeat the immortal body. The ghost that had been raised for so long in the front was lost. Beihai, I don't even have it with me anymore. I can't see what I want to see. I can't stand it any more. Two: The combat power is broken. In the early stage, the level of danger is as powerful as it is dangerous. By the time I read more than a hundred chapters, what did you write? I met a Taoist novice on the train named Jiang Yun. Pay attention to the novice. He said he was a ghost master, and the ghost was the underworld. Level? What is the disaster level? I don't know how many times higher than the dangerous level in the previous chapters. You are using a novice here... I really..., And what about the Thirty-two Stars of Tiangang, as powerful as they were boasted in front of them. What kind of unreasonable connections did the old man spend to hire him as a bodyguard? As a result, those thirty people died. It needs to be as sloppy as it is, you will die with just a few clicks of your fingers, and I won't talk about the collapse of other combat powers. Three: The storyline is ridiculous, and there are many pitfalls that you wrote yourself, and you don't fill them in yourself. I remember there is a place where the ghost mother and the protagonist said that the ghosts hidden in the five internal organs come out in turns, so the protagonist should be careful about the next one, and just forget about it afterward. If this setting is removed, whoever you want can come out. Even now there are only three. I don't know what to make the protagonist be careful about, let alone some running accounts. If the combat power collapses, I will join a new organization. The new combat power makes me feel that the content I read in the previous chapters has no meaning at all. The Ghost Control Club I was talking about is national level. If you have to hang more and more, you won't be able to see it later, it will be refined in an instant, and it will disappear, and then some new national-level organizations will appear, like Tianmen, and they will appear strangely. You can't see him appearing after the destruction of the previous cities, but only this city will appear after it is destroyed. Four: I don't know if it's a writing problem or a story idea. The problem is that the protagonist is always led by the nose, he has fighting ability but no IQ, and he is always fighting. After the fight here, fight somewhere else. Without the good plot in the early stage, I felt like my brain was missing when I read it. A cool novel can't be so fun. What's more, it won't be fun in the later stage. Anyone who fights will use up the last bit of energy, and then fight somewhere else. Just resurrect with full health and continue fighting. Obviously the author rarely thought about the plot after writing it, or what I said is ugly is that it was written by AI. I am showing this comment to other readers to make them think twice. To the author, it is equivalent to a reminder to the author. You must know that this is a paid novel, and you cannot take advantage of people who spend money.

No, isn't the female protagonist promoted on Douyin? Why did she become a male protagonist?😅

After reading a few chapters, I was a little speechless. The protagonist is obviously a Yinshi, and he has no magic spells. When he returned to the world of the world, he was attacked like a pen and could not fight back. Later, when he subdued the ghosts, he had to do it himself. I asked this Yinshi, are you rubbish? When the protagonist was in the Yin difference, he only had 100 net coins a year. When he arrived in the Yang world, he felt that the monetary system was broken. Later, when the protagonist was looking for the Yin difference in the auction house, he watched Yang Xu run away without any means. 😒 At the auction house, he shot a blow and knocked him 1 meter away. 😰 He really lost his temper.

This book should be recommended to more people. It took me a long time to find it.

Isn't the protagonist recommended by Douyin a female? Why did she become a male?

My condolences, everyone. I am the author's brother. The author died of a cerebral infarction in the early morning of the 16th. I'm sorry.

To put it simply, the subject matter is novel and the writing is terrible.

Why is the introduction called "Yinsi"? In modern terms, this is a department, right? A person is called a department, right? .

Le, I was able to control ghosts for a long time in the front, but suddenly turned into a monk in the back, and my combat power collapsed, and there were a lot of disaster levels 🤭 The author's brain also made typos from time to time to make me laugh. I just paid money to see the typos and hooks?