Mortal Cultivation Begins with Turtle Breathing Kung Fu

The character design of the protagonist is okay, and his IQ is online. After getting the Turtle Breath Kung Fu, he was willing to share some of it with Liu Xiaoer. He is very good at winning people's hearts. With such a powerful kung fu at the beginning, his combat power should increase quickly.

The writing style is really good. The writing in the opening paragraphs of the first chapter is amazing. At present, it seems that the first part has a traditional martial arts flavor. I will see how the author writes later. Overall, it is okay. I have collected it.

The pacing is well controlled and the plot setting is also very clever. There is no plot to abuse the protagonist so far, which is a good review. Since he has obtained such a powerful internal skill as Turtle Breathing Kung Fu in the early stage, and if he adds some powerful martial arts later, the protagonist should be able to walk sideways.

The writing style at the beginning is indeed good, and the character design of the protagonist is also good. Basically, the IQ is online. I hope the combat power can be improved faster in the later period, so that it will be more enjoyable. Overall, it is well received.

The protagonist has been waiting patiently for a month. He originally thought that the Four-Pocket Elder of the Beggar Clan was looking for trouble, but a Seven-Pack Elder came out and was completely unbeatable. Hurry up and increase the protagonist's combat power. The follower Liu Xiaoer suggested that they should increase their combat power together.

This kind of mortal-style original work depends on the late work, mainly based on the plot, maybe because of the female author. The emotional drama is very good, and the plot is very good so far. There are hunting immortals, anti-routine spiritual roots, and there are not so many idiots looking for trouble in the cultivation sect.

Needless to say, the main and supporting characters are well portrayed, and even the supporting characters are all above average in IQ. The Seven Pockets Elder of the Beggar Clan has vividly portrayed the image of Lao Jianghu. Every step is done carefully and without forcing intelligence at all. The fighting scenes are also exciting. If the author of this book writes seriously, the score should not be bad.

It shouldn't be a harem. Nowadays, those who write about mortals are all about stallions. The harem is like a bulldozer. Don't those people know what is attractive about mortals? I'm speechless when writing a fanfic and including all the names and surnames in the original book.

Wen Xiumei must have deliberately not gone to the immortal ruins, knowing that there was nothing inside, and gave the opportunity to Chu Ci. These people were all deceived by Yuantong three hundred years ago From the current point of view, this Wen Xiumei is still very lovable as the heroine.

The beginning is okay. I haven't seen the story of the abuse of the main character so far. It's a bit enjoyable. The fighting scenes have the flavor of classical martial arts. The word count is relatively small at the moment. I've saved it and will read it later.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was wondering why there is no mortal plot yet. Then I looked at the title of the book and found out that it is an orthodox mortal stream, not a doujin series...

So far, I haven't found any bad points, the plot is smooth, and the characters are three-dimensional. Overall, it is very good. Come on!

😒Is the compass in the world of immortality useful? Is the author telling me that other worlds are also round?

Is the update stable? I have read several mortal fanfics, and this one is okay. If the updates are stable, I can follow up and read it.

Almost every chapter is interesting. The author has a strong narrative ability. I have read a lot of fan fiction about mortals cultivating immortality. This one is one that I can read. I vote for the new book.

This book is okay, it's enjoyable to read, the plot is well-paced, and the writing is okay.

Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was a mortal novel.

I can't watch it. Fireball Technique Fireball Technique Fireball Technique Diamond Technique Diamond Technique Diamond Technique Magic Movement . . . Have you ever written a battle plot like this?

It was fine before, but since entering the Dragon Palace, the plot started to fall apart! Especially stitching together things like cultivating immortality, cultivating truth, science fiction, etc.!

Shan Linggen is the most rubbish, so the author is different from other authors. That's how writing is.

The Waste of a Single Spiritual Root and the Genius of a Five Spiritual Roots. I have read other novels about cultivating immortals, but I just find them awkward, haha.

It's a bit disrespectful to ordinary people. I thought ordinary people were the same as others.

Not bad, the logic is clear and not too poisonous.

Sing and act, live up to your youth!

It seems that it has its own plot. You should observe

Borrowing the building to promote books, Wang Chan, the protagonist of "Mortal Demon Flames", is welcome to taste it