All Heavens: Start with Devouring

Cherish good women, don't waste bad women, and respect the fate of others!

I quit. In Chapter 53, the protagonist told Huang Rong that he wanted to kill a demon that was more powerful than him. Huang Rong said that he would go together, and the protagonist agreed! Knowing that he was going to do something big and kill monsters who were more powerful than him. There is room for improvement, but there is still a burden! The desire to show off is too obvious! Stand and stand again!

I hope the protagonist can be colder and colder, stop meddling in other people's business, and be more decisive. Thank you.

The blood collapsed at the beginning, swallowing the stars and writing about Huang Rong.

To be honest, I really shouldn't write about eternal life, because the world of eternal life is too imaginary. The most typical one is the Xuanhuang World. According to the initial description, it is just a slightly larger continent, but there are infinite parallel spaces behind it, something like tens of billions of light years. But what about reality? There are only so many disciples of the magical powers in the Xuanhuang world. Even mortals can run to the mountain gate. How big can this world be? Do you dare to believe that the main disciple of the force that swallowed the Lord of the Universe inside is the universe level? If you can even leave the Xuanhuang World in the realm of supernatural power, you know how big it is. Anyway, it is a big world on paper, where mortals and cultivators live together. Aren't the so-called countries under those super fairy gates comparable to a few planets? This can also be considered a super sect. Other novels by Shen Ji are also fictional, such as Yang Shen. The mainstream of a vast world is mortal, and the entire continent is estimated to be hundreds of thousands of kilometers away. Otherwise, how could a mortal dynasty compete for hegemony? Can those mortal armies travel ten thousand miles? Those martial saints and ordinary ghosts and immortals with ordinary planet-level strength can travel across the continent, so you know the gold content. But the Yang God in the back forcefully pulls the universe and expands the world view without reason. The realm of a Yang Shen can be increased hundreds of millions of times, but it can be restricted by hundreds of schools of thought who are not as good as the Yang Shen. Anyway, Shenji's novel is just exaggerated, and the underlying world view seriously violates logic.

This book is really not interesting at all. The protagonist feels like a loser. Since the protagonist looks down on the world of the Condor Shooting, Huang Rong is the only one worthy of the Condor Shooting, right? I can't imagine how the author could write something so boring and uninteresting.

Not to mention anything else, I saw the poisonous hair when the protagonist refined the Wuyin bag to exchange for the dragon blood potion. Even if the author uses the Wuyin Bag as an ordinary storage equipment, the value of swallowing the original universe is more than this, not to mention it is a growable magic weapon with attack methods 🥵

This is not a fan, this is plagiarism disguised as a fan. No respect for the original work at all.

Can you write more about Devour? Can you write less Japanese comics? Nowadays, Japanese comics are really reminiscing about the past and I really want to write about them, so I will write them for those who like them. When you add Japanese comics to novels and fanfics, it makes me feel the same as adding 💩. I have no interest in subscribing at all. I almost never read Japanese comics. I have only watched Zan Chi Hitomi in my 27 years of life.

Since the author has written about the World of Condor Shooting, he shouldn't use cheats and then denounce the other side as saying that this doesn't work and that doesn't work. Just kidding, the author tried the protagonist's world of radiant sculptures, but he couldn't even enter the inner-gong secret book. Just looking at the meridians of the human body will make the protagonist blind. His eyes only saw Huang Rong. What's the point of joking that even a yellow-haired girl, Master Mao, can fall in love with her? And wouldn't it be possible to write The Condor without Huang Rong?

It's strange that veteran authors always find it awkward to write Devour, but newbies have a lot of ideas. Xing Batian also wrote a book called Devouring Beginning before, and then it collapsed. To be honest, Dongyang's book wasn't that good either.

There are too many common sense errors, and the author does not have a deep understanding of Swallowing Starry Sky. Many items have deviated from the original work.

No wonder no one saw it. What kind of photos did Venina choose? People come here for Venina from the anime, show me this🤮🤮🤮🤮

Chapter 15 The previous chapters talked about how important and how big the contribution is, but in the end it feels like it's not as good as 500 yuan plus a little red flag 😰

When Bao Zheng appeared in Devouring the World, I knew that this book was dead. It was so fucking ridiculous. What kind of brain circuit did the author have?

The author's "Swallowing Stars" is a mess and doesn't respect the original work at all! For example, after the nine realms, there is an introduction to the laws, and then the essence is analyzed. Only after a deep understanding can the laws be recognized. You actually recognized the law directly after the ninth level of realm, what the hell are you doing? This is as ridiculous as you directly realized the realm of immortality after reaching the realm of immortal immortality and supernatural powers! Since you are a fan, you should check the original information carefully, and don't rely on the traffic and then write blindly!

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Dear author, if you want to get it straight, just say it. Let's get together and relax. You will also support us when you publish a new book in the future. What a big deal it is that you leave us alone like this.

The level has dropped a lot, and I feel like the author doesn't know how to write novels on this subject. There are a lot of minor flaws. It feels like it was written in a hurry, and a lot of the content is not rigorous, and it doesn't look like it was written with the author's ability.

I guessed that this author's new book would also include eunuchs. Sure enough, the last book was intermittently unfinished, and it's the same this time. A person who is used to being a eunuch has no credibility at all.

The author is hospitalized with a high fever and will not be discharged until tomorrow. The update will have to wait a few days until he recovers.

Generally speaking, I don't like fan fiction about devouring great gods. The upper limit of force value is too high.

By the way, are there any fanfics to write about Devouring? I admit that the writing is good, but it's just that Tomato's writing style is good, and it's good to slap people in the face. But the combat system, well, it's always 1,000, and the amplitude is 10,000. The talent is divided into 100 years and 100 million years. It's not as good as level 100 Douluo. No matter what kind of fanfic you write, as long as you bring it into Devour, it will be like fantasy turning into an online game. Is it interesting?