Journey to All Realms

Write a novel about his time travel. Or something else. TV movies. TV movie novels must be well-known. Only in this way can we attract people. If I still write about this world, I believe it will attract very few people. Writing about Tianlong and Shooting Condors are more attractive than this world. . . . . Why? Because Tianlong Shooting Condor is famous. The most people make TV shows.

The book is good, the subject matter is okay, and the plot seems to be very good now. However, I just saw Flying Fox, and now I feel that the author did not write it well. I wonder if there will be changes in the future, that is, the acquisition of the power of cause and effect is too simple, and the cause and effect is taken too lightly. In fact, what is cause and effect? , That is, the people and things you come into contact with, etc., The intersections will have cause and effect. For example, if you travel to the world and resolve the entanglement with the people in the world, cause and effect will occur. If you have an entanglement with the protagonist, no matter whether it is good or bad, there will be cause and effect. If you kill someone or save someone, there will be cause and effect. Cause and effect, if you kill a disciple of a sect, someone from the sect will avenge him. This is also cause and effect. You can definitely obtain cause and effect. It is not only that you travel to other worlds and occupy other people's bodies to fulfill other people's obsessions in order to obtain the power of cause and effect. Otherwise, you will be a wish system. It is not a causal system. The main reason is that I have not yet figured out what a causal author is. Apart from this issue, the current writing is still good. I just don't know if it will change in the future. Otherwise, your system cannot be called a causal system. It is a wish system or an obsession system.

To test the poison, this book is a traditional upgrade flow. The main character has a golden finger and can travel through thousands of worlds. It is an unlimited flow of monster-fighting upgrades. The world he travels through is full of martial arts and other information. It's just martial arts novels, movies and TV shows from the real world.

To be honest, I read the first world chapter by chapter, and I skipped and read the second world just to see what happens next. If we continue to write about these unpopular small worlds or keep writing about various small worlds, the main world will be briefly mentioned. It will really become less and less popular. The above is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me.

After reading the new chapter, I feel like I will never go back to pretending to be cool.

I'm not looking forward to the world he wrote, I'm looking forward to its main world, and I feel like what's written now is uninteresting. The sense of anticipation is not strong at all. 😐😐

A rare good book, worth reading

Come here from the projection of the heavens to sign in

I feel like this novel is quite good, and I hope it will gain popularity once it is released. Why are so many people criticizing it?

The cultivation techniques in Xun Rizhao in the TV series Eight Arrays - the cultivation world and the Dragon Magic and Shuiyue Dongtian in the TV series Shuiyuedongtian and Yin Zhong's Immortal Scripture and the Dulong Magic and Beiming Magic in the TV series Lin Feng's version of Yunhai Jade Gong Yuan and the Shura Yinsha Kung Fu and Shaoyang Magic and The Tathagata Palm, Tiancan Divine Skill, Seven Spin Slash, and One Finger Zen in the TV series Tathagata Palm by Julian Cheung, and the Dragon Magic Skills, Headless Dragons, Hidden Dragons, Do Not Use, and Dragon Roar Eight Sounds in the TV series The Child Riding the Dragon are very suitable for the protagonist, allowing the protagonist to learn from them and integrate them into his own mysterious skills.

I actually really want to read this novel where the main character is a casual cultivator. Can any book friends recommend some books?

The Vajra Indestructible Magic Power, Absorbing Power, Overlord Sword, Dominate the World, Abi Dao Three Swords, Kunlun Flame Palm and Fire Cloud Sword in the TV series "The Best in the World" are suitable for the protagonists. In the TV series "Devil Sword Chess of Life and Death", the Innate Qi and Four Symbols of Heaven's Will, Dream Promise, Powerful Dragon Palm, One Sword to Separate Worlds, Dragon Riding Slash, Fenfen Palm, Clone Shadow and Overlord Fist are also very useful for the protagonist. The Demon-proofing Sword Technique, Qingtian Sword Technique, Qingtian Thunderbolt Palm and Sifang Xuan Gong (Dongfeng Xuan Gong, Xi Lei Xuan Gong, South Fire Xuan Gong, Beidian Xuan Gong) in the TV series "Wind and Cloud" are also very useful for the protagonist to become stronger. The Yi Jin Jing and Tai Chi in the TV series Young Man Zhang Sanfeng, the martial arts and lion roaring skills of Xiaoyao Wang, and the Eighteen Heavenly Sword Styles and Nine Famous Sword Techniques of Famous Sword Villa can also be used by the protagonist to learn from and integrate into his own Xuan Kung.

I hope that the protagonist can be portrayed as more humane. He should not travel through time just to improve his strength. After upgrading and upgrading again and again, it will be very tiring in the later stages. Just do what you want without going beyond the rules. No matter how promiscuous you are, as long as you have your own bottom line, it doesn't matter if you have a harem or not, as long as the character is well created, there will be no problem. Let me give you an example: Every book about Eunuch Li, the great eunuch next door, blatantly talks about the harem, and many of the books focus on eunuchs. However, the characters are well-created and the plot is interesting enough. As a result, when I open a new book, I know that there are probably many eunuchs who will fall into the trap.

I would like to give my opinion, a person like the protagonist who has greatly improved his martial arts every now and then and has never heard of martial arts is not suitable for joining the sect. Entering is just a kind of bondage, it is better to walk around the world. Don't do that sect upgrade thing again, I'm tired of it already

Don't be the person you once hated the most. Take martial arts as an example, don't be shameless by peeking at other people's skills.

Don't join a (gang) when the protagonist returns to the main world. You can pass on some martial arts secrets to your subordinates. The protagonist has no shortage of resources when traveling across all realms. It is better to be a young master at home than to be a grandson in a gang·

Xiaoao is born to be the only one who is invincible in the East. Feng Qingyang's sword skills are powerful, but his internal strength may not be that strong. Even according to the highest calculation (the Nine Yin Manual practiced in the book of Sword Master Feng Qingyang), it is only half a step innate. The level of Ren Woxing and Fang Zheng is the acquired peak. (The protagonist is also at this level) Therefore, the Songshan Taibao can only be in the middle stage of the day after tomorrow (mostly in the early stage, otherwise he would not be killed by Liu Zhengfeng)

I don't want to have so many female protagonists, I want to write a protagonist who is dedicated to the Tao.

Possession flow, extremely poisonous, disgusting, can't you travel through it yourself?

This seems to be at the level of ten years ago. Are you sure this was written in 2019?

The writing is great, superb, and the author has enough control to write about the common problem of Zhutianliu novels where the power system has not yet appeared in chaos and collapse in so many worlds. However, I still want to make a few comments. First, the protagonist always seems very impatient. He can achieve the goal step by step and has enough time, but he can't bear to be patient and takes shortcuts. Although the golden finger is powerful and will not affect the foundation, this mentality is definitely detrimental to practice, and it will also create dependence on the golden finger. Second, the protagonist lacks enthusiasm for becoming stronger and is very negative. Although the protagonist has been working hard to become stronger, he is always forced to move forward in response to threats. When he feels that he is almost there, he will lack motivation and stop. For example, in the Snow Mountain Flying Fox World, you can obviously use your power to forcibly obtain the Yi Jin Jing and other secrets that are related to the foundation, but you feel that you are enough to deal with the main world, so you go back directly, and you have to drag it to the next world to grab the Yi Jin Jing. This feels inexplicable. The same goes for Panlong, who can improve quickly with the help of divine power, but he made a special trip there, grabbed two divine powers and then stopped... Did you also make a special trip? Third, the protagonist's mind is a bit rigid. This can also be said to be caused by the second point, because it is all for coping, and there is no subjective initiative. Naturally, we just listen to what we hear and feel what we feel. Panlongli Beirut doesn't have any ill intentions. What's wrong with people meeting you? What are you hiding from? With the relationship between my son and Beibei, I won't harm you no matter what. Besides, Beirut has all the corpses of the four divine beasts in his hands. If you practice the nine transformations of the demon god and exchange some of the essence and blood of the four divine beasts with him, won't you get four more transformations? In the future, I will learn the magical power of avatars and the combination of the four divine beasts. Wouldn't this be another trump card? Moreover, Beirut has the unique skill of forging weapons with his godhead. Ask him to forge two weapons. If he can't use them himself, he can win over the Nine-Headed Insect. As a result, the protagonist ran away as soon as Beirut came. Why are you running? I was confused when I saw this. Also, if the protagonist learns the Heavenly Emperor Sutra, you can unify the eight worlds of Tianlong from the easy to the difficult. No matter how small a mosquito is, it is still meat. If you occupy a few more small worlds, the luck you gain will be no less than a corner in Journey to the West. That's probably the above points. It's just a matter of nitpicking. Don't be angry if the author sees this. I just want to make some suggestions and complain about it.

The author shouldn't keep praising Jin Yong's martial arts. It's all a routine and makes me vomit. Recommend some TV series that you watched when you were a kid. "The True Name Little Monk", "Oolong in Love", "Snowflake Divine Sword", "Snowflake Goddess Dragon", "Zhongyuan Escort Bureau", "Gan Nineteen Sisters", "Golden Sword and Carved Feathers", there are so many excellent martial arts worlds to write about, why bother writing Jin Yong's martial arts! In the advanced world, there is "Water Moon Cave Sky", so why write "Wind and Cloud"! Writing according to routines does save time and effort, but what you write is what others have written.

It's all Marvel, Yitian, Tianlong, Shendiao, Fengyun, all of them are fucking hurt.

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The main world is called Gaowu, but after so much time, a corner of the world of Gaowu has not yet been revealed. Instead, it keeps moving back and forth between low martial arts, and the slow development is a bit lengthy. I guess the author's original intention is that the world of Gaowu is too vast and powerful, and he wants the protagonist to go from low to high step by step, lay a solid foundation first, and then gradually advance to open up the face of Gaowu. But there is absolutely no need to constantly travel through the metal system. The metal system is purely low-level martial arts, and it is useless no matter how much you learn. A few are enough. The previous flying fox and other worlds are completely useless, just one Tianlong Babu. Tianlong can be said to be the world with the highest gold martial arts value. The martial arts in it are all-encompassing from low to high, and there are many magical skills. If you want the palm technique to have Dragon Subduing, the footwork to have Lingbo, and the sword technique to have the Six Meridians, There is Beiming to absorb people's internal energy, Douzhuan to use force to fight, Xiao Wuxiang, a copycat magic skill (could there be a more powerful genuine Wuxiang skill?), Bahuang Liuhe, a fantasy magic skill, and even the BOSS sweeping monk skill (the skill of which is still unsolved, and it is impossible to have a three-foot Qi wall according to the metal system).

Author, I hope you will read "The Legend of Wulin Banxia" and study like Wenzhao Gong. You can see the gap between your protagonist and his protagonist.

Why doesn't anyone write about Li Liang's works? Such as: The Complete Works of Yang Xiaoxie, My Avatar, Jianghu Yidanpi, The Wonderful Thief Ding Xiaogou, The Conflicting Heavenly Master, etc.! These are very interesting! Much better than the books written by Jin Yong, Gu Long, and Wo Longsheng!

It's really useless to travel through the world of Jade Blood Realm. For this, you have to travel to the Tang Dynasty or Fengyun world at least. If the level is too low, it will be of no use to you at all.

Shaolin Temple is really poisonous. You already know what will happen. Why don't you be more prepared? Why don't you tell Zhang Xiaohu to be careful? You are such a fool.

In addition, the protagonist's efficiency in obtaining cause and effect is too low! If you get a lot of cause and effect, it will be war or civilization development! War requires a lot of manpower and material resources, so we won't consider it for now. That is the development of civilization. The development of civilization means opening academies, enlightening the people's wisdom, making paper, guns and cannons, developing steam engines, and developing civilization to the steam age. You can basically conquer the world! By the way, the premise is to unseat the emperor!