Eagle Gaze

Just attack in one battle and write endlessly in circles. Isn't more than a hundred chapters enough? How many battles does the author plan to write?

Not only water, but also sensational and without any nutrition

Author, is The Blood-stained Skies of the Anti-Japanese War the last book you wrote? I like that air combat book very much. It is very realistic. I see that your writing and pen name are the same as the author of the previous book. I would like to ask you, is it you who wrote it? If so, on which platform did you write the two books "The Sky" and "Jiawu" before?

The key to reading online articles is the opening chapter, the so-called golden three chapters. What does this say? When you turn to Chapter 6, you are still rambling on about popular science history. Just take your time and write your ink, then abandon it and leave.

This book is an excellent recent work in the military genre by Qidian. The Air Force is a technical branch and the writing is difficult. Thank you to the author for your hard work.

If I read it correctly, the protagonist hasn't started aerial combat in Chapter 45... Do you think it's pure literature?

It's really confusing and I can't understand it

It's a mess, has no focus, and can't grasp the main line.

Oh, it's just because of the speed. I still want to follow up and get a monthly pass.

To be honest, I feel that this author is not suitable for writing a book. I have read fifty or sixty chapters now, and none of them are written clearly. I read a few chapters of air battles and I still can't figure out whether the plane was shot down or not. It's all confusing and doesn't bring any sense of satisfaction at all.

What the hell did you write at the beginning? Nothing was explained clearly.

The subject matter is very good, and the author is working hard on it. I hope it will achieve good results, so go for it. The following personal thoughts: 1. The narrative method is not suitable for online articles. There are too many long narrations and scene changes, causing readers to be unable to keep up and not understand what is being said. It can be seen that the writing style has a bit of a TV series look, but the shooting techniques at that time were different from those of online writing. 2. The characters' dialogues account for too much content and there are too many popular science introductions in the early stage, which affects the readability. 3. It feels a bit literary, or more like a Taiwanese opera style, which does not match the current popular online writing style. I wonder if it was influenced by Taiwan's Republic of China air combat TV series.

I quite like it, but a quarter of the novel is good, a quarter of the explanation is good, and it would be better to delete half of it for essay writing.

Don't always write about the internal fighting between the bald guys. At that time, the internal fighting between the Navy and the Army was enough to fill a book of jokes. It's quite interesting to write about it.

It seems that even if a hundred chapters are written, it will be difficult to get on the shelves. It is better to join the party like Lao Du, and then go to the Aviation Commission to build airplanes with Wang Zhu, Xing Qixin, and Qian Changzuo. We have the Wright R-1820-F53 in stock. Instead of assembling a Hawker III, let's build our own Mosquito fighter/bomber/transport.

It's good that the author follows his own pace

The book is a good book, but the updates are too slow. Even the production team members don't dare to take a break like the author. As for the Zero, I remember that in order to reduce weight, the aircraft used a large amount of new aluminum alloy materials, and holes were drilled in the frame. This caused the overall strength of the Zero to decrease. Moreover, when performing high-speed maneuvers, it is too light and has no power assist system, so it requires a lot of effort to control the aircraft for maneuvers and can easily cause the aircraft to disintegrate, especially maneuvers after high-speed dives. Moreover, the Japanese pilots at this time probably did not know this weakness of the Zero, and would only find it difficult to control the Zero after entering high-speed flight. If they could induce the Zero to perform high-speed maneuver attacks in a dog fight, they could use the maneuverability of the I-16 to gain an advantage. Also, I remember that the new aluminum alloy material has a lower ignition point, and there are no self-sealing fuel tanks and pilot protective panels. If the machine gun is replaced with armor-piercing incendiary bombs, it will definitely be a surprise if it hits.