A Certain American Comic's Side-Job Master

The author should consider the fact that the protagonist can sell space backpacks. The smaller one is smuggling, and the larger extreme one requires dead soldiers to carry nuclear bombs and place them on the enemy's territory. This feasibility is high. If the space backpack is sold later, and the terrorists or the forces that want to provoke a war still use ordinary people to launch the war, or use ordinary weapons to launch the war, then your space backpack is extremely poisonous.

Behind the scenes, don't expose it. This is the best way to write. Be a third party other than S. H. I. E. L. D. And the Avengers.

When the author told Tony so early, wasn't he afraid that there would be no Iron Man in the future? After all, some things can't be changed just by talking. Tony's change started with the kidnapping.

It's so watery, I just write like this over and over again. I can write 3,000 words for a background introduction, 3,000 words for buying a fish, and 3,000 words for copying from Baidu Encyclopedia.

No, it's a Marvel movie again. Even if you wear Marvel anime, it's okay. Marvel movies have been poorly written in the past two years.

Will you incorporate innovation by learning from Marvel's technology? Or can we only do system things?

It became more and more complicated, and I wrote three or four chapters on a spider thread. It was very laborious and expensive to come up with. This thing can be produced in a few hours by asking Stark.

It was okay at the beginning, but after meeting the Punisher, the plot was somewhat accelerating, and the overall reading experience was quite good. And the setting of sub-professional full master is also very interesting. After reading the few paragraphs about the industrial park, my impression really dropped a bit. The first dozen or so chapters were quite positive, but why has the moral sense declined at this point? To transform the Winter Soldiers into awakening, you can just add a few explanations about preventing rebellion in the future. There is no need to say "Tools must have the awareness of tools" before forcibly shutting down. Taken together, okay, the enhanced person is no longer a human being, so by the way, Bucky was directly sold to Tony. It's very awkward. According to such standards and logic, if the protagonist is destroyed by Thanos in the future, then don't struggle. After all, "ants must have the consciousness of ants." It feels like there are too many spoilers. The protagonist must have read the novel script and is not afraid of the butterfly effect at all. And the most amazing thing is that Gu Yi completely let nature take its course. Take Iron Man as an example. Tony's suffering is an important opportunity to become Iron Man. Without this incident and knowing the script, he would most likely only be Young Iron Man, not Iron Man. Moreover, Tony, who was not awakened by the disaster, had a very bad and dandy character and attitude at that time. In the book, he is too innocent. Generally speaking, it's okay. Come on, author, teacher.

Tell others that you can see the future from the very beginning? As soon as this ability is exposed, whoever is not greedy will want to arrest you and interrogate you in the future!

These two chapters are not very good. There is no need to step on others to highlight your own strengths. What's the big deal in bullying an old man? It's really not pleasant for a veteran to wake up after being injured and be treated as an experience pack directly.