A Certain American Comic's Side-Job Master

The idea of ​​the protagonist selling spatial backpacks needs to be considered by the author. On a smaller scale, it could be smuggling; on a larger, more extreme scale, it could involve assassins carrying nuclear bombs to enemy territory to plant them. This is highly feasible. If you sell the space backpack later, and terrorists or forces wanting to instigate war still use ordinary people or ordinary weapons to wage war, then selling the space backpack becomes extremely toxic.

Stay behind the scenes, don't expose yourself; this is how to write a compelling story—be a third party outside of S. H. I. E. L. D. And the Avengers.

The author told Tony this so early on; isn't he worried there wouldn't be a proper Iron Man story? After all, some things can't be changed overnight, and Tony's change began with the kidnapping.

It's so sloppy. It's just repeating the same old things over and over again. A simple background introduction can be written in 3,000 words, buying a fish can be written in 3,000 words, and even copying from Baidu Encyclopedia can be written in 3,000 words.

Seriously? Another Marvel movie? Even wearing Marvel comic book characters would be fine. Marvel movies have been overdone these past two years.

Will you learn from Marvel's technology and integrate it for innovation? Or can you only create system-level products?

It's getting worse and worse. They wrote three or four chapters about spider silk, going through all that trouble to create it at a huge cost. Stark could have made that in a few hours.

The beginning was fine, but after encountering the Punisher, the plot accelerated somewhat, making for a pretty good overall reading experience. The "Master of All Secondary Professions" setting was also quite interesting. My impression of the story really dipped a bit when I read the sections about the industrial park.

Telling others from the very beginning that you can see the future? Who wouldn't be envious of that ability? If it were me, I'd want to arrest you and interrogate you about the future!

These two chapters are not very good. There's no need to put others down to show off your own awesomeness. What's so great about bullying an old man? A veteran who wakes up from injury is immediately used as an experience point, which is not a satisfying point.