Longevity Begins with Daily Intelligence

This article has gone off the rails since I entered the mountain. If I don't pull it back quickly, it can be said to have collapsed. What is your golden finger? It is daily information, especially information related to your own personal safety. From the moment you enter the mountain, your golden finger is completely useless in all the important links that promote the plot. Then your biggest selling point is gone. If your selling point is gone, will anyone still read this book? First of all, there must be intelligence on the first day after entering the mountain, saying that the Han family is planning to rebel and is here to find the formation base, so that the pig's feet can give the old man a subtle hint. Second, on the day the old man had an accident, the intelligence should have shown that a monk from the Han family was alive and wanted to kill the pig's feet. Third, when pig's feet enter the city, it should be a reminder that the Han family is blocking the door and wants to arrest the pig's feet and silence them. Fourth, before Uncle Shi betrays him, there must be intelligence showing that he has been bribed. Only in this way can we stick to the theme. Look at what you are writing now. Your golden finger is completely useless. Then when others come in to read it, they know everything in advance, make full preparations, and play with the supporting roles. If you lose your golden finger like this, will others still read it? Finally, there is still no intelligence in the Immortal Mansion. If you continue like this, it will completely collapse! Hurry up and pull it back, otherwise it will collapse.

You regard your own golden finger as the sky bottle. You are poor and have no qualifications and understanding. Which big force has less love and fear than you.

Goldfinger still needs to be limited. Although you have noticed this problem and limited it to three times a day, you can only contact people you contact. I think it is still too much. First, it should be limited to once a day, and it must only appear at midnight, so as to prevent the protagonist from completely seeking advantages and avoiding disadvantages. Otherwise, there will be no way to write later! Second, only the names of people you have contacted will be displayed. Those that have been heard are not counted, that is, the names of those that have been heard are not displayed. For example, if Lian Shengxue comes to find the protagonist, it will show that a certain big shot will appear at your house tomorrow. Instead of a streak of snow appearing at your house. Third, the information that appears can only be related to yourself. Take the introduction as an example. The steward of Baicaotang wants to buy Yueyin grass and lower the price of rice, so that the information can appear. The neighbor got the ring, and there is an old man who wants to kill the protagonist to sacrifice, or to help tide over the difficulties, so that the corresponding information can appear. Otherwise, many plots later in the writing will inevitably be contradictory, causing the whole book to collapse. Actually, what you wrote earlier is already somewhat unreasonable, but it's just too few and not particularly noticeable. For example, when purchasing Moon Yin Grass, the people in the store are not fools, so how could they suddenly triple the price? Don't call businessmen cunning, even ordinary people will send people to attack in several directions. First, they will sweep away all the goods on the market at a low price, and then buy them at a high price. That is what makes people go to the mountains and work hard. Also, the first time the protagonist goes to see Xiao Rou, he knows that he is an informant. The second time he goes there, he should find a way to get his eldest brother to join him so that he can become him, instead of going to the brothel every day and waiting for the other party to follow him. This way of writing does not show the danger of life and death at all. Also, the author is probably also influenced by "No Man Is Perfect" and writes about a hard-working casual cultivator. However, "No Man Is Perfect" writes about opening up the front line of war, so everyone, "No Man Is Perfect", you write about thousands of years of peace and tranquility. It is not appropriate to copy it mechanically.

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The situation is not very good, how did you sign the contract?

I don't understand why my grades are poor, but I think it's okay

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