The True Martial Ancestor of Martial Arts

I read more than 200 chapters and ran away immediately after seeing the interaction with Lin Dong.

The beginning is readable and contains new ideas, but there are few updates. In addition, the subsequent plot is like a running account, so it is recommended to keep reading to watch the follow-up.

Come on, keep updating

The protagonist now lacks a body-training technique. Lin Dong and Muchen are able to transcend the level of combat. The body-training technique is indispensable. Lin Dong's combat greatly improved after he practiced the Great Sun Thunder Body, and then the Blue Sky Dragon Transformation Technique. Muchen practiced the Thunder God Body, and then practiced the Dragon and Phoenix Scripture. The protagonist should improve and upgrade his natal talisman into three types of practitioners: spiritual power, Yuanli, physical qi and blood. The Great Lord Muchen goes to the Origin of Divine Beasts to practice the power of physical qi and blood. The Supreme Immortal Heaven Muchen can combine the power of the holy physical body and the immortal spiritual power to fight. The power of physical qi and blood is comparable to the power of spiritual power and soul.

If it's an emotional drama, a stubborn author and a rock-eating reader, it's a perfect match

An article about changing marriage under the guise of being single (matching both ends), saying that you are single, but always writing about ambiguity 😅

The position is to become a single person, so those who can accept changing marriages and becoming white should not make random suggestions. Introduction to selected readers. From my personal point of view, most of the people who read the single articles are of a nurturing nature and are most afraid of being bullied. The least thing you need to worry about in transsexual novels is the male protagonist, because~every reader is the male protagonist in his or her own conception~ The biggest fear is to arrange the male protagonist under the guise of so-called image creation in order to deliberately write emotional lines. Remember that this is a transformation article, and a large part of the readers should be male readers. Change it to a single story and arrange a male protagonist, just to watch the child bride who has been raised for many years being raped. So uncomfortable, uncomfortable.

First of all, there is no doubt that it is a male video. If the protagonist is female, it is a female video, and if the protagonist is male, it is a male video. Is it difficult for you to say that Danmei is a male video? As for remarrying, I personally think it is a female channel. Her biological sex is female, and in her heart, she is a beautiful person. She is a proper female channel. In addition, there are a lot of pineapple buns for people who want to change their marriage, so those who like to change their marriage should not look for a sense of presence at the starting point, okay?

Curious 1. Does the author feel that licking dogs is a good feeling? 2. Is the author a female? 3. Does the author really think that his writing is good or is he just being arrogant🙂

Suddenly there are several more character slots. Ying Huanhuan wants to grab them too? If the author has a biased idea, it is best to grab an Aya Qingzhu. After all, the original book is about getting on the bus first and paying for it later. You, the heroine of the original novel, will be scolded after all. The good-hearted protagonist's wife suddenly disappears. Fans of the original novel may not be able to bear it. Ying Huanhuan is not suitable. It is a bit inappropriate to return a female protagonist to the harem. It is okay to distort a heroine's sexual orientation, but it will be very dramatic if it is distorted. Just a suggestion, the author will consider it.

The author said that the protagonist is single. In fact, all the named female characters in the original novel fell in love with the protagonist. Not only did they steal Lin Dong's harem, but they also didn't let Lin Dong go. They also forced a setting in which the protagonist was emotionally insensitive. Is this a single? Isn't this the harem? But when I read the author's confession, he seemed to really think it was good to write this way, and I couldn't say anything.

The writing is good, but I don't accept marriage. I think the unnecessary plot with Lin Dong should be reduced.

I wrote a lot, but deleted them all in the end. I wrote some things in the comments that I didn't want to post. After seeing Lin Dong's confession and being rejected and beaten a little later, I just want to say that the biggest problem with this book is that it doesn't quite match the tone of the title and introduction. My most obvious impression so far is that I seem to have watched a young boy secretly have feelings for a girl who fell from the sky; a story about a boy who constantly benefits from a girl? Let's look back at the title of your book: "The True Martial Ancestor of Martial Arts" Yes, you have labeled "White Moonlight" in your introduction, but it is at the very end. Compared to the feeling that the plot gives many people, this label is not only not in the title of the book, but also at the end of the introduction. If the author chooses a book title such as "Wu Dong: The Real Nanny", "Wu Dong: Lin Dong's White Moonlight", and then matches it with a more appropriate introduction, such as: "The story experienced with Lin Dong, the girl's goal is to become the Martial Ancestor." Believe me, in this way, it doesn't matter even if you don't indicate single or Bai Yueguang in the introduction. I think many people, including me, will not be dissatisfied - if we still come in and take a look. And you probably don't have to keep it and write it. In short, just like the protagonist of Long Aotian who often suffers from defeat, this example may seem to have nothing to do with this article, but in fact it has one thing in common, which is what I want to tell you, the author - although the plot of your novel can be logically coherent, it may seem to readers to have strayed from the theme, unless the title of your book is "Long Aotian Can't Make a Move". After all, this is the first time we see your work. I feel a little depressed, I don't want to vomit or feel unhappy, so let's leave it at that.

It's really interesting that he always catches the slightest hint of the situation. He says he won't marry but is still so sensitive, and scolds the male characters when he interacts with them. Do you like watching female pervert protagonists? Watching a man pretending to be a woman, hooking up with women, and inexplicably turning other characters into lesbians, satisfies his desire to sleep with women, right? This is already annoying in a male-led story, but is it a bit crazy to do this in a female-led story? Otherwise, why would you care so much about this? Even this is a heroine story, not a transformation story, and it is all sensitive to the normal interaction between the male character (if the transformation story is even more rampant, why don't you say you are a man, the problem is that the soul male is not allowed to interact with men, this is strange, interaction ≠ marriage inequality seconds. ) The male protagonist can interact with male and female characters at will, but the female protagonist's interaction with male characters is like losing her cyber virginity. There is no such reason, but some readers are too outrageous Don't tell me about your tendency to get married, can you first post the text of the plot where the protagonist is passionate about the male character?

Please author, please hide Lin Dongshen. You really can't grasp their sense of distance. Otherwise, you can just remarry and let me stop the loss in advance (or mark the interactive ones so I can skip to read them)

It's really the bad taste of the female author. . . Removing the flirting and unclear emotional scenes doesn't actually affect the plot, but this bit of shit has to be added. . .

If the protagonist likes Ling Qingzhu, just break it up, but it has been clearly stated that the protagonist is single, and he still wants to break up the CP, and he keeps saying that it is for Lin Dong's good.

Mu Zi

I don't even read the book, I just read the author's harsh words in the comment section every day😋

I thought the author would be a little more restrained after explaining it in a single chapter, but the result is that he still keeps being ambiguous and insists that he is single. Does that mean he is single as long as he is not 🌿? There's no difference between marrying someone in the humanities. You've always been stubborn 🤭. I saw that I trusted you in vain after you published a single chapter to explain. I thought you would really change. But the result is that you still want to have it all. You want to marry someone who is in the humanities but also want to earn the money to be single 😰

I can't stand it anymore. I wasted 20 bucks. Why are there so many emotional scenes between Lin Dong and the heroine so direct? Isn't it good to be good friends? The Lin Dong you wrote is as fucking disgusting as a dog licker.

I think you want to have a multi-line ending or a sudden change of lines. One moment he was intimate with Ling Qingzhu, and the next moment he was flirting with Lin Dong. Readers on both sides want to eat it. I have seen many such authors, but in the end they were scolded and reported, and most of their books disappeared. No matter how you plan to write it, it's best to decide whether to draw a clear line between you and the other side, or to make it clear whether you want to take it all.

I haven't seen a fan of this level in a long time. First of all, the plot, characters, and writing are all of a high standard, including some of the second creations, and it can be seen that they have put a lot of thought and thought into it. Just looking at this, I think this article is worth reading. Secondly, regarding the currently controversial emotional line, I think the author's ideas, including labels, believe that there should be three or two friends on the martial arts road, and the protagonist is a female and has a very charming personality (this is true for the characters in the book), so they will be more or less attracted. Meeting men and women from all walks of life, the author believes that this kind of interaction with "friends" can make the martial arts road less lonely, and some life-like plots can make the protagonist more "human", so the protagonist shows the image of a quirky "little witch" (?). These are all good, and to be honest, I quite like watching them. Back to the controversial point, some readers think that there are too many descriptions of emotional drama, because some people may come here because of the tag of being single, or they may not recognize the target of the emotional drama. Maybe the author wants to write about that kind of friendship, but some plots will make readers think that friendship has deteriorated a bit, such as the birth of Xuanhua, etc., While some plots I think are expressions of friendship, such as drinking together, interacting with Qingtan (this is more about taking care of my sister?) And so on. (Purely subjective) Perhaps everyone has different judgments on whether friendship has deteriorated, so I feel that the author's emotional drama is leaning toward Marry or Lily. Moreover, both Aya Qingzhu and Lin Dong expressed clear emotions towards the protagonist, but the protagonist seemed to be waking up from a dream (because from the perspective of our readers, their feelings are very obvious, so it felt a bit abrupt), and then quickly "kicked" each other away. The former handled it better, while the latter Just... Actually, I am a pure fan (serious person). I appreciate protagonists who can respond to or be responsible for most of the main characters' emotions. I want to see protagonists who can be idiots emotionally, but at least have progress. I think protagonists with rational thoughts are more to my liking. The above are my own opinions. If anything offends you, please communicate in a civilized manner. I hope the author can insist on writing his own and not be coerced by some people in the comment area (including me). I think your writing is quite good.

Her beauty lies in her breathtaking, most stunning beauty in the world, but also in her strong personality. Since this kind of personality charm is endless, he will bravely climb to the top, always walk on the road of seeking the truth, and be a devout seeker, even if he is at the top of the mountain, seeing all the mountains and small mountains at a glance; even though there are thousands of people, I will go on with the pride, blooming with the astonishing wisdom Magnificent, the confident posture of opening mountains and building bridges when encountering rivers, and those difficulties, all the more show her unparalleled grace. Mu Ziling stands in front, showing the unique light of my flowers blooming and then hundreds of flowers will kill. As a woman, she shows the arrogant style of an independent woman.

Why do so many book friends reject marrying Lin Dong? Apart from having little culture, Dong'er's character and perseverance are considered to be excellent. In the later world, he is also a figure as important as Emperor Yan, and he is considered a good match. Doesn't it mean that the protagonist has to live alone and be arbitrary for eternity to be considered a good book?

I was confused after reading the book review section. I just want to read some books that I am interested in reading. At least for me, it looks good so far. Don't die ah ah ah ah

The problem is that Lin Dong is treated like a licking dog, and his two wives have run away. He looks really clownish. Wu Dong also read it bit by bit back then. To be honest, he still had some feelings for Lin Dong. After seeing this, I really couldn't hold back. Most of the Dou Po fans on non-special websites hide Xiao Yan first and then take Dai'er. There are even very few marriage-changing works that really separate Xiao Yan and Dai'er. It's best not to take the initiative to tear down the popular cp. Readers of the original book really can't resist it.

Find a way to marry the protagonist home.

This book is very well written. It is the best fantasy heroine novel I have ever read.

I really like this novel. The setting written by the author is great. I have recently found a lot of Tudou fanfics and this is the best one. Cheers to the author! ! !