The True Martial Ancestor of Martial Universe

The protagonist now lacks a body-training technique. Lin Dong and Muchen are able to transcend the level of combat. The body-training technique is indispensable. Lin Dong's combat greatly improved after he practiced the Great Sun Thunder Body, and then the Blue Sky Dragon Transformation Technique. Muchen practiced the Thunder God Body, and then practiced the Dragon and Phoenix Scripture. The protagonist should improve and upgrade his natal talisman into three types of practitioners: spiritual power, Yuanli, physical qi and blood. The Great Lord Muchen goes to the Origin of Divine Beasts to practice the power of physical qi and blood. The Supreme Immortal Heaven Muchen can combine the power of the holy physical body and the immortal spiritual power to fight. The power of physical qi and blood is comparable to the power of spiritual power and soul.

If it's an emotional drama, a stubborn author and a rock-eating reader, it's a perfect match

An article about changing marriage under the guise of being single (matching both ends), saying that you are single, but always writing about ambiguity 😅

Curious 1. Does the author feel that licking dogs is a good feeling? 2. Is the author a female? 3. Does the author really think that his writing is good or is he just being arrogant🙂

The position is to become a single person, so those who can accept changing marriages and becoming white should not make random suggestions. Introduction to selected readers. From my personal point of view, most of the people who read the single articles are of a nurturing nature and are most afraid of being bullied. The least thing you need to worry about in transsexual novels is the male protagonist, because~every reader is the male protagonist in his or her own conception~ The biggest fear is to arrange the male protagonist under the guise of so-called image creation in order to deliberately write emotional lines. Remember that this is a transformation article, and a large part of the readers should be male readers. Change it to a single story and arrange a male protagonist, just to watch the child bride who has been raised for many years being raped. So uncomfortable, uncomfortable.

First of all, there is no doubt that it is a male video. If the protagonist is female, it is a female video, and if the protagonist is male, it is a male video. Is it difficult for you to say that Danmei is a male video? As for remarrying, I personally think it is a female channel. Her biological sex is female, and in her heart, she is a beautiful person. She is a proper female channel. In addition, there are a lot of pineapple buns for people who want to change their marriage, so those who like to change their marriage should not look for a sense of presence at the starting point, okay?

Suddenly there are several more character slots. Ying Huanhuan wants to grab them too? If the author has a biased idea, it is best to grab an Aya Qingzhu. After all, the original book is about getting on the bus first and paying for it later. You, the heroine of the original novel, will be scolded after all. The good-hearted protagonist's wife suddenly disappears. Fans of the original novel may not be able to bear it. Ying Huanhuan is not suitable. It is a bit inappropriate to return a female protagonist to the harem. It is okay to distort a heroine's sexual orientation, but it will be very dramatic if it is distorted. Just a suggestion, the author will consider it.

The author said that the protagonist is single. In fact, all the named female characters in the original novel fell in love with the protagonist. Not only did they steal Lin Dong's harem, but they also didn't let Lin Dong go. They also forced a setting in which the protagonist was emotionally insensitive. Is this a single? Isn't this the harem? But when I read the author's confession, he seemed to really think it was good to write this way, and I couldn't say anything.

The writing is good, but I don't accept marriage. I think the unnecessary plot with Lin Dong should be reduced.

I wrote a lot, but deleted them all in the end. I wrote some things in the comments that I didn't want to post. After seeing Lin Dong's confession and being rejected and beaten a little later, I just want to say that the biggest problem with this book is that it doesn't quite match the tone of the title and introduction. My most obvious impression so far is that I seem to have watched a young boy secretly have feelings for a girl who fell from the sky; a story about a boy who constantly benefits from a girl? Let's look back at the title of your book: "The True Martial Ancestor of Martial Arts" Yes, you have labeled "White Moonlight" in your introduction, but it is at the very end. Compared to the feeling that the plot gives many people, this label is not only not in the title of the book, but also at the end of the introduction. If the author chooses a book title such as "Wu Dong: The Real Nanny", "Wu Dong: Lin Dong's White Moonlight", and then matches it with a more appropriate introduction, such as: "The story experienced with Lin Dong, the girl's goal is to become the Martial Ancestor." Believe me, in this way, it doesn't matter even if you don't indicate single or Bai Yueguang in the introduction. I think many people, including me, will not be dissatisfied - if we still come in and take a look. And you probably don't have to keep it and write it. In short, just like the protagonist of Long Aotian who often suffers from defeat, this example may seem to have nothing to do with this article, but in fact it has one thing in common, which is what I want to tell you, the author - although the plot of your novel can be logically coherent, it may seem to readers to have strayed from the theme, unless the title of your book is "Long Aotian Can't Make a Move". After all, this is the first time we see your work. I feel a little depressed, I don't want to vomit or feel unhappy, so let's leave it at that.