My Explosion Rate in the Extraordinary World Is 100%!

The protagonist has been forced to become wise. As far as the golden finger obtained by the protagonist is concerned, the best growth path must be to survive and grow as the main theme, relying on the protagonist's own foresight to grow. Development is the backbone, and the others are branches and leaves, growing into a towering tree. Is the final result a perfect ending or another reincarnation? It all depends on the author's imagination and mood. But at present, I have found that the author has many problems and flaws in his thinking. Based on my many years of reading experience, I would like to briefly express my opinion. If what I said is wrong, just treat it as fart 😁 1. At the beginning, Goldfinger is a developmental type, so it is not invincible from the beginning. This is no problem, but as it goes on, it becomes unparalleled, which conflicts with the essence of Goldfinger. 2. Not developing slowly (every time there is a conflict, one is left alive, which eventually leads to oneself becoming Tang Monk), one of the poisonous points needs to be changed. Either there is no one left alive, or it is unknown. The specific methods and the protagonist's mental journey depend on how the author conceives and depicts it. There is a lot that can be written. 3. There is no step-by-step process. There are too many names of characters, and the various forces are mixed and unclear. A new name suddenly appears, which is very abrupt. If you read it quickly, you will be confused and feel confused and inexplicable. This is one of the hidden poison spots. (For example: After the death of Jiang Yu, the names can be changed to Ah Ba and Ah Jiu. Making them into loyal guards who repay their kindness will be more impressive. Instead of reading the book again when I was writing this post, I only learned their names.) There are too many names for the positive and negative characters, and it is easy to forget the names and have no characteristics. Successful characterization must be clear-cut, for example: a villain: is he born evil, or is the environment forcing him to become bad, or is he the result of ups and downs and darkening? If you can write about it, you will be a living person who can be remembered at a glance. A good person must be well portrayed. You must know that in a chaotic environment, it is more difficult to remain lawful and kind than to become depraved. Just like portraying a bad person, life, environment, and experience are all essential. There is more that can be written here. Remember not to write like this: Zhang 1423 said: 643684 6 Luo 8435 said: 73648468 Gao 8389 said: 43686469 If it is not really needed, passerby A does not need a name It is recommended to only open 3 narrative lines in the early stage, such as: 1. The protagonist's strength grows (the main point of this book is to enjoy). 2. The two heroines have perfect characters (this book is more enjoyable). 3. A battle between two villains or a positive and negative battle, which extremely tests the author's thinking and writing style. It is not impossible to have multiple lines, but most authors will collapse without realizing it (necessary plot conflict) The above points can be interspersed with each other, and there is too much that can be written

Decades later, a giant monster beat the protagonist to death. The protagonist asked Wuyunwuqi why he treated him like this The monster smiled coldly and said: Do you still remember the mosquito you killed the day you were reborn? That's my great-great-grandson

I feel that the author wrote the protagonist too slowly and not decisively enough. There is a high probability that he will kill the younger ones and provoke the older ones, and deliberately provoke them. Since the protagonist has fallen out with the team, he should kill his teammates after getting the information. He has to let the teammates survive for a while to attract Cheng Yuheng from the Qianlong Club, and then they will kill the Qianlong Club together after a conflict. It is okay to kill them. The protagonist has not received any additional benefits. The author's meaning is unclear, and the subsequent focus on describing the villain's reaction is also not very good.

It would be great if the author could make some plots logically reasonable

Here, I would like to thank the reader [Firecracker 030]. How can I put it, for newbies in the early stages of writing new books, it is very lonely and boring. Because you have to be single-player all the time in the early stage, you have no idea whether what you write is good or bad, and you have to worry about it every day. And I was quite lucky, I had someone to accompany me in the early stage, although not many, although very few. (Okay, actually only two or three) But this is quite satisfying to me. Some authors may not even have one in the early stage, at least that was how I used to write books. (Mainly because I am a bedbag) Finally, I would like to ask for a follow-up study. This is very important for new authors and is also the motivation for writing. It can be said that the motivation for my writing comes entirely from you readers. Because of you, I have a story! Because of you, I can persevere! No more talking, let's go and write. Xiaoluo is here to bow to all the readers. Thanks for having you! Thanks for accompanying me! ⊂(˃̶͈̀ε˂̶͈́⊂ )

Come on! A very good start.

Although it is white, it still looks pretty

The author's game background shouldn't be that big. There are so many pitfalls in a broken territory, and the protagonist just can't leave.

To be honest, I only need to read the introduction and not read the book.

This introduction is trying to screen readers. Congratulations on your success.

What is the situation in Chapter 6? Why are the healing skills not used? ? There are no weapons or various medicines. I know it is a god-level path, and I am still shocked.

Eunuch 😢

I've finished watching Eunuch. I feel like the setting is okay, but the plot is a bit awkward. Many places feel too forced.

Suddenly I thought of a book about a certain dog

I can accept the protagonist being a bitch, but not too bitch😆

Stream of consciousness writing in 2004. That is, as long as the plot is passable, I can write whatever comes to my mind and ignore other things. There are a batch of such books every once in a while. The writing characteristics are exactly the same.

Why is the plot of this book so similar to a comic? It's exactly the same, just changed the background

I'm on Daily Poison Guide, let's take a look 🙂