Era: I Have a Small World

I've read it, and I'm about 600 chapters in. I don't like it. The rest of it is all about catching spies. A lot of mindless plots

Everything else is okay! It's a bit disgusting that the protagonist wants to erect a memorial arch even though he is a scumbag! We men are lustful! The protagonist is obviously a scumbag and wants to die! The author insists on making him passive! I don't understand, I don't care! Grass! Do you think we are idiots? What a scumbag! What are you pretending to be? Whoever has the ability is not a scumbag! Grass

I watched it when I saw multiple female leads. Nowadays, the mainstream trend is to have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist. Many female protagonists are a vulnerable group

The protagonist buys jade everywhere to collect spiritual fluid, then uses the spiritual fluid to exchange for food, and the food is exchanged for money to buy jade, and this cycle continues. It makes no sense. Now the protagonist is not short of food at all. How can his family have enough? The risk of doing this is so high. Do you really think that the police are not doing anything? Are they all good people?

The writing is okay, it should be all from what I have heard, but there are some places that were missed in writing. It was a difficult time, and I would not want to do it again. Thanks to the farmers of New China for a better life. They endured hunger and saved rations in exchange for a better future. The accumulation of basics is always the most difficult.

Today's literature has a certain literary youth disease! In the 1970s and 1980s, reforms were about to begin, and everyone would wait for the opportunity! But in the 1950s and 1960s, what were you doing in the countryside? As a person who is a realist in the new century, if I go back to that era, I would go abroad to develop, or go to Hong Kong if it is not possible! And what can you do in the country? I can't write about politics, and the business environment is not good! Can I hunt for food every day? Is it possible to be in love and marry eight wives without getting a license? Today's period writing has no sense of immersion, no passion and no goal! Once again, it's still my wife and children who are on the hot bed! It's all nonsense! In the 1950s and 1960s, we went to Burma to build a country, to the United States to work in finance, to Hong Kong to become a big boss, to Europe to sell arms, to Africa to colonize, and to the Soviet Union to buy nuclear bombs. There were so many things I could write about, but I couldn't! Since you are writing a novel, why do you write it in a nondescript way?

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Writing this kind of chronicle is not something that ordinary people can master. In all aspects of social environment and prices, a lot of information needs to be checked. It's written with only a little knowledge, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

It feels quite watery, and it should be written by an old author, not a new author.

To be honest, period stories from the 1950s and 1960s are difficult to write, especially original ones. There are no plug-ins. It's pure suffering. Modern people can't stand it. If you don't run out when there are plug-ins, there's nothing to write about. In the countryside and in the city, it's all boring daily life, either in the fields or at the workbench, and you're not allowed to get involved in politics. In this way, you can only hang around women.

1958. The 15-year-old girl and boy are inseparable every day. What are you writing about? The writing of Goldfinger failed to express the excitement of Goldfinger, and the writing of Fireworks in the World was too greasy. Even in 2024. Unless it's a target. There are no 15-year-old girls and boys who get tired of being together every day?

This is another author who suffers from literary youth. He does not write any documentary literature. He just uses some exaggerated written dialogues. An old peasant who cannot read or write is chewing words, and a street gangster speaks in a coherent manner. At least consider the identity of the characters!

Who cares about many female protagonists in the era? This is what other street writers have personally experienced. I saw a period piece with many female protagonists. Just skip it.

I don't know what the purpose of this author's space is. The protagonist has a space, and his life is not much better. He doesn't need power, money, or antiques. He just needs a woman. Give him a space. He doesn't use it too much. He has a brain, and the writing is flowing. Mainly, he can't write well.

What's the point of being reborn without ambition? Are you full after eating?

Author, if you want to write a chronicle, check the information carefully. It seems that you are writing about the protagonist who traveled to the rural areas of Shandong in 1958. Then what you are writing feels like the countryside of the 1980s. In the 1950s, the rural areas of Shandong mainly grew wheat, sorghum, sweet potatoes, and millet. It was not until the 1960s that corn began to be grown on a large scale. People traveled to Beijing to eat corn noodles because Beijing was transferred from the Northeast. Eating corn noodles pancakes in rural Shandong was also a habit that was developed later.

Just read the introduction. The protagonist has returned to that era, with a golden finger and a small world, but without much ambition. What kind of waste can have this kind of thinking? What kind of garbage can have such a life setting? Only children set great goals in life without thinking. Adults do not have great goals but change their abilities as the environment changes, pushing themselves to have different settings for the future. There are more and more books written by children these days.

I have read more than 50 chapters, and my first impression is: Shui is already at the level of a great master. I wrote about one main topic, but I didn't see the main plot. The golden finger is dispensable. The content in school was even more uncomfortable╯╰

You are already in high school, and you still have to walk a few kilometers on a mountain road to go to school tomorrow. Are you kidding me? While others are studying, your time is wasted on the road. Those who live in rural areas have to live on campus

There is no sense of age at all, it is a mess, like a diary written by a primary school student. The events of that era were not reflected even by Mao.

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Is this new chapter posted by mistake or is it to prevent theft???

It feels like you were tricked by this office later on. . . Didn't you originally want to go abroad to Hong Kong Island? Isn't it particularly unfree now? The more dishes you grab, the more dangerous it will be when you get out. . .

I subscribed until April 3rd, only to find that it was still unavailable on March 30th. Did you stop updating? Still unsolved about anti-theft?

There are so many anti-theft people, what the heck are you looking at?

Reading a novel is the same as guarding against thieves

I have to wait for the burglar alarm every day. I'm really speechless.

Lu Bu appears one after another. What's going on? Or is the website trying to make money?