Horror Life

I like the first story, but I like the following stories differently. The first story is really good, full of suspense (as a web novel) The second and third stories were designed to speed up the plot, or they were too difficult to write to add strength to the protagonist, but they were very abrupt and inexplicable. I kept learning hypnosis with a knife after hundreds of reincarnations... Just... The various organizations behind are also very ancient. The feeling of this book is that the author wanted to write a novel similar to the first story, but due to his writing power and ability, and fan feedback, he had to turn it into a novice online novel. Having said that, the shortcoming is that a lot of things are taken for granted, because the motivation of the protagonist and the purpose of the plot are all vague and messy. It is not clear about the golden finger and the fun. I looked at the rewards after clearing the level, and one comment in particular made me laugh to death. The purpose of clearing the level is to become a better beast... If you make a mistake at the beginning, it will be useless to patch it later.

After reading Chapter 20, the main plot is unclear, the background is unclear, the character has only one protagonist, and the events are also foggy... This is not like the author's previous level...

As shown in the picture, please read it during the new book period! Kneel down and thank you!

It's very interesting. The plot, writing style, writing power, and characterization are all great. As a long-time bookworm, this book is very satisfying. What's rare is that there are no poisonous points, and the characters' three views are also correct. There are no embarrassing plots of pretending to be a slap in the face, and there are no inexplicable conflicts. There is no brainless wit, and the female characters are also normal. There is no inexplicable description of the protagonist. Overall, it seems very comfortable. I really strongly recommend that book friends who read this review will follow up. Because I'm afraid that too few people will support this book, and it's very rare to see a book written by such a normal person. I have to complain about the fact that 80% of the conflicts in male videos are caused by beautiful women causing the male protagonist and the villain to confront each other. This kind of plot really makes me sick...

This book finally shows how to use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, good reviews 👍 From the beginning, I found that you are good at depicting horror plots, and you are poor at writing ordinary world plots. This problem has been mentioned in basically every book 😅 But I guess you really want to balance your abilities, so you try to use a lot of plots in each book. Of course there is progress. It's just that the difference from poor to average is not big for ordinary readers. Fortunately, in this book you finally gave up on using a lot of ordinary dialogue plots that use a lot of "human feelings and sophistication". I don't know if this was because of the previous book. In short, I have great expectations for this book. Although the main plot has not been developed and the horror atmosphere has not yet been developed, the prospects are very exciting. Finally, welcome back!

I was confused when I read it 😰, but there were a lot of good songs in the comments, which made me even more confused. This book is not suitable for me to read.

Isn't this the one who wrote the reply to immortality? The story about reverting to immortality is very good. I thought I had been promoted to a great god long ago. Why am I only at level 4? Is the subject matter unpalatable? That's not right either. Aren't the few people who write about this kind of house or apartment all have platinum gold medals?

Byd writes so quickly because he wants to finish it, right? The new book is still being written and it's unlikely to be cut.

The author's writing style is getting better and better, and the writing is very attractive. There is a connection between every accident, and there is nothing superficial about it. I don't know why other readers find it boring. Isn't it just that when you read a novel or read a story, you just can't understand it and there are some unsolved mysteries? You want to know everything. Do you have to know who this enemy is from God's perspective? How powerful this enemy is, and then let's see how the protagonist finds a way to deal with it, that's it. I still support the author. I have not read every one of my books, but I have read quite a few. I feel like he has a problem. He is very powerful in the early stage, but starts to lose strength in the later stage. The rest of the story is not as fascinating as it was at the beginning. My personal feeling is that I usually read half of his books. But I think he is still very good-looking.

It's nice to read and the book is of very good quality, but why didn't I see it in the recommended guide? What standards are recommended in the guide? I don't understand. Please ask the editor for recommendations. Isn't big data very powerful? Your book is suitable for old bookworms

I'm a little confused, why the two subsequent books don't seem to be written by the same person. I feel that the author still doesn't understand why 😅. It makes no sense. The first one is shocking, and the second one is a masterpiece. The latter is a straight line. There may be many reasons. I will say what I feel is that the subsequent books are in a state of self-pleasure. In fact, I have this feeling since the beginning of wood carving, but it is not very obvious. You have spent too much ink describing things other than supernatural beings, professions, systems, etc. There is no point in reducing the reader's sense of immersion except to make yourself happy. It can be seen that you want to bind your profession to the supernatural. This will basically filter out some casual readers. There will be no sense of immersion, and the level of supernatural horror will be much reduced. Write a lot before the horror appears. It is related to the system, and it completely destroys the atmosphere. What you are good at is writing about atmosphere, and you use redundant pen and ink to completely destroy the atmosphere created. It feels like you have completely lost your way, and you don't need to use your own special skills to destroy it. This is just my personal feeling. I have been recommending it to many people since your first copy, but I think you really need to make a good adjustment. If you want to bind your career to the supernatural and take your own new route, there is nothing wrong with it. Maybe you can do it, but so far, up to this book, I still feel that It's not as good as the previous two books, it's better to go back further. You have already found a path for yourself in the first backstory. The main line of the backstory is clear, there is no long system description, and there are no long and long protagonist professions that ordinary people can't take on. Why do you want to take a route that you are not familiar with and not good at? I have written quite a lot, but I still wish you success as soon as possible.

I am number one!

I can't stand it, I'm so angry that I can't eat

Suddenly I saw a new book, and I read it and it turned out that the previous one was a scam Please don't play with bad jokes. The first book was not very good at focusing on the plot, and the second one was so disgusting that I ran away😅 I thought the horror content was quite good, so I kept paying attention. The first book was even pushed, so please stop writing about history.

It's very average. The writing style, narrative structure, and group portrait descriptions all seem to be mentally retarded except for the protagonist. He has the beauty of Long Aotian ten years ago. Now he's leaning more towards farming, so the rest is just garbage time.

Disadvantages: The dungeon is too long, with one-off locations, one-off characters, and a plot that has little to do with the main plot. It is long, smelly, and very homogeneous. You can skip it directly to watch the ending of the dungeon. Too many plots like this really test the reader's patience. Can the arranged copy not be that one-off?

The story of this woman was a bit hasty. Although this kind of novel does not need to be too detailed, but think about it, I have only had a few contacts with this woman.

It's obviously a good book, and as long as you're not overly picky, you'll definitely enjoy it. It's a pity that it didn't become popular. I can only say that the author was unlucky.

No one responded to my comment section, so I'll ask here. I saw the relationship between the protagonist and Nega and the contract with Catwoman later, and suddenly I thought why the protagonist can control the invisible male corpse? It was obvious that the cursed knife was inserted into his real body, and there was no spiritual contract at all. So how is it controlled?

The first story is okay, but the rest is bland and boring.

As the title says, the development is so fast that I don't feel it at all, just a question mark. Are the male protagonist, female protagonist, and the author all horny?

I followed the wood carvings to find out if the author had released a new book and found a treasure.

It's so cold, there are so few people 😰

The early pace was too slow, which was a flaw, otherwise the results should have been much better. Also, the book is beautiful, come on

Chapter 29. I can't stand it anymore. I really can't stand it anymore.

An original mental patient travels through the civilized world of heaven and earth, leaning towards the dark side. I would like to recommend this new book, everyone, please take a look, thank you!

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.

I caught up on the latest version when it was about 300,000 words, but now I find that I can't read it and have completely forgotten the plot.