Beginning with the Lord of Mysteries, Endless Devouring

This chapter is extremely poisonous. To summarize: the protagonist brought a person back after hard work, and the mission reward was given to this person. This person was going to keep silent, but later he leaked the information and was discovered by the protagonist. This person is nominally a follower of the protagonist, but the following relationship can be terminated at no cost. The protagonist started to train this person without any restrictions. This person has no popularity, no potential, and no strength. He is considered a three-no product, and he has no absolute loyalty. It's like asking a big daddy to come back after hard work, but it's still of no use. Is it because the author feels that the book's performance is very good and too many people are reading it, so he is going to start screening people? If this chapter is not changed, there will be no need to read it. After all, the author has already started screening readers, so why bother reading it? It's not like there are no books to read. Why come here to find fault?

I'll give you a good idea, a combination of 22 pathways and 7 sequences, known as Xiao Yuanchu 😁

It's a bit poisonous. The protagonist obviously knows the mysterious plot, and nothing happens when he lands. It can be said that it is the protection of the Lord God. But he was teased by a coachman and paid more for the fare. He bought information in a tavern and ordered a beer and took out the hardware list. As expected, he was targeted later. Is the protagonist a fool or do you think the reader is a fool? 😅

Really, what are you doing in this butterfly novel? She is the master, the protagonist, or a servant? I don't see the use of this butterfly. She eats, drinks and has fun all day long, but it has no effect. The protagonist has to buy her skills to save her. The protagonist has to do tasks for her to play around. Really, this protagonist is a good servant.

Why did you write this butterfly? She is useless and has no profit. She can betray her at any time when she is brought back to the reincarnation space. The protagonist also lends her reincarnation points? ! Is she a servant or is the protagonist a servant just to disgust the readers? I don't want to watch this anymore.

Less unnecessary action descriptions, meaning: a sentence followed by unnecessary actions, such as touching the nose or something like that, talking just as you speak, how come there are so many weird actions. The writing is actually pretty good, just a rant.

I didn't even have weapons ready, and I didn't have any vigilance at all. I dared to choose the Lord of Mystery at the start. I really thought that there was a harmonious society there.

If the plot is not driven by logic but is entirely accidental, it would be really lame.

The protagonist's IQ is too low, and does the so-called Lina appear to persuade her to quit? When will she die?

I feel that demons and hunters are both suitable for the main god space, but I didn't expect that someone would actually write it.

The protagonist's IQ is touching. In fact, he was written as mentally ill and then went crazy in the mentally retarded plot, so that the plot would be more reasonable.

Is the protagonist too careless and unstable? He casually suffers heavy losses He can only rely on a golden finger to make an unexpected comeback Whether it is an infinite stream or a mysterious fan I am afraid that he will not live long.

I know that the author wanted to write about the feeling of not being careful enough in the early stage and making mistakes and then growing up from the mistakes, but he tried too hard, and the protagonist was written as if he was mentally retarded.

Something unexpected happened when the protagonist wanted to ask a question in the first chapter, but in the next chapter the protagonist had no questions at all? What the hell?

5 Gold List 5 Gold List, didn't you say you have read the original work?

There are too many loopholes in the early stage. Isn't it better to just exchange money? What a hassle

I don't think there is any problem with opening a harem. After all, the protagonists follow the path of Sequence 0, Abyss and Red Priest. They all have desires and are very big. It is better to block them than to open up. There is no problem in opening a harem to vent some of the desires. However, I hope that I want a girl who is popular, has great potential, is strong, and is well-behaved and obedient. Don't be like Die, who is unpopular, has no strength, has low potential, and is usually naughty. After all, rich women can make you stronger, potential stocks can grow with you and help you, popular ones can get more traffic, and being well-behaved and obedient can make life more comfortable. It will definitely be difficult to master the writing power of the author who keeps writing and killing. When the time comes, a large number of readers will be lost. At this time, some other seasonings can better retain readers.

Well, the setting of Goldfinger is pretty good, the characters and the plot are,,, you can't even watch it without thinking about it, it's not bad, but it's very awkward.

The protagonist should be thick-skinned. There is really no need to write a thin-skinned one. There is no need to write an emotional line. Let's get the plot right first.

Does the author like to find a father for himself so much?

Author, I really like your works, why are you a eunuch? Does anyone have any other works of this type?

From Chapter 6 to Chapter 12, I couldn't stand it. The smell of stupidity hit my face and I couldn't breathe.

After taking a look, I feel like there are still hundreds of people following the update. When will Douluo end?

The quality of writers at Qidian is getting worse and worse.

The writing is very good, and it matches the original work of my best friend very well.

Does anyone know what the protagonist was doing before time travel? As soon as you enter the dungeon, you will be suddenly frightened.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁