One Piece: Don't Let Him Draw His Sword

Why are they all about small days? I want to see the flying immortals from the sky, the Thirteen Swords, spanning all directions, the eight-sided Han Sword

If a One Piece fan doesn't eat the fruit and just writes about swordsman, I wish the author won't dive through the bottom of the sea.

The more I read, the more boring I feel. In order to suppress the combat power, the author just writes it all randomly and adds points. If it is so rare, why forcefully suppress the combat power? It's really boring to read later. So what if your protagonist is invincible in the end? The protagonist in that novel is not invincible unless the type is different. It's a purely everyday and peaceful era or hegemony. When the protagonist gets excited, he uses the so-called general to suppress him. The protagonist is really speechless, the fighting power is as disgusting as bullshit, and it feels boring. You are beaten like this by a fool, and you are invincible. If you want to suppress the protagonist's combat power, why do you write so many bullshit generals and four emperors chasing the protagonist? The world is so big and I really want to hide, they chase me a few times

In fact, I have always wanted to complain about something, that is, it is understandable that Japanese swords are not differentiated, but as Chinese people, there is no distinction between swords 😥 It is not good to just call swordsmanship 😅

Such an old pirate novel, how did the author manage to write a 2014-style novel in 2024? The plot is so pure that you can see it from beginning to end. The gang goes to Capone, to the Navy, to the Kingdom of Flowers to find domineering training, and they also bring Robin (not a buddy) along with them. I have read this plot in eight out of ten books. The only thing I can praise is that he is very proficient in filling water. It would be good to write more books. After all, writing more means making money faster. It's really hard work to be able to write an early Tutu-ryu Pirates fanfic with a classic FL flavor in this year. I would like to call it Renaissance👍

This writing is amazing! One thing keeps repeating, one fight keeps shocking and talking too much!

Pure running account. Stacking values, repeating the same plot, almost no characterization, fighting skills, and supporting characters with facial makeup. To be honest, if you can't, just buy an AI. AI is better than this

It's just a novel with a pirate skin. This template can be used not only for writing about pirates, but also for urban fantasy. And it's super watery...😅

After reading more than forty chapters, I feel that the plot of this book would be the same no matter what the story is. . .

As long as the protagonist's combat power is a little higher, there will be a lot of enemies that can overwhelm the protagonist. The protagonist always beats people, but he is just a little bit. He is either one level higher or the four emperors are chasing him, which is also quite boring. To be honest, unless the protagonist fights them relentlessly, they will kill the protagonist immediately and even ignore their own power. Only by constantly chasing the protagonist can it be possible. Don't read the manga first. The main character of Luffy fights every day and is constantly being chased. How could he be stupid? He will not hide from the limelight temporarily. Do you think that the Yonko, the general, is very idle and chases you every day? Why is it that the ocean is so big? It is too difficult to chase someone unless he is a person with territory like the Yonko. Otherwise, it is so outrageous. Look at how the red haired people grew up. Don't talk about whether he is a Celestial Dragon or not. When he was weak, I didn't believe that no boss could kill. If he really wanted to be a pirate, he wouldn't kill. I would dare to kill Luffy. As for the minions and the protagonist who met Luffy so hard, there were no shots of those who were defeated to show what happened to them. Ordinary people must be dead. There are cheats that suppress the combat power. It's really boring. These cheats are useless at first glance. It's a skill from another world. It's not a very outrageous skill. It's better to use a proficiency plug-in. Although the protagonist's skills can show the proficiency, but there is no trace. Those skills are completely like no progress. They exist to forcefully suppress the combat power. They are just to give the protagonist the so-called trust skills when he is about to die. It's really boring. No wonder your novel is not very popular.