Hinata Hokage

The content is step-by-step, the writing is smooth, the imagination is not very big, and the characters' psychological activities are not enough. The improvement points will be very interesting!

The writing is not good, the writing is bad. When the two brothers were talking, they said that the caged bird cannot be cancelled, and they immediately became crazy and murderous. Your character design is broken. You can write it like this, oh, I sighed silently in my heart, but writing it like you is too bad. In the original work, the relationship between the two brothers is not bad, and they have to deal with the family elders together later. Why are you so excited to write it? It's like two strangers, why can't it be written? Brother, then cry and talk

Looking at more than 200 well-behaved girls and more than 200 naughty little bastards, the father is holding the waist, and the mother of the child is so amazing.

If you want to seize power and become Hokage, other than a coup, the only option is to assassinate the third generation or directly join the Dai Mingfu and use the name of the Dai Ming to ascend to power. Are you too naive to want to be a war hero? Judging from the words and deeds of the third generation, he is a person based on the ninja school. He basically follows the second generation Hokage and even the first generation Hokage's policy of suppressing family ninjas. This is the natural nature of Hokage's rights. Especially there is Danzo who has no interest in Konoha at all. He would not hesitate to betray Konoha's interests to suppress Hinata. As long as you have Konoha's interests at heart, you can't fight him. Don't look at what this old guy says every day. In fact, nearly 1/4 of Konoha's ninjas died at his hands. Not to mention basic selection, the mortality rate is half as high, and there are countless others. Therefore, if Hinata wants to become Hokage, she can only kill F4 in a sudden coup and then make a lot of wishes to the officers or use the name of a higher level to suppress Hokage. Ordinary political methods cannot be used.

I want to say that many people say that Sarutobi's three thousand ninja army is a joke and a second-hand design. What I want to ask is, how many ninjas should there be in Konoha with one dozen four? The Iwagakure troops can be divided into two groups and can still produce 10,000 ninjas. Konoha's 30,000 or 40,000 ninjas are not too many, right? Among them, family ninjas account for half. There are more than 10,000 ninjas. If divided among each family, there should be nearly a thousand ninjas. Considering that Hatake Kurama Yuhi Mitarai Gekko and other ninja clans, there are only three or two big cats and kittens left, Uchiha only has a few hundred left, Sarutobi's three thousand ninja army should be said to be less, and Hinata's hundreds are even less.

Everything is fine. What surprises me the most is that you, a Hyuga clan leader, behave like a normal protagonist. You are called around and the clan leader has to go to the task every time? Every time I have to go there for something, Yuan Fei has to send you a task every time? You, the protagonist, are the patriarch of the clan. If the protagonist is an ordinary Hyuga, forget it. Every time I see the clan leader taking over on his own, I instantly feel that this protagonist is really not as good as if you had chosen an ordinary Hyuga in the first place. Then there would be more exciting things to write about.

There are no flaws in the plot of this book, or I can't see any flaws. It's just that the character creation doesn't have the flavor of Naruto, it's like the flavor of the cultivating family. I can only give it a full score of 70, neither above nor below, so it's generally readable.

There are already a few pictures, your strength is so exaggerated, and you are still wandering around. I am Yuan Fei and I will fuck you first.

I can't accept it. How can the clan agree to the intermarriage between the Hyuga clan leader and a foreign clan? Besides, Hinata and Hanabi are here, and Hanabi is small. Will Hinata remember her biological mother? Hinata is willing? Not a daughter slave? Also, the emotional line is too sudden, (Inuzuka Midori vs. Hiashi). I think it would be better if there is no female protagonist?

I read this title in a certain section of SouShu. Com, and the content is very explosive 🙂🙂🙂

The plot direction is okay for the time being, and there is no bad system It's just enough to watch.

I don't know if the author has ever seen Naruto. Before he had the ability to kill the Raikage absolutely instantly, he dared to take all the Hyuga clan to fight against the Kumo Ninja Village. This is such a fascinating operation. It can be said that the one who has the most special liking for Byakugan in the entire ninja world is the Fourth Raikage. Knowing that there are so many people in Hinata, the Fourth Raikage will definitely be the first to rush to the battlefield. Wouldn't the Raikage crush him as soon as he arrives?

What the hell are you writing about in the first 20 chapters? Inexplicably, it was written that the Hinata clan should fight against the Kumo ninja? What is the purpose?

Damn it, the Hyuga clan is a single lineage, where is the second elder? That old man is the father of Hyuga Hizashi and Hizashi. The previous patriarch

I've seen Shippuden in anime. Is there anything similar?

Will there be a female protagonist? Single and multiple nothing