Basketball: You Are the Chosen One

First of all, the description of the game is not passionate enough, or not so full. The dialogue between passers-by who do not have names such as A, B, C, and D, in fact, apart from making up the numbers, does not increase the sense of substitution. The author can enrich it appropriately, including classmates, teachers, or commentators. Cuba basically has these characters. This way the on-site atmosphere will be better. Secondly, there is the issue of the rhythm of the game. Although I understand the plot you want to write, the tension and atmosphere of chasing points or being in a close match are not quite as good. It just didn't feel right, including when we were cheering on the bench and we didn't even recognize him. I felt that he was very promising. If you are too far behind, or there is a tense point-chasing session or a highlight moment, it is really exciting. You can increase the atmosphere from the side, for example, when the protagonist scores consecutive goals. After that, the scene suddenly burst into cheers, but the protagonist did not relax. He quickly returned to the half court and stared at the ball seriously. The time was not over yet, and there was still a chance. At this time, everyone felt incredible because of his consecutive goals. The bench even cheered and shouted the protagonist's name. Although I don't write well, that's what I mean. I hope you understand. The author writes very seriously, and it can be seen that he is working hard. After reading the book, I am ready to invest. Cheers, author. If you think what I said is wrong, you can just delete the post, nothing will happen! 😊I just want to make some suggestions. There are fewer and fewer basketball articles nowadays. I quite like watching it.

Go next door and write. This is on the shelves at Qidian, not far from the eunuch.

It is stated at the beginning that the protagonist is a basketball fan. Why did the binding system become a fool? Do you have to write like that when you play guard and defense?

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Come on, boss, I wish you success as soon as possible

Brother, how come you only have more than ten people reading this book? This collection is unscientific.

In the first two chapters, the protagonist acted like a mentally retarded person. I don't like having a mentally retarded protagonist.

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I'm going to put it on the shelves the day after tomorrow. Have you come yet to test the waters?