Traveling Through Wu Dalang, Starting from the Development of Krypton Gold

After reading Chapter 5, let's talk about the good points first. The protagonist initially treats Pan Jinlian at a respectful distance, which is good. After all, not everyone wants to be a cuckold. Even if it doesn't happen now, thinking about the original work in which Pan Jinlian and Ximen Qing killed Wu Dalang will probably make them angry. Of course, because this is not the original work, you don't have to look at people with colored glasses all the time. The main thing is to watch the subsequent plot development. Secondly, there is nothing poisonous about the golden finger. After all, if a time traveler without a golden finger wants to gain momentum, luck and wisdom are indispensable. This is a test of the author's skill. Not every author can reasonably arrange opportunities for the protagonist. Being too deliberate is tantamount to "wishful thinking", which is very poisonous. In the end, the protagonist is doing pretty well at the moment. At least he has the courage to fight with thugs and win. Let's talk about the shortcomings. First of all, the increase in height of Golden Finger has nothing to do with strength. In other words, even if the protagonist is as tall as Godzilla or Ultraman, he still only has 100 kilograms of strength and weighs hundreds of thousands of tons. The result of 100 kilograms of strength must be total paralysis, the kind of plant-type paralysis that cannot even move his fingers, and will undoubtedly lead to death. Therefore, the result of the protagonist blindly increasing his height is that his strength becomes weaker and weaker, because the strength cannot carry the weight, his punches become slower, his movements become slower, and his turns become slower, and he becomes a human punching bag. Therefore, I personally suggest that the protagonist should add up his strength first, and then increase his height. Although each increase in height will reduce his strength, at least there will be no significant regression in strength. Also, don't make the interaction between the protagonist and the woman too modern. Ancient times are ancient times after all, and it is impossible for a single woman to go to a strange man's house late at night to show off her ambitions. In fact, even in modern times, there are not many such situations, and normal young people are still not that open-minded. Also, there were rules in ancient times, and maids could not be too free. They could go shopping if they wanted to, and spend the night out if they wanted to.

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The protagonist written by the author is a bit retarded. Firstly, Li Qing offended him and wrote many chapters but couldn't think of a way to kill him. He didn't have the brainpower to report the crime until his brother was dead. The government didn't care and knew that he couldn't beat him, but he rushed into the fight like a shrew and made himself bruised and swollen. Second: The plot was particularly retarded during the tiger hunt. The protagonist thought of a way to let strangers act as bait to attract the tigers. Then the protagonist makes a sneak attack from the side and asks why others agreed to be a bait for you and your brother to enjoy the harvest. What's the benefit of killing the tiger?

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If Wu Dalang becomes taller and more handsome, will he still be Wu Dalang? That's another novel.

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I have read a novel about the mythical Gao Yao before. The Gao Yao in it is not only tall, handsome, young and powerful, but he is also familiar with history and has a golden finger. He became a general from the very beginning. Then the book went cold. Reason: What the hell are you doing? !

It seems that your writing is not bad. Why is the water test effect so bad? More exciting than the first time I wrote a book

I don't like Wu Dalang who can become taller and more handsome because of this contrast. It's amazing that those who like handsome people can directly travel through time and become Yan Qing.

This book is okay, but why is the data not good?

Historically, there is a local county chronicle that records that Wu Dalang was a tall and mighty man and he and Pan Jinlian were a good couple.

Just riding a horse to recharge and sell cooking cakes is not a plot that a normal mind can come up with.

Author, your recommendation data is abnormal. Did you fail to pass one round of PK?

Wu Dalang is not ugly, and he is not short 🙄🙄🙄 It would feel better if he changed it

Have you ever traveled through Ximen Qing? Tell me the title of the book. Yang Simin's version of Ximen Qing is better.

Can the author help me write a script?

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How come this book has more than 500,000 words and only 80 book friends? Even if I open a small account myself, there are more than just these few readers.