Tokyo: Is This How You Fall in Love? !

It's just that the writing is too poor. In the first few dozen chapters, the writing is too discouraging and there is no interesting plot connection. It relies entirely on the protagonist's narcissistic emotional output but there is no contrast between the protagonist and the heroine. One heroine is the same as three people. Chapter 70, the fight for favor, is quite interesting. The characters are much more distinct, and it feels like a youth love story. I will support it by subscribing and looking forward to better stories.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

The previous plots are very good, but what are you worried about, author? This kind of book can only follow the daily route. Infinite tension in daily relaxation, school plots, family plots, shopping plots, dating plots, a lot of daily life stories. But you suddenly become possessed by a god of war. How can you use this thing to promote the plot? The heroine immediately felt cheap. The emotional stage jumped too quickly, the gap was too big, and the plot was so fragmented. I felt that if I couldn't grasp it in time later, I would probably finish this book.

I like this kind of strong and strong protagonist, bold and proactive, look at those gentle and hesitant Japanese-style protagonists who vomited, this book suits my taste, if you have a monthly ticket, I will definitely give you 1 vote, great

I can't watch it anymore when I see the heroine exiting and San Yuan appears. Maybe it's because I've been driving too many big cars recently and I can't watch anymore. Compared to driving a big car, I still like the daily life with the three heroines.

The more I read it, the weirder it gets. When I saw it released, I discovered that the closest relationship between the protagonist and the three women was that Kanbara accidentally bumped into the protagonist and slept in the same bed without doing anything. None of the three heroines even kissed. When I thought about it carefully, I realized that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is completely unilaterally driven by the male protagonist. The male protagonist is so strong that my thoughts are the same as those of the teacher in the novel. Don't give up the opportunity to become a national athlete and enter the world just because of a woman. What are the advantages of the three female protagonists? I didn't see it. I can't provide any positive help to the protagonist, and I have to ask the male protagonist to come to the rescue. He died several times without the male protagonist. The male protagonist usually does the meals. Whenever there is a problem, I hope that the male protagonist will be around and the male protagonist will really be there to help. And then he refuses when I ask for black stockings or something. This fucking thing, think carefully about the male protagonist. The protagonist has become a pure licker, and has to think about them in every possible way without getting any benefits. I think there is no need for the male protagonist to do it, after all, the world has always pushed them towards the male protagonist, instead of pushing the male protagonist towards them. And with the physique of the male protagonist, I can't imagine how they will end up with Brother Cheng, bombarded by Dongfeng Express?

I saw the latest one and was not interested in reading it. To put it bluntly, the male protagonist actually doesn't like them either. In the end, he just did it because he didn't want to die. At least I didn't see the male protagonist showing that he really liked them, and all he did for them was to save his life.

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I read more than a hundred chapters in one go. This book is really innovative. At least I haven't seen anything like it before. However, after ordering more than a dozen chapters, I started to feel a bit tired. Personally, I feel that the protagonist's mouth escape can be included but not in chapters. I can write more about the serious and reliable appearance. It is best not to use the mouth escape afterwards. Although the mouth escape is indeed different from For other novels, writing too much will really lead to a bit of aesthetic fatigue. In fact, the characterization of the male protagonist is enough, but the female protagonist has nothing memorable at all. Some plots can be used to show the different personal charms of the three female protagonists, so that the male protagonist can also feel the excellence of the female protagonist, and it is not just the reason for the end of the world that brings them together. Readers will only remember the heroine who has a shining point. Although it is very satisfying for the hero to save the heroine with personal heroism, it is really just a pleasure. If it is more exciting, it will be boring. It is clearly written well and makes people feel that it is watery. This may be part of the reason. As the plot progresses, the hero can show the vulnerability to the heroine that is completely different from his current confidence, letting the heroine know that the hero is What we are facing, being together is fate, and death is the shadow that keeps following. No matter how powerful the male protagonist is, the death of the law of cause and effect will always hang over the male protagonist's head like the sword of Damocles. At this time, the female protagonist who has a shining point can truly understand the male protagonist and accompany him to face it, support each other, and advance and retreat together. After that, being together is no longer because of the closing of the world line, but true love.

I originally thought it would be another mediocre Japanese light novel. But I caught up to the latest in one go. The writing is really interesting. It is joyful and invincible. It is a harem novel that can be accepted by old bookworms and newbies. I am very curious about the author's previous works. It is definitely not a newbie. Maintain the standard. Even if you only write a few hundred thousand words, I am willing to order all of them. After all, good books don't have to worry about the word count.

I'm a local dog, I like to see this kind of thing

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Advantages: Good imagination, the protagonist is not boring, and the pace is brisk. Disadvantages: The dialogue has a strong Chinese style, and the character design is somewhat lacking. For example, when the heroine speaks to the king of the protagonist's harem, she feels disgusted too quickly. Generally speaking, it is just for fun. Who would take it seriously? It feels like it's really a bit of a forced reversal.

Can you update it more? It's not enough to watch 😆😆😆

Author, you have been laying the groundwork for so long, and finally you managed to achieve a staged breakthrough, and you actually covered it in one stroke, which is outrageous. Can't you describe the kissing and touching of feet in detail? I just took it all in one stroke and it didn't taste like anything at all. All I can say is

The writing is very good, but unfortunately I am tired of the traffic of ponies and horses. When Ayane Yamamoto joined the battlefield in this way, I knew that my fate with this book was over.

Let's take a look at how Guan Guan describes the protagonist and the heroine. No matter how delicious the white rice is, you won't be able to swallow it if you eat too much.

Good guy, didn't you say you would write about your married life before? It's over like this

The plot of the love line was too awkward, and it all relied on the accidental succubus to lower her head. It's hard for the author Xiao Chunan 😏

I have been reading it for so long and I finished it in one day. . .

It's been a long time since I've seen such an exciting protagonist's character. I'll take it all in. In my eyes, the male protagonist's character is much more attractive than the female character.

It's really rare to see a real male protagonist like the protagonist.

I like the character, approach, and style of the host very much, but the plot is really unlikable.

There are only two daily urban novels that I have read that have a harem that is refreshing to watch. The first one is Chen Gou, and the second one is this one.

What did you write? I have always thought that the writing skills of light novel authors are not too bad. If you are an author with such writing style, you should give up writing online novels. I don't know where you got the confidence to publish the novel.

6. I just found out that you have a new book, but it was finished the next day.

The road is long and far away, I will search up and down😁

I've read Chapter 56 so far, and the male protagonist feels like the Chief of Tiandao.

After saving for a long time, I continued to read and why there was an extra saint?

When will the author open a group 😆