Lost in Hong Kong

The first chapter was amazing, the second chapter was very good, and the third chapter was so cool when I left the court, and then the system appeared, and I was stunned. Why bother, brother, it's a killer time travel and a system cheat. It's really a waste of your subject matter. I already have a tattoo on the back, why don't you write this? Moreover, this kind of combat power will not be easily broken, especially since Goldfinger has storage space, repair fluid, nano-clothes, and even electronic pulse weapons. . . This imposed system makes me feel super weird. It really is. . . It's hard to describe in one word.

Wherever I am comfortable and have money, that is my home. As a wage earner who can only go out to earn a living when I am a teenager, I never miss home.

I'm speechless, time travel is a problem. He also wanted a Kun girl as his girlfriend, and someone helped the pig's feet to be found not guilty by using mental illness for free, and then planned a robbery to save others. . Become a godfather and join the club. . . Even more speechless than the speechless mother who arrived home.

Or do you want to be a godfather to a gangster? Lu Bu, even slaves from three families are not as lowly as you. A true emperor carries a golden pole, right~

This book is such a pity. The author chose the wrong protagonist. The protagonist's girlfriend is a young lady. The key point is that she has feelings. She was born with a cuckold aura.

I don't understand, but I'm shocked. I have a job, money, and space, but I still want to be a gangster.

I only read the third chapter. I can't say it's poorly written, I can only say it's because the three views are inconsistent.

Blind glow

The protagonist's hobby and occupation are killers, and he obviously looks down on ordinary people. Traveling through Hong Kong TV series, the original girlfriend is a Phoenix in the building. At the beginning, the club came to the door and wiped them all out. The police actually charged him with murder? Acquitted. Then there is cheating, missing 3000 w. Then he came to the post and wrote more than ten chapters. Confused. 😰 Personally, I think that regardless of the plot, logic, three views, etc., The people of the motherland are more interesting than this.

You can tell at a glance, the AI ​​writer from Rotten Tomatoes is here, and it's a disgusting comparison

This book is not popular. To put it bluntly, it is a mess of righteousness and not enough righteousness and not enough evil and not enough evil.

Isn't it nice to be such a big guy, join the underworld, and be a warlord among various small kings in Southeast Asia?

I've watched the latest one and it's pretty good. Will there be this beauty in the next one? I recently looked for old movies to watch and found out that they are really good. It's just that many Hong Kong novels don't have her. It's just my personal aesthetic as shown in the picture

The ship hijacking was a failure! You have your own boat. After the accident, do you still dare anyone to play with it? Logic fails. It's the same reason that it's hard to sell a house that has been damaged.

Chapter one or two is good. What a mess at the beginning of Chapter 3

After reading more than ten chapters of talking to the old ghost, I couldn't stand it anymore. Modern people are telling a gangster about their previous incompetence. It's not like he is really incompetent, he still has 30 million in cash in hand. After finally clearing his identity, he broke away from the underworld, and got involved with the gang boss. After clearing his identity, the rich man stopped working, and went to join the underworld again, and it was all for nothing. It's not easy to get an ID card if you have the money. You have to go to the gangster to get it. Isn't that giving the clues to others?

The writing is lacking and some settings are inappropriate

I came across this self-help article again. .

I abandoned the book as soon as I got on the cruise ship. It had about 20 chapters. The summary is that the plot is incoherent and rambling. A third-rate killer in Southeast Asia turns into a dragon in a matter of seconds. In the end, the beauty only smiles at the young man from a listed company. Young and Dangerous? ? Rat in the gutter

The elementary school student who watched too much Young and Dangerous has graduated from junior high school.

I'm speechless. The heroine doesn't post any photos, but has to do various searches.

A gangster actually talks about relationships, a brother who can kill people

In Zhutianwen, I feel like the author has never been in love, and he doesn't know how to flirt with girls. He looks very embarrassed, and he doesn't know anything about life. It's so embarrassing that I almost got cancer. Only the first story can barely pass it.

When writing about Hong Kong dramas, I basically watch police and gangster movies. The upper limit must be controlled. The most physical body is a pistol and cannot be used for headshots. Others still have to hide, so crisis sensing must be present. The role of hanging is to ensure a retreat. The force value cannot be used as a super model, and it can be used as the god of death, but it cannot clear monsters in the whole screen. As long as the supermodel is basically bound to collapse, what should we do? All we can do is patch it, add maps, and add monsters, and then the novel will basically fail.

It's written without feeling, and I don't want to read it for free.

Seeking refinement and understanding

You might as well just let me watch TV again

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The choice of Blind Hui was not good. She is the protagonist. She has a good relationship with a prostitute. If you are upset after watching the mobile unit, you can choose another protagonist. You can also help Blind Hui. You have to be the protagonist in person. Haha,

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