Siheyuan: Damn It, I Have Become Xu Damao!

This book is not going to be popular. I told you to quit in the first chapter.

What did you write? A good projectionist at a steel rolling mill becomes a commune member?

Traveling through Xu Damao, the chicken was stolen at the beginning, but he was handled lightly? According to the traditional courtyard setting, Damao's body has been wiped out, so how can he come back? Don't tell me that Damao is an extinct family? Don't say it was not broken by Silly Pillar. Two thousand copies of Siheyuan said it was, so that's it. It depends on what you do in the future. Don't make all the good people become bad and get annoyed.

Just cut it. 90% Of people ran away after reading the first chapter.

Please check more information. This is too unrealistic and false.

Why does the author start by letting the protagonist lick Yi Zhonghai? I can't stand it!

Licking my vagina when I come up makes me drunk

What a bullshit! Xu Damao is from the publicity department of the steel rolling mill. You should at least understand him clearly. You know in those days, you could detect bits just because you ate braised pork, so what are you doing?

It's difficult to write a story about stealing a chicken at the beginning. It should start when Xu Damao just got married✍🏻 Then there will be more room for maneuver. After stealing a chicken, the hatred can no longer be wiped away. In the first chapter, you played with the first uncle, in the second chapter, you got a chicken stolen, in the sixth chapter, you were reported by the whole hospital, and then you were blocked by the third uncle from getting promoted and made a fortune, and you even played with him for three chapters. You have such a twisted character.

I don't know anything about that era, well, it's okay if I don't know, but if I know a little, it feels really awkward to look at it.

If you don't know the background of the era, just watch the TV series and write random things! This is the Internet age, and information shouldn't be that hard to find!

Xu Damao must have written it after 1976, otherwise there is no bad meaning. It would be interesting to write about how to defraud Lou Xiaoe of all his money and take revenge. Let her know what it means to regret cheating on a fool.

Let's not put aside the problem that the details of the story are too poorly handled. Siheyuan generally pays attention to fun. If you have a grudge, you can report it on the spot. You are either pretending or retaliating against the beasts all day long, which makes people feel happy physically and mentally. What you wrote seems aggrieved, and you are just being aggrieved. When it is time to fight back openly or take revenge, you will wither. When the beasts reported you, why did you not sue them after proving your innocence? At least those few will have to go in for a few days until they vomit their food. If there is no punishment for making random reports, then you can also report them. Whose ass has no shit? Why bother to report some of the ones that are there but still have them go crazy? Anyway, there is no punishment. Then, your wife was pregnant and was drugged by Jia Zhang. Forget it tomorrow! As for the day after tomorrow, the day after tomorrow, are you waiting for the child to be born in the blink of an eye, and waiting for the child to grow up to take revenge and come back? With your attitude, children can be born with ghosts, trash snacks, and I can't stand it anymore Not to mention revenge on the spot, but these things are all done to cripple the protagonist. That is, in real life, if you don't make it difficult for them on the spot, you are a useless person, and you can say that you will be bullied to death for the rest of your life. People will say when they see you, look at that so-and-so who has been treated like that by everyone before, and he is easy to bully.

Use your current thinking to commit suicide in that era! We haven't seen much yet, but there are already several points where we can see the protagonist being sent away as an enemy agent!

I have been poisoned by this book. The first three chapters are three poisonous. The system clearly deals with right and wrong without giving rewards. If you find out that a child secretly said that the child is greedy, there will be no accountability.

What did you write about, and who is Ang Lee? You have traveled through time and returned it to Ang Lee

It makes people feel uncomfortable after reading it. Writing a novel like this makes people feel troubled.

The male protagonist is Xu Damao! You actually went to lick Yi Zhonghai and the deaf old lady! Do you think if you lick them, they will be nice to you? Don't be too wishful thinking and change the plot according to your own wishes. It will be completely opposite to the original character in the original drama. It will be too inconsistent! I was not in the mood to continue reading.

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