Ferry to the Heavens: Starting with Blue Eyes and Square Pupils

Can you write Mandarin well? Is it only for my friends in Hong Kong? My friend, you have to know that there are more mainlanders, but the mainlanders you write don't understand, so go learn Mandarin.

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The writing is too showy, the story is too mysterious, and it lacks the pace of the novel.

There is no job that should taste like that, and the dialogue is too literary and youthful. Humanistic youth will not read your novel. Why bother? It is just to impress yourself.

It's a bit uncomfortable to have new ideas, not copied well, and there are problems with the hybridization. The first Red Dead Redemption plus Magic Reform Da Qing plus the movie Double Eyes is actually okay, but the dialogue is neither Chinese nor Western, and the fusion is not good.

If it is well written, it will be popular. The Ascension of the Five Hells in Double Eyes is very useful.

This book is good in every aspect, but it's too wordy and a little bit arrogant.

It's been too long to tell a story, where's the point? It makes people look impatient.

Where did the great master come from? This writing is so sophisticated.

I've just read a few chapters, and the rest are good. The bandit's words are too literate, and it's not like what a bandit can say.

Great book, keep writing this book and you will become popular.

Surprisingly good. The writing is very good. More to come 🙂

I feel like I'm a bird. The author's writing is very good.

Isn't it updated?🙂

Why does this bandit speak so politely? ? Don't understand