Becoming an Immortal Through Comprehensive Cultivation in Hong Kong

When it comes to writing plots, why don't we go watch a movie? If we write about He Min and don't accept it, then why write it out? Either there won't be a female protagonist in your genre, or you'll just write a few and collect a few. Writing like this directly abandons many readers.

Because it is a new book by a newcomer, there are currently very few comments. The few comments are all about why the protagonist does not accept He Min and Li Yu, but also writes about them, as if there is no female protagonist. First of all, as I said at the beginning, the protagonist had 5 girlfriends at the same time before traveling through time. How could he become a saint after traveling through time? The protagonist must have a girlfriend, and there are quite a few of them. Secondly, why should female characters who are not included be described? Because it has to serve the subsequent plot. For example, I wrote about He Min for Zhou Xingxing. I definitely wrote more about Zhou Xingxing than about He Min. I wrote Li Yu to lead to the subsequent plot later. If all the women described by the protagonist are to be accepted, then should the protagonist's cousin Chen Zhaodi also be accepted? She has more descriptions than He Min. See one and accept one. The protagonist is not Neptune but an animal. It is still an animal in estrus. The protagonist I want to write may be an emotional Neptune, but he will not be an animal in heat.

The last girl is still coquettishly there, why are you pretending to be a eunuch?

I read a few chapters and it was pretty good, so I asked if I could let this beauty appear. I recently watched her in the female robot and Dahao Guang Changlong, and I was deeply impressed. I searched a lot and felt that Hong Kong TV series had never written about her, as shown in the picture

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See Chapter 10 and keep introducing Goldfinger! Instead of making it all fancy, we might as well just build a system! I don't even understand what the protagonist is going to do! If you want to be good and evil, just report Da Fei and it will be over! You went to school to be a teacher, thinking you were going to date He Min, but in the end, He Min followed Zhou Xingxing. Then what was the purpose of going to school?😥

What did you write? Chirping, Waiwai, babbled eight times.

The writing is a bit messy. I suggest the author read it after finishing it. There are many places that are a bit strange.

When I was with Zhou Xingxing, I always did some funny things 😅

Sea Demon is also very beautiful

I read seven chapters. . . . . . Basically, it explains the past and present situation of the protagonist. . . . . . If I write this book at this pace, I guess no one will read it.

The subject matter is very good, and the main character and supporting characters are also very good when you want to express them. But it is too clumsy, and the ink is so stained that you feel like you want to use several sections of paper to write about them going to the toilet.

Did the author write this after reading "Becoming a Legend in Hong Kong"? The style is quite similar, but the movie selected at the beginning is a bit biased (not only the movie is biased, but the beauty is biased as well).

Lao Se Pi is the third productive force

There is too much nonsense that does not advance the plot after it is released, and I have no idea what the point of writing is.

Don't know how to post pictures yourself? Author

After reading Chapter 16, it was really boring. There was basically no progress in the plot. After working on it for a long time, I finally got an entry-level golden bell.

The novel is good! Why are there so few comments?

No, what do you think when you say that the protagonist doesn't accept Li Yu? Chen Derong was only 16 years old when he filmed his senior brother's encounter with a ghost. Did he ask the protagonist to take in an underage girl?

It's right to start a harem in Hong Kong and fall in love

I just added it to the bookshelf and before I had time to read it, you told me it was over 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

Not bad, not bad, author, keep at it

Mindless, I don't know what to say

You have come to the wrong channel. A bunch of modern people are practicing immortality. Becoming an immortal is so easy. Uncle Jiu has already become an immortal.

It is also very hard for the author to write novels. Don't give a bunch of bad reviews there. It will ruin the reputation of others. The writing is not bad. How come you are the trolls hired by others?